Alright here's chapter 11 and I hope you like it don't forget to vote on my poll on my profile page. sorry for the long wait.
Ravenpaw's POV.
I woke up and saw that all of the nests in the apprentice den was full except for Featherkit's nest. She always woke up right before or exactly at dawn. I walked out and saw Featherkit eating a shrew. I quickly walked up to my sister. I grabbed a sparrow and started eating it before I spoke.
"So how's your training Featherpaw?" I asked still chewing a bit of sparrow.
"Great how's yours?" Featherpaw asked me back.
"Great. So I hear that you've completed all of your battle training on the first day."
"Yeah. I'm now learning the right technichs for hunting. Then I'll be able to have my warriors ceremony."
"That's great!" I said enthusiasticly. I am happy for my sister and I love her but I can't believe that she might be a warrior before me.
Back in Thunderclan... Cinderpelt's POV.
"I can't believe this happened to her, especially Brairpaw. I don't know what's wrong with her but I intent to find out. Maybe I can fix her." I think to myself as I start going through my herbs to see what might help Briarpaw. "I could go to Littlecloud and see if he has any remedies."
"Cinderpelt, can I come in and see Briarpaw?"
"Of course Firestar. Come right on in." I said and I carefully checked Brairpaw over.
"Cinderpelt, I was thinking maybe we should take Briarpaw to my daughter's clan. Maybe her medicine cat can fix her." Firestar said.
"I don't know, If Briarpaw did go there suppose she wanted to stay there?" I asked knowing that it would kill Graystripe, Millie, Blossompaw and Bumblepaw to know that their sister wanted to stay in a different clan.
"That's just a chance we'll have to take. Brairpaw would be crushed if she couldn't hunt or fight with her sisters. I just know that maybe Leafstar could save her. And I want to see my daughter." Firestar said his eyes shone with anxiety over his daughter.
"Maybe you're right, I mean It couldn't hurt. Let's do it." I said.
"Thank you Cinderpelt. We'll leave tomorrow at dawn. I'll gather up a patrol to help carry Briarpaw to Leafclan. I think Sandstorm, Sorreltail, Ivypool, and Dustpelt should come with us. You're coming too, right?" He asked.
"Of course. My apprentice Whitepaw knows all the herbs and remedies. It would also be a good test to see if she's ready for her full name. I'll let Whitepaw know while you tell the clan where we're going, why, and the warriors you want to come with us." I said.
"Alright. I'll go tell the clan." Firestar said and with that my forbidden love walked away.
Firestar's POV.
"Cats of Thunderclan gather around the Highledge for an announcement." I waited as the clan gathered. Then I continued " I will be leaving with Cinderpelt and Briarpaw to go on a journey to see about fixing her legs. We'll be back. Brambleclaw you're in charge. I want Sandstorm, Sorreltail, Ivypool and Dustpelt to come with me. We were going to leave tomorrow at dawn but I have changed my mind we will be leaving at sunhigh. I wi-"
"What about us? Shouldn't we go on this journey too?" Millie shouted at me.
"Millie I understand your concerns but no. This journey will be dangerouse and I need you, your mate, and your kits here so you can help Brambleclaw with the patrols and everything. I know that you want to come but you should stay here...Besides I can tell that you're expecting another litter." I said.
Millie sat down "Alright, the journey will probably hurt my kits. I will stay. Have a safe Journey." she said. I nodded to her showing my appreciation.
"Dustpelt, Sandstorm, Ivypool, and Sorreltail go to Cinderpelt's den to get traveling herbs. Whitepaw you're in charge of healing our clan until we have come back. The clan is desmissed."I said. I quickly walked into the Medicine Den and lapped up my leaves.
"Let's go." I said and we quickly headed out of the thorn tunnel and soon out of Thunderclan Territory. We were on our way with Briarpaw being carried on Dustpelt's back. She lay there limply and I felt sorry for the young and Spirited she-cat.
Leafstar's POV.
" My father is comming? When? Right now?" I murmered. I was in starclan's forest and Bluestar was speaking to me.
"Yes. But he is carrying an injured she-cat. And Shadedfawn knows how to fix her. But I cannot say anymore. It's time for you to wake up. Your clan is being attacked by Cloudclan." Bluestar said and with that I woke up and yowled the alarm. Everyone was up and out of their nests by the time Cloudclan came into view.
"Cloudstar, You have brought your clan here why?" I asked my voice cold as ice and my star hard as flint.
"We're here to claim what's rightfully ours." He snarled but I could hear a hint of fear in his voice and see fear in his eyes but they were gone before I could confront him on why he was here to battle when he was scared of me. He had Nine lives. I knew that much.
I crouched down and watched him intently. For I knew something about him and he knew it too. He was a murderer and now was my time to stop him from murdering any more innocent cats. I leaped with the force of Lionclan and battered at his ears and back and somehow managed to get Cloudstar on his stomach and I quickly dug in my claws and ripped open his stomach. I saw him flail and snarl at me but I was quickly pushed off by one of his cats Shadowclaw and I faought him with the swiftness of Leopardclan. I quickly made him surrender and spun around to face my old enemy... Deathclaw. He had tried to kill my once and I knew that Starclan would judge him. I leaped, spun in the air and landed on him. Deathclaw had earned his name by telling Cloudstar that he had killed me when he didn't Cloudstar found out about this at a gathering. I now scratched his neck and watched one of Cloudclan's best fighters go down. He had tried to kill me, murdered one of my warriors and now justice was done.
"Cloudstar I do believe that you're the only one left in the clearing. Leafclan Warriors suround him. It's high time I made him pay for what he has done to me. As you might have heard Mistkit was lost. But the truth comes out now. Cloudstar killed Mistkit for he was trying to hurt me. I showed up as soon as he was about to kill the others and jumped at him. He may have you think he has all nine lives but as soon as I saw him standing over Mistkit's body I leaped and killed him. That is how he lost his first life and why he is now afraid of me." My warriors snarled at the leader and let me get into the circle. "Your time as a murderous leader is over." I snarled deep and low. I then showed my teeth and sank them into his throat I stood back and watched him die eight times. The battle was over and My clan has won. Then all I saw was black in my vision.
In Starclan...
"Bluestar did I just lose my first life?" I asked as soon as I saw her.
"No but look around do you see someone you care about?" Bluestar said.
I looked around and soon saw a tiny little cat standing beside Snowfur, Bluestar's sister.
"Mistkit is that you?" I asked in wonder.
"Mamma!" came an excited squeak as my little Mistkit bounded over to me.
"Mistkit I've missed you so much!" I practicly yowled.
"Leafstar as you may have known it was not Mistkit's time to die and I want to send her back to you. She will come back to you as a warrior apprentice. Isn't that what you want Mistkit?" Bluestar said.
"Yes Bluestar." Mistkit said and right in front of me she grew into an apprentice.
"Then by the powers of Starclan and powers of a leader I give this kit the name Mistpaw and send her back with her mother to Leafclan." Bluestar touched noses with Mistpaw and everything grew fuzzy. I woke up to find myself in a nest with my one and only white kit born so far curled up beside me.
"Mistpaw, Mistpaw wake up." I said gently as I prodded her shoulder with a paw.
Mistpaw slowly opened her brilliant blue eyes and looked at me. "Mamma!" she cried. I started purring as Mistpaw rubbed up against me.
Okay so a little bit of a mushy ending but I think it was a good ending. Mistpaw is back and Leafstar is happy. Review and tell me what you think! Thanks
~Mistystar253
