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Black. That's all I see. It's nothing like the dream I had. The dream felt like I was alone, and so does this, but here, i'm stuck. I'm unable to move. I notice i'm in my body, and I hear faint voices. I feel cold. In the dream which I miraculasly forgot about far too quickly, I was able to get up and move around in an open space. I knew for a fact, although it was pitch black, I was stuck. In a small room. I didn't breath, or so I thought. I couldn't speak. What could I do? Nothing. Not a single thing what so ever. Even thinking wasn't an option, for I felt blank minded. My sences weren't shut off, but my mind was. I sat unaware of a single thing around me, yet fully aware. How could I do this? I was probably having some kind of a moment. A stopped in time moment. Or very slowly moving time moment.

A light appeared, from what seemed like wherever the sky would be. I apperently wasn't in a small room. It shown directly upon me. I stared into it. A rush came over me. I still wasn't able to move, but I was able to think. My mind flooded with worrys. I hadn't the slightest ideas if they were actually mine. The worrys jumped from the worry of almost being hit while on my bike by a read slug bug convertible, to almost not sniping some one on black ops. Then my own true mind hit me like a bullet. These were the worrys I had throughout my life. Every single one. The light kept on shining on me. It came from a hole far above. I thought I almost had the feeling in my body back, but no. it was still limp.

I reminised on what I had to worry about. It flew past me in my mind. All of it. Every moment of my life, not just worrys anymore, no. every moment. It seemed to pass me like a screen. Every time I had a "Life moment" it slowed down to let me be nostalgic over such a thing, so worthy of it. Nostalgia hurts. It helps, but it hurts. Then, it slowed down the most to let me see something I only now realized I cared oh so much about. More than anything i've ever cared for. Dashie. I saw her smile at me. I saw her sleeping on my couch. I remembered how I promised revenge for the slightest thing of trying to stop dashie. My little dashie. I lay waiting, waiting for something to keep me from going insane over the pain. The pain of knowing I wasn't with dashie. I remember how I jumped out the window. I hadn't even got a good glance at the fillie I saved. I couldn't leave rainbow dash there. I just couldn't. She's probably crying by my side. Wait, that's not right. That's not the dashie I know. I start to tear up. The light let the tear sparkle as it dripped down my left cheak, and fell and splashed on whatever type of floor this was. I let more tears fall. They dripped by my side.

Then something happened. I started to float. Higher and higher to the hole where the light was originated. Slowly, carefully, helplessly I float. I keep rising, but one thing I don't do, is stop the tears. Letting them go helps, actually. It seemes to release the pain in the small droplets of water. I reach the hole. It was barley large enough to fit me through. I floated through. As soon as my body brached the hole, I felt tension in my muscles. I could move again, or so I thought. I could control my body, but I couldn't move. I was still floating. Where was I now? I saw a pure cyan colored sky above me. I was able to turn my head. The hole lay there under me. I had stopped floating up. Around the hole, for miles that streach far beyond believe, a cloud looking surface occupyed space. I lightly floated over to one side of the out-streached land, or cloud. My crying had seized by then.

"Hello, cooper." a booming voice seemed to announce. I lightly fell onto the cloud. I was now fully able to move. I sat up, and got to my feet.

"Where are you, who or whatever you are?" I commanded. "Show yourself!"

"a feisty one, you are. I am not aloud to show myself to the likes of the human race, with the exception of those who have done an outstanding job with the life they had." I boomed. I immedietly retorted.

"Wait a second! The life they had?" I said.

"Yes, cooper grey burton. The life they once owned. I know what yiu are thinking, mr. burton, but do not fret. You are not completely dead." I remained silent, but raised an eye brow. "You are having an out of body experience. You are what you humans like to call, a spirit. What happens now, is I MUST answer one of the true questions you have about your past, present, or future. Then, I will send you back to earth. You will follow your body wherever it goes until you decide to re-enter it. Do you understand?" it asked.

"Yes, I think so." I answered.

"Then, ask your question." I pondered for a moment. Then, I had my question.

"What becomes of me and rainbow dash?" the scene changes immediately. We are now in what seemes to be raibow dashes cloud home. I walk around. I am in a living room. It is night time. I walk down a hallway. I see a couple of rooms. I open one. I see a crib. I open it further. I see two more now. I walk in slowly. I look in the cribs. I see fillies. Two of them seemed to be female, one was male. They were all pegusi. I smile. I walk out of the room, and closed the door. I see another room. I open the door. Inside, I see one bed. A colt lay in covers. It was older than the rest of the fillies, about 16, i'm guessing. Do I really stay with dashie that long? I saw something starnge about him. He had a horn. He must have had a walk on cloud spell. Amazing. I walk out. I see one last room. I open the door. I see rainbow dash, just as beautiful as before. The moonlight shown on her the same way it did at my home.

Then, pain hit me in the heart, like a spear penatrating my chest. I saw another colt in bed with her. He slept soundly and so did dashie. He was black. He had wild, yet smooth black and red hair. That's all I could see. I whispered. "Who is that?" the booming voice came back.

"They cannot hear you. You may speak with full voice. I thought you might see who that was immediately." it said.

"What?" I questioned. Then, I noticed who it truly was. Night Waves. "So, peoples OC's are real in this world?"

"Kind of. You will find out in due time. A lot of peoples oc's are in this world, though." the voice calmly answered.

"So, is there anything else I need to see here?" I said. I wasn't in pain anymore. I was a little bit sad, though.

"If you wish to explore farther, you might see. What you find may be surprising, or it may be painful to look at. Here is the thing though. You will find this somepoint in the future." I thought for a moment.

"Take me back to my body." I answer. "I can wait."

"Very well then. I will tell you that you have made the correct decicion. When it is time for you to re-enter your body, I will tell you."

"How long could that take?"

"Well, judging that you're in a coma right now, about a couple of weeks. Your injuries should be healed by then. For the time, you may roam free in equestria." I wanted to ask, or yell, or do something, because i'm sure I just heard I was in a coma. But, this wasn't going to happpen, for I was immediately teleported to the white emergency care room my body was in. I ended up starting straight at my body.

It's weird looking at my own body. I don't know how to explain it. Kind of like, looking into a mirror that doesn't follow your every motion.

"I almost died for that fillie and I've only been here in equestria for about 3 days. Atleast that ought to make the rest of them trust me." I said. I knew I wouldn't be heard. The I remembered I could wander equestria. I decided to go see if anypony was at twilights.

In town, by twilights tree home. . .

I was almost at twilights house. I saw it on the other side of some buildings. What had I learned on my trip from the hospital? I can haunt pony's. Apperently some can hear me talking to myself slightly, and I can control objects. Also, I can see a couple of ghost ponies by who I assumed was one of their loved ones. Only a couple though. The seemed un-able to hear me.

I walked straight through twilights door. I noticed something a bit . . . off. All the lights were out except for some candles. Everypony, including the humans, and one other pony sat holding hands in a circle. This other pony was grey. She had dark pink hair, with a lighter pink stripe down the middle. Her cutie mark was a

"Wait!" she exclaimed. "I feel a presence! Are you hear cooper?"

"Umm. . . yes." I answered.

"Good!" she said. Rainbow's eyes shot open.

"He's here!" she exclaimed.

"Yes, dash, he is. Cooper! I would like to inform you that we are connection to you through the magic spirit that explores all of equestria. We would like to talk to you. Oh, and they cannot hear you." she explained.

"Um, ok. What do you want to know?" I asked.

Rainbow dash asked, "Is he saying anything?"

"Yes," she informed. "He said, he would like to know what questions you have. Any of you."

Twilight started talking as rainbow opened her mouth. "What's it like being a spirit?"

"Yea, is it cool, or fun, or what?" Xavier asked.

"well," I started, "it's kind of weird. I think I met god. He told me it would be a couple of weeks from when I fell to be let back in my body. I found out I can haunt people, which I guess is kind of cool. Oh, and by the way, what is your name?"

"My name is Ravany." she anwered.

"what did he say?" Rarity asked. Of course, as always, most of the humans were being almost completely silent.

"He asked for my name. He also answered your question. He says it was weird. He says he can haunt people." fluttershy shivered at that. "He also said he thinks he met this thing called 'god' and he said this god told him he had to wait a couple of weeks after he fell to get back into his body."

"But it's been a couple of weeks!" pinkie pie said.

"What?" I exclaimed. Then, out of nowhere, the voice came back, booming louder than ever.

"Yes, cooper. I have sent you a coule of weeks into the future, so that you may re-enter your body." I looked up immediately, and saw nothing but the ceiling. I then proceded to look back at the group of ponies and humans. I noticed ravany holding her ears wincing in pain. The ponies all looked worridly at her.

"Go now, cooper, go back to your body." I started to run out the door. "Oh, and one more thing," I waited. "Beware the darkness, and don't be afraid to lose all you will have gained, for you may not lose it all. Tests will be made." It started to fade away, saying beware until it was a whisper, then it was gone. Ravany stopped and fell laying on the floor. She panted as everypony came to her aid. I ran to the hospital.

Meanwhile, at the princesses palace. . .

"Luna, it's time now. Plant it onto cooper." Celestia comanded. "It has been proven that he is the one."

Luna nodded. "It shall be done, big sister." luna left the throned room, walking carelessly across the carpet that led straight fron the door to the thrones. With her magic, the moon alicorn opened the doors and walked out, shutting it behind her. She stopped halfeway across the room. She checked to see if anypony was anywhere near her. Nopony was. A single tear dropped from her eye. She whispered.

"I'm so sorry, cooper." she moved again, walking to the next set of doors.

In a clearing in the everyfree forest. . .

10 black mist entities float in a circle making plans.

"So, number 6. you have proven of his true existence. Good work. That means, that now, the day of reconing is soon to be upon us. We have little time, we must go and go quickly. Numbers 2, 3, 5, and 9 will go and make sure that everything will be made correctly for the arrival. We need him here, in say, oh about 7 days. Can we make this happen?" number 1 spoke. every entity agreed that they could.

"Good. Me, number 4, 6, 7, and 8 will go watch over him. The nighmare will arrive for the elements. Number 6, you will go in for another warning to the boy. Is it all clear?" once again, they all agreed on the plan. They started to float in directions together, but they all looked the same. Number 1,4,6,7, and 8 floated towards town.

"Number 1, what will happen when he goes on the quest?" number 8 asked.

"I cannot fortell the future, but I will tell you what I know. He will need to round up a group to go with him. Not all of them will make it out alive. Infact, most of them won't. That is all I know."

finally, back to cooper. . .

i'm standing by my hospital bed. I'm looking at my body again, but this time, all of my friends were with me. Well, most of them are. Ravany stayed out in the lobby with jonah and alek. They needed room for the doctor. The doctor wore a white coat (You know the one.) He has Crimson fur with a yellow mane and tail. He was a bit taller than big macintosh, which makes him almost as big as me. When I wasn't zoned out, I heard him talking in a russian accent.

I was waiting, trying to figure out how to get back in my own body. I guessed I just had to lay and my sole would just go back inside, so I tried. I got up onto the bed. I layed down in my body. At one second, my eyes were open. When I layed in my body, my eyes appeared to be closed. I felt automatically tired. I could also now feel the cushony bed on my back. I slowely opened my eyes. I couldn't hear well, and my sight was blury. I blinkied over and over again, which helped clear my eyes, and for some reason my eares, more and more every time. I could only hear some beeping from the heart moniter. It appered that it had suddenly become night. I lifted my head. I looked around. The lights had randomly turned out. I looked to the door. It was closed. I had a room to myself. I layed my head back down.

Just then, I felt a shiver come through my spine. It wasn't cold in the room. I saw a black mist form in front of me. With no mouth, it spoke.

"Hello, again cooper. I have come with another warning. Do you accept it?"

I nodded. I didn't know why. I was kind of freaked out, but I knew somehow I was in a dream.

"Good. Here it is." it spoke. "Seven days. You have seven days. Round up a team of elite pony's, and save those you care about most. That is all." now I was scarred.

"O-ok, but why?" i asked.

"You will find out." I dissapeared.

I awoke randomly. I was in a dark room. I knew where I was. I was in the hospital. The same bed from earlier. It was night time. I looked out the window. I saw twilights house out the window. Thw leaves flew carelessly in the night breeze. I looked around the room. I noticed on thing that stood out. In a chair by my bed sat a pony.

This wasn't any pony though. It was a cyan pony with rainbow hair.

"Rainbow dash?" I whispered. She must really care about me. A lot. She slept soundly. I wondered what time it was.

I felt a watch on my left arm, but I didn't remember putting one on. I lifted my arm. I looked in awe at what was strapped on my wrist. It was a watch, but not just any other watch. It was designed as a single music note.

"What could it be?" I quietly asked myself. I decided one thing. I could find out in the morning.

"All I know is it fells great to be back in my own body again. I layed my head back down on the pillow, put my arm back down on the bed, and closed my eyes. I drifted off to sleep.

I awoke randomly, again. I kept my eyes closed though, still mentally waking up. I heard voices. They seemed to be rainbow's with twilight and a russian one, in which I recognized as the doctor. I slowly opened my eyes.

"Hello?" I said. They turned their heads to me. Rainbow's eyes shot open. She quickly flew up to me and embraced me in a hug. "Whoa, hey there, dashie." I said, now awake mentally.

"Careful, friend. Cooper here should be fine, but its safe just to be careful."The stallion said. Rainbow got off of me. The stallion turned his attention to me. He cleared his throat. "Ahem. Allo, there, cooper. My name is Red Star. How are you feeling?" he asked.

"Fine, thank you. How are you?" I asked. He scribbled something on a clip board.

"Good, thank you. Not many patients actually aske me how i'm doing. It's good to hear your doing fine, hero." I grew a smile.

"Oh, cooper, it's great to see you awake again. Hey, there are someponies here for you, cooper." she walked out the door and called out three names. She walked back into the room, and so did three other ponies. One was just a filly. I recognized her as the same one from the burning house! Those must be the parents.

The stallion's mane is brown with white stripes. He had wings, which meant he was a pegusis. His eyes are rainbow colored. His body is black and his cutie mark is a lighted lightbulb.

The mare's mane was green with a teel stripe through it. Her eyes were dark green and her body was pure yellow. Her cutie mark was a gardning hoe. She had a horn, so she was a unicorn.

The filly's mane was dark blue. His eyes were teal, and his body was light purple. He had no cutie mark, and was an earth pony.

"Oh, thank you so so so so so so so much mister! You saved my life!" the filly said.

"Yes," the stallion spoke. "We owe you our lives for what you did. Oh, and by the way, my name is Seth. Seth Shadowsky. This here is taylor," He pointed to his wife. "and that there is lil' alfalfa." they all smiled at me. "We had to thank you. We are in great gratitude to you."

"Yea! Thank you so much, um," Alfalfa spoke.

"Cooper." I said. "My name is Cooper."

"I can tell that you and I are going to be great friends!" Seth said.

"Him and me!" Red said. "Oh, yes, um, I think it is time you are to be able to leave. Please check out on your way out."

"Ok, red.

"Ya know, we should all hang out some time." Seth said. I got out of the bed and started walking to the door. Seth an his family walked out. So did twlilight and rainbow. I walked out behind them all. We checked me out of the hospital.

Taylor told seth he could hang out with me for the day, and she would take alfalfa home. Seth was happy he could do this. So was I. Twilight had to go back to the library because she had to leave the CMC with spike, and that's never a good idea. She walked up to her door, right across from the hospital. She opened the door, and books came falling out, like and over stuffed closet I couldn't help but laugh. So did rainbow and Seth. We all offered to help get it cleaned up. And so, we did.

A couple of hours later. . .

we had just got done cleaning up the mess. It took a while to get everything put in place correctly. Apperently while I was out, Twilight got all the materials for me and my friends to do our band. I had learned more about Seth. He can, and get this, see in the dark. His eyes were rainbow, and he lived in and underground cottage. He can apparently control electirity, and he randomly telepors to random places. He can't comand it to do something, it just happenes. Twilight said that she has to do some studies on that.

I then remembered my watch I found last night. How I forgot about it, I don't know.

"Guys, what is this on my wrist?" I asked. Twilight looked at me, then my wrist. She saw the watch. So did rainbow and Seth. Twilight and Rainbow gasped and dropped the books they were holding.

"Oh my goodness!" Twilight said.

"What?" I asked in confusion.

"I think I know what it is, but we will need to consult princess celestia about it." she said with a stern voice. "Spike, take a letter." spike ran up to her side holding a quill and a scroll.

"Dear princess celestia,

I have news that I am unaware of whether it is good or bad, or both. Or, neither, I really don't know, which is what consernes me. I would like to request an immediate audience with you. I am very sorry this is on such short notice, but I need to know now. This could mean something HUGE. I will be awating your response." she said. "Now, spike, send the letter." spike rolled up the scroll and blew fire onto it. It dissapeared into green smoke and flew out the window.

"So, what do you think it is?" I asked. Just as she was about to talk, a bright flash enveloped the room, blind every one of us. When I opened my eyes, I saw both princesses looking at nopony in particulare. Celestia averted her attention to twilight. When I noticed I was in the same room as royalty, I bowed. I noticed that twilight, spike, and Seth were doing the same.

"Rise." Princess Celestia told. We did so. "What is the big news you need to find out about, Twilight?" she asked. Twilight pointed at my wrist. Celestia's eyes grew wide. "I'll do a quick test." she said. Her horn started to glow. The glow also appeared on my new watch. After a coule of seconds, she said one thing.

"Twilight, go get the others." with that, spike, twilight, and rainbow dash ran/flew out

After everypony was there, Princess Celestia spoke. "I have good, and bad news for you all."

we waited in suspense. "The bad news is, there is going to be a new battle that we will need all 8 of the elements for." she said. Everypony, including myself, looked with confused eyes.

"8? Princess, aint there only 6 elements?"

"No. there WAS only 6. prophacy fortold that two new elements would appear. One would appear 7 days before something bad happened, being caused by none other than the mystical being that took over my sister. His name is 'The Nightmare'. There is a special way for the second element to appear, though. It is the element of 'Sacrafice'. It only is achived when a sacrafice of a large amount is given. Only, after the battle is finished between the elements and the nightmare."

"What does this have to do with that on cooper's wrist? What's the first element?" Rainbow asked. Now, everypony looked at my wrist. They all noticed the music noe watch I was wearing.

"The first element it called helpfulness. What does it have to do with cooper? That thing on his wrist, it is the 7th element." now, everypony's mouth hung open. Including mine. A long silence loomed.

"But, how?" I asked.

"You have been helpful the whole time you have been here. I wish you all good luck, for in seven days, you will go on a journey to save equestria, and Earth." she said.

"Um, No need to interupt princess, but we never told you we were from earth. And, how did you know it would effect us too?" Xavier asked. Oh xavier, always using human logic. That sometimes gets him in trouble with teachers.

"Well, um. . ." the princess looked around. Luna whispered something into her ear. "Ok, sister. Everypony, I have a confession to make.

What other twists and turn of events shall appear? How will everypony react to the confesion? What is the confession? We shall never know. Why? Because I am cancelling the story! Sorry, I just have no other ideas.

LOL, JK! PLEASE REVIEW IF I GOT YOU WITH THAT! I have many ideas, don't worry. Why would I cancel when the getting gets good? Gigity. Time for oc thank you's. I would like to thank the following for their generouse oc donations.

Lets hear it for:

Thehiddenbrony for Seth Shadowsky

Crimson Banner for Red Star. (Sorry, no hats on at work)

ManeKiNiko1316 for Ravany.

That is all for now.

I NEED OC'S. GIVE ME OC'S. I NEED OC'S OR ELSE I WILL HAVE TO TAKE MORE TIME FROM MY UPDATES TO CREATE PONIES AND PONY NAMES, WHICH AFTER YOU'VE MADE A FEW, GETS HARD. Gigity. Shut up quagmire!