Chapter~11 the fight!

Eddie thrust into Loren and Loren screams

Then they walk in.

Mel: Oh My God?! i'm sooo sorry

Mel turns away while Ian still Looks

Eddie: What The Fuck! Ian. Mel. get out and what up comeing in here!

Mel: well we heard Loren scream and we came in here and ya.

Ian: well. Well Well someone had fun now didn't they oh Eddie what have you done no condom? huh. (sarcasticly)

Loren: Eddie i told you someone was here!

Eddie: well…. it's not my falute i didn't know so just shut up god! You are giving me a head ache! and not to menchion your being a bitch!

Loren: Mel, Ian can i have moment with Eddie alone

Mel: ya we'll be on the beach.

With tht Mel and Ian left

Loren got up with the blankets took her engagement ring off and through it at Eddie, then ran in the bath room

Eddie Picked up the ring and looked confuesed

Eddies POV

what just happened? Did i say something wrong? Oh God! i said shut up and she gives me a head ache. God what else did i say? Ahh Shit! I called her a bitch! Danm! Danm! Danmit! ( End of Eddies thoughs )

Eddie gets up and walkes to the door and walkes in

Eddie sees Loren sitting in the corner on the ground crying

Eddie: Loren i'm soo soo sooooo sorry i didn't mean anything just Ian got on my nerves. please forgive me babe please

Loren: Eddie… I-I… I can't do this anymore you loose you temper too easly i'm sorry i just can't do this

Eddie: Loren noo please don't do this to me. To us

Loren: Eddie you know that i love you so much that i would probly kill myself with out you. but for right know can you just give me some room

Eddie: yes do you need any thing else

Loren: all i need is for you to leave ok so can you just listen for once and get the Hell out!

Eddie: yes

Eddie left the bathroom and got some shorts and a tanktop with some sandals and went out in the kitchen and made some lunch for Loren

Loren walked out of the bathroom and changed into some neon green booty shorts and a strapless bikini top with high heel sandals

Loren walked out into the kitchen and she noticed Eddie had a grilled cheese sandwich in the shape of a heart and a rose and Eddie was waiting for her

Loren: i know what your doing and i have to say it's helping

Eddie: Loren look i know what i have done and i'm so sorry can we forget this ever happened

Loren: well after you help me eat this grilled cheese sandwich i'm going to the boardwalk

Eddie: in that! ( he notices her clothes)

Loren: ya why are you gonna beet me to death with your hard ass words again

Eddie: no never again bt i want you all to my self and this is not helping me

Loren: ya i've noticed ( Loren blusses when she looks down)

Eddie: SHIT umm i'll be back i need a shower

Loren: no i'll just sit on your lap

Eddie: Loren can you just forgive me

Loren: not right now maby tonite

Loren goes and sits in Eddies lap and she bite the sndwich and mouns

Loren: mmmmmmmmm

Eddie: ok Lo thats not helping

Loren: ya i can feel it but it's ok i like it

Eddie: ok Lo your scaring me are you ok

Loren: yes i'm fine no go take a shower and hurry cuz i'm leaveing to go to the boardwalk in 15 minutes so unless your fine with guys hitting on me hurry up

Eddie: ok ok i'm going tell me if Ian comes back

Loren: trust me he won't i texted Mel and told her to witfor us so you can kkick his ass and i really want to see it

Eddie: trust me i will. That muther fucker is dead he saw your boobes i will kill him

Loren: He Saw My BOOBES!

Eddie: yes he did

Loren: ok just hurry

10 minutes later

Eddie: Ok Lo i'm done.

Loren: good lets go

Loren and Eddie started to walk outside

Eddie: Hey Lo what if you walked out to the board walk and make it look like your single and see how many guy will go for you

Loren: cool lets try

Loren walks to the boardwallk and so many guys were staring at her

Man: Um excuse me but are you doing anything later.

Loren: Loren um yes i'am

Man: will and well Here's my number but any way come on walk with me

Loren: um i'm sorry but i'm taken sorry

Will: well waht kind of man leaves this beautiful woman unattended

Loren blushes

Loren: well we got in a fight and he called me a bitch

Will: thats not right

Loren: ya

Will: well come with me and we'll talk

Loren: Well he could come looking for me

Will: well he's not here now

Loren: ok

Will extendes his and a loren takes it

Eddie doesn't like what he see so he goes over to Loren and pulls her away

Eddie: Loren?! What the Hell!?

Loren: Eddie! I-I…. I'm so sorry

Will: so This is the guy that said those mean thing to you

Eddie: what!?

With that will punched Eddie in the face and Eddie fell to the ground.

Loren: EDDIE! dude what the hell!

Will: well he sai that stuff to you

Loren: i love him an we made up

Will: i dont care and i bet your loyers suck so i'm good

Loren: no and by the way our loyers will be on your ass like grass

Will: oh sure

Loren: and i hope you know who you just hit

Will: and who may that be

Loren: Eddie Duran

Will: What?! (in a scared voice)

Loren: yep now run you little pussy

With that will ran away

Loren tried to pick Eddie up but she couldn't so she called mel

Mel: hey lo whats up

Loren: hey mel can you and Ian come to the boardwalk Eddie got knocked out by some guy

Mel: ya we'll be right there

Loren: ok thanks

10 minutes later

Mel: we're here

Ian: Wow! Ed man went down

Loren: ya he did now that i think about it, it was funny but sad

Ian: ya so sad it's funny

Loren: prity much

Mel: god can we just stop talking and get him home

Loren: ya lets go

1 hour later

Mel: god Eddie i think having this much muscle is a bad thing he's so heavy

Ian: you got that right love

Loren: ya

Mel: and to think how much you guys "play" `you'd think he'd be skiny

Ian: god danm mate, you must get a lot of action

Loren: Ian you know he can't hear you and maby he gets alot of action and maby he doesn't

Mel: from what we saw today it looked like he did same with you

Loren: shut up

Ian: oh thank god we're here Loren where do you want him

Loren: on our bed thanks

they all brough Eddie to the bed

Ian: Mel why don't e go out for dinner and a movie so Loren can tri to wake Eddie up

Mel: sure but lo is it ok if we go i don't want to leave you

Loren: no it's ok

10 minutes later Ian and Mel left

Loren: Ok Eddie how can i wake you up.

Loren lays down next to Eddie and kisses him. that doesn't work so Loren slaps him in the face. still doeesn't gets up and jumps on Eddies stomach. Eddie wakes up

Eddie: what the hell Lo oh god danm my stomach hurts

Loren: well you didn't wake up so i had to i salped you in the face but you didn't wake up

Eddie: did you get our lawyers on the phone yet

Loren: no that guy ran away in tarrior so we're good

Eddie: Lo i love you

Loren: i love you too hey babe where's my ring

Eddie: well when you took it off and gave it back to me I-I

Loren: Eddie…. wheres the ring

Eddie:….

Loren: Eddie please tell me where my ring is

Eddie: Lo i'm so sorry…

Loren: EDDIE WHERE IS IT!

Eddie: Lo i-

Loren: Oh really you lost it Eddie…

Eddie: i didn't lose it

Loren: then where is it

Eddie: Lo when you did that i kind of throw it out in to the sand

Loren: Eddie why did you do that

Eddie: lo i'm so sorry and i'll go look for it right now

Loren: no eddie just forget about it. i'm gonna go make something for dinner

Loren left and Eddie snuck out and went to find the ring

Eddie: where the hell is that ring

Eddie sees an little girl holding the ring. so he walkes up to her

Eddie: exxcues me little girl..

Girl: OMG EDDIE DURAN I'M LIKE YOUR BIGGEST FAN CAN I HAVE YOUR AUTOGRAPH!

Eddie: yes but you see that ring you see i lost it it's my feances can i please have it back

Girl: yes here you go but can i get a picture

Eddie: yes

Eddie took a picture with that girl and he got his ring back then went inside to find Loren sitting on the cough crying…

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~ Littlespankie A Leddie Lover For Life!