Chapter~11 the fight!
Eddie thrust into Loren and Loren screams
Then they walk in.
Mel: Oh My God?! i'm sooo sorry
Mel turns away while Ian still Looks
Eddie: What The Fuck! Ian. Mel. get out and what up comeing in here!
Mel: well we heard Loren scream and we came in here and ya.
Ian: well. Well Well someone had fun now didn't they oh Eddie what have you done no condom? huh. (sarcasticly)
Loren: Eddie i told you someone was here!
Eddie: well…. it's not my falute i didn't know so just shut up god! You are giving me a head ache! and not to menchion your being a bitch!
Loren: Mel, Ian can i have moment with Eddie alone
Mel: ya we'll be on the beach.
With tht Mel and Ian left
Loren got up with the blankets took her engagement ring off and through it at Eddie, then ran in the bath room
Eddie Picked up the ring and looked confuesed
Eddies POV
what just happened? Did i say something wrong? Oh God! i said shut up and she gives me a head ache. God what else did i say? Ahh Shit! I called her a bitch! Danm! Danm! Danmit! ( End of Eddies thoughs )
Eddie gets up and walkes to the door and walkes in
Eddie sees Loren sitting in the corner on the ground crying
Eddie: Loren i'm soo soo sooooo sorry i didn't mean anything just Ian got on my nerves. please forgive me babe please
Loren: Eddie… I-I… I can't do this anymore you loose you temper too easly i'm sorry i just can't do this
Eddie: Loren noo please don't do this to me. To us
Loren: Eddie you know that i love you so much that i would probly kill myself with out you. but for right know can you just give me some room
Eddie: yes do you need any thing else
Loren: all i need is for you to leave ok so can you just listen for once and get the Hell out!
Eddie: yes
Eddie left the bathroom and got some shorts and a tanktop with some sandals and went out in the kitchen and made some lunch for Loren
Loren walked out of the bathroom and changed into some neon green booty shorts and a strapless bikini top with high heel sandals
Loren walked out into the kitchen and she noticed Eddie had a grilled cheese sandwich in the shape of a heart and a rose and Eddie was waiting for her
Loren: i know what your doing and i have to say it's helping
Eddie: Loren look i know what i have done and i'm so sorry can we forget this ever happened
Loren: well after you help me eat this grilled cheese sandwich i'm going to the boardwalk
Eddie: in that! ( he notices her clothes)
Loren: ya why are you gonna beet me to death with your hard ass words again
Eddie: no never again bt i want you all to my self and this is not helping me
Loren: ya i've noticed ( Loren blusses when she looks down)
Eddie: SHIT umm i'll be back i need a shower
Loren: no i'll just sit on your lap
Eddie: Loren can you just forgive me
Loren: not right now maby tonite
Loren goes and sits in Eddies lap and she bite the sndwich and mouns
Loren: mmmmmmmmm
Eddie: ok Lo thats not helping
Loren: ya i can feel it but it's ok i like it
Eddie: ok Lo your scaring me are you ok
Loren: yes i'm fine no go take a shower and hurry cuz i'm leaveing to go to the boardwalk in 15 minutes so unless your fine with guys hitting on me hurry up
Eddie: ok ok i'm going tell me if Ian comes back
Loren: trust me he won't i texted Mel and told her to witfor us so you can kkick his ass and i really want to see it
Eddie: trust me i will. That muther fucker is dead he saw your boobes i will kill him
Loren: He Saw My BOOBES!
Eddie: yes he did
Loren: ok just hurry
10 minutes later
Eddie: Ok Lo i'm done.
Loren: good lets go
Loren and Eddie started to walk outside
Eddie: Hey Lo what if you walked out to the board walk and make it look like your single and see how many guy will go for you
Loren: cool lets try
Loren walks to the boardwallk and so many guys were staring at her
Man: Um excuse me but are you doing anything later.
Loren: Loren um yes i'am
Man: will and well Here's my number but any way come on walk with me
Loren: um i'm sorry but i'm taken sorry
Will: well waht kind of man leaves this beautiful woman unattended
Loren blushes
Loren: well we got in a fight and he called me a bitch
Will: thats not right
Loren: ya
Will: well come with me and we'll talk
Loren: Well he could come looking for me
Will: well he's not here now
Loren: ok
Will extendes his and a loren takes it
Eddie doesn't like what he see so he goes over to Loren and pulls her away
Eddie: Loren?! What the Hell!?
Loren: Eddie! I-I…. I'm so sorry
Will: so This is the guy that said those mean thing to you
Eddie: what!?
With that will punched Eddie in the face and Eddie fell to the ground.
Loren: EDDIE! dude what the hell!
Will: well he sai that stuff to you
Loren: i love him an we made up
Will: i dont care and i bet your loyers suck so i'm good
Loren: no and by the way our loyers will be on your ass like grass
Will: oh sure
Loren: and i hope you know who you just hit
Will: and who may that be
Loren: Eddie Duran
Will: What?! (in a scared voice)
Loren: yep now run you little pussy
With that will ran away
Loren tried to pick Eddie up but she couldn't so she called mel
Mel: hey lo whats up
Loren: hey mel can you and Ian come to the boardwalk Eddie got knocked out by some guy
Mel: ya we'll be right there
Loren: ok thanks
10 minutes later
Mel: we're here
Ian: Wow! Ed man went down
Loren: ya he did now that i think about it, it was funny but sad
Ian: ya so sad it's funny
Loren: prity much
Mel: god can we just stop talking and get him home
Loren: ya lets go
1 hour later
Mel: god Eddie i think having this much muscle is a bad thing he's so heavy
Ian: you got that right love
Loren: ya
Mel: and to think how much you guys "play" `you'd think he'd be skiny
Ian: god danm mate, you must get a lot of action
Loren: Ian you know he can't hear you and maby he gets alot of action and maby he doesn't
Mel: from what we saw today it looked like he did same with you
Loren: shut up
Ian: oh thank god we're here Loren where do you want him
Loren: on our bed thanks
they all brough Eddie to the bed
Ian: Mel why don't e go out for dinner and a movie so Loren can tri to wake Eddie up
Mel: sure but lo is it ok if we go i don't want to leave you
Loren: no it's ok
10 minutes later Ian and Mel left
Loren: Ok Eddie how can i wake you up.
Loren lays down next to Eddie and kisses him. that doesn't work so Loren slaps him in the face. still doeesn't gets up and jumps on Eddies stomach. Eddie wakes up
Eddie: what the hell Lo oh god danm my stomach hurts
Loren: well you didn't wake up so i had to i salped you in the face but you didn't wake up
Eddie: did you get our lawyers on the phone yet
Loren: no that guy ran away in tarrior so we're good
Eddie: Lo i love you
Loren: i love you too hey babe where's my ring
Eddie: well when you took it off and gave it back to me I-I
Loren: Eddie…. wheres the ring
Eddie:….
Loren: Eddie please tell me where my ring is
Eddie: Lo i'm so sorry…
Loren: EDDIE WHERE IS IT!
Eddie: Lo i-
Loren: Oh really you lost it Eddie…
Eddie: i didn't lose it
Loren: then where is it
Eddie: Lo when you did that i kind of throw it out in to the sand
Loren: Eddie why did you do that
Eddie: lo i'm so sorry and i'll go look for it right now
Loren: no eddie just forget about it. i'm gonna go make something for dinner
Loren left and Eddie snuck out and went to find the ring
Eddie: where the hell is that ring
Eddie sees an little girl holding the ring. so he walkes up to her
Eddie: exxcues me little girl..
Girl: OMG EDDIE DURAN I'M LIKE YOUR BIGGEST FAN CAN I HAVE YOUR AUTOGRAPH!
Eddie: yes but you see that ring you see i lost it it's my feances can i please have it back
Girl: yes here you go but can i get a picture
Eddie: yes
Eddie took a picture with that girl and he got his ring back then went inside to find Loren sitting on the cough crying…
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~ Littlespankie A Leddie Lover For Life!
