NARAKU!! Much more action in this chapter...lots of fun...hope you have as much fun reading it as I had writing it.
Chapter: 11- The Abandoned Ed and Winry
"Ugh, uh" Ed was waking up in a dark place that he was not familiar with. "Oh, you're up are you?" A voice said. He started looking around, wondering where he was and where that voice was. But he saw nothing. "Who are you?" Ed asked. "My name is Naraku," he said. "Naraku? Hey, aren't you that guy that Kida and the others are after?" Ed asked. "Yes," Naraku said. "Then what do you what with me?" "To lure them here." "And what will you do with me later?" "Hmm," Naraku said suddenly coming out of the darkness in front of him. Ed stared at him. "You'll be good use to me later," he said. He looked extremely powerful and had something glowing inside his suit. "What is that?" Ed asked pointing to the Sacred Jewel Shard. "Oh, this? It's a Sacred Jewel, I suppose you wouldn't have them living where you do." 'I remember those, Kida told me that Naraku had most of the Jewel and Kagome only has about three, how much more can be left?' He wondered. Ed chuckled. "Yeah, Kida told me about those, told me that you have most of the Jewel," Ed stood. "Well maybe I should end this more quickly and take back what not yours," he said looking angrily at Naraku. Naraku got ticked he stretched his arm out towards Ed! His fingers spread the most as they circled Ed's neck. He began coughing and gasping for air. "Or, maybe I should just kill you now," Naraku said.
Ed wasn't about to give up. He clapped his hands and placed them on Naraku's flesh. Naraku screamed of the flames on his hand, watching them fall to the floor along with his hand. "What kind of a human are you?" He asked. "I'm a state Alchemist, in my world, that would be bad for someone like you," he said. "Alchemist, huh?" Naraku said. His hand suddenly grew back! Ed's eyes were wide open. "Well I'm a demon and in my world…that's bad for YOU!" He said stretching his arm all the way around Ed's body and squeezing him tightly. He also held his hands behind his back so he couldn't do Alchemy. Ed struggled to get free but he couldn't. "You know usually I would kill you right about now," Naraku said holding the boy up to him. Ed fell silent. "But I want to save that for later, I still have my plans to think about and those dumb half demons and humans should be on their way right now," Naraku sat on the ground, still holding onto Ed. Ed thought about Al, hoping that he wouldn't get himself into too much trouble on his way here. 'Wait a second,' he thought. "Winry where is Winry?" Ed asked. "Oh, the girl? She's not here at the moment," Naraku wouldn't tell Ed where she was. Ed got ticked at him.
"Where is she, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HER!!?" He yelled. "Don't worry you'll see her again," Naraku began. "In the nether world!" He finished. Ed's eye went wide. 'He's gonna kill Winry! And it's all my fault!' He thought. Naraku's flesh grew covering Ed's mouth.
Kida opened a new portal closer to where they had sensed Naraku from when he attacked. "Hey Inuyasha do you sense anything?" Miroku asked. "Nope, nothing," he said. "What do we do now?" Kagome asked. "I thought you said that you made a portal closer to the ora that came from Naraku," Inuyasha said to Kida. "I did, the last portal was like a mile away, I did it as far as I could but it soon disappeared so I wasn't even sure where it was anymore," Kida explained pointing in the direction where they came from. They sighed. "Why don't we just start walking this way, maybe we'll find something," Al said pointing to his right. "Wait," Inuyasha said. "I smell something, and its coming closer." "Hey, I recognize that sent," Kida said. Inuyasha sighed. "It's none other than…" Suddenly Koga popped out of no where in front of Kagome. "Hey, Kagome, long time no see?" He asked grabbing her hands. "Um, hello Koga, nice to see you again too," Kagome said.
Inuyasha got between them. "What do you want wolf?" He said angrily and full of jealousy. "Who is he?" Al whispered to Kida. "Oh, a wolf demon that Inuyasha refuses to kill because he's in love with Kagome who doesn't feel quite as he feels but won't let Inuyasha hurt him. Although they continue to constantly fight over her," Kida answered. "I felt a weird demonic ora in this direction and thought I'd check it out and see if Naraku was near by," Koga said. "Told ya," Kida said. "Well you're not welcome now leave!" Inuyasha yelled. "Wait, maybe Koga could help us Inuyasha," Kagome said. "WHAT!?" Inuyasha said ticked. "HE IS NOT TRAVELING WITH US!" Inuyasha yelled. "Then it's settled, Koga can come with us for the time being," Kagome said ignoring Inuyasha. They began walking, Inuyasha still standing behind them watching as they walked TICKED that Koga was with the. 'Kill me,' he thought.
"Uh, Kagome?" Koga said. "Yes?" "As long as I'm here can I ask who that big metal guy is?" "Oh, this is Al, he's from another Era, we're looking for Naraku too because he captured his brother and best friend," Kagome explained. "Oh," Koga said grabbing Kagome's hand, she turned red. Inuyasha had also turned red but with anger not shyness.
Ed struggled. He couldn't get loose. Part of Ed's shirt fell, showing part of Ed's metal arm! "Hmm," Naraku said. Ed hesitated. With his other hand, Naraku pulled the shirt sleeve down a little more to reveal it. "Nice arm," he said. His eyes went wide. "I've seen the way you fought, that amazing power that you have," Naraku said. "This arm must be how you do it all; I wouldn't mind having that part of my body!" Naraku said. Ed was a little scared. Naraku took the rest of the sleeve off the arm. "Hmm, what would happen if I did this?!" He said pulling the arm hard and ripping it off! "AAH!!" Ed screamed in pain. The arm was thrown across the floor. Ed looked back at Naraku's evil smile. He slipped out of his right arm sleeve and fell to the floor. Ed was now only wearing a black tang top with black pants and boots. His black jacket came along with his red one. Naraku moved forward. His fingers began to stretch about to cut through Ed's body, but he rolled out of the way. He was getting so scared, without his Alchemy, Ed was useless. He actually believes that he was going to die. He started hesitating, his heart pounding rapidly. He began moving back all that he could with one arm.
Naraku grabbed Ed's neck and held him close to him. "Imagine the powers I could develop with your body. I'm going to make you part of me, and don't worry it'll be over before you know it," he said. Suddenly Naraku's stomach began to open and something from the inside of him grabbed Ed and started pulling him in! Ed tried to force himself out but couldn't, there was nothing he could do. "AAHH!!" He screamed. Then suddenly blue electricity, also known as Alchemy began forming everywhere! It split Ed and Naraku apart, knocking them in different directions on the floor. Ed was still breathing heavily. "BROTHER!" Al called for him, running to him on the ground. He was the one who had saved him. "Brother, are you ok?" He asked. Ed didn't answer; he didn't even look at him. He was panicking. Naraku stood; Al looked up at his face. Al stood, "stay away from my brother!" He said. Naraku just smiled. Ed crawled towards his metal arm with his left hand; he tapped it onto its sockets and painfully pressing on it for it to snap into place, he yelled from the pain. He then circled his shoulder around to make sure it was on right. He stood.
"So, young boy, who are you exactly?" Naraku asked. "Me?" Ed said. "I'm the Full Metal Alchemist, and for you that means that YOU'RE DEAD!!"
Ed charged at Naraku clapping his hands together and slapping them on the ground. Electricity/ Alchemy formed everywhere, after Naraku but he had put up a barrier! Ed's eyes went wide. "What is that?" He wondered. "What, you don't have barriers in your world?" Naraku asked. He just smiled and ran after him. His fingers stretched wide and were about to come down on him but a barrier was around Ed! "Huh?" They both wondered. "I don't know how to put up barriers," Ed said confused. "I know," said a voice. "I put it up." Ed turned around to see Kida standing there holding her hands up forming the barrier, once Naraku backed away she put her hands down releasing it. She drew her swords and let them glow brightly. Naraku just chuckled. "This is gonna be fun," he said. But right when he was about to attack Sango's Heiakos and Kagome's arrows were hit right in front of him, but didn't touch him. Kagome, Sango and Shipo were all on Kirara's back. Miroku sucked up the ceiling of the building that they were all in and Inuyasha popped out of no where.
"WIND SCAR!!" He yelled. Naraku put up a barrier. But something was different about this one. The barrier started sucking up the wind scar! He then shot it back at Inuyasha! But not only at him, he sent it into millions of directions to go after each and every one of them! Kirara moved out of the way but Kagome was tilted and fell off of her. Kirara flew to catch her but a blast from the wind scar got in the way. "KAGOME!" Inuyasha yelled rushing towards her. He got hit by the wind scar slightly but hard enough to knock him to the ground. "I got you Kagome," Koga said catching her and landing in the room.
The wind scar was then going after Kida! "Kida look out!" Al yelled running at her and getting in the way. Kida gasped. "NO AL!" She yelled grabbing hold of his armor and putting up a barrier around them. The wind scar had still hit Al thought, but his armor was so tough to break it only scratched it a bit in his back, and he didn't feel it either. One last blast headed straight for Ed! Al turned, "BROTHER!" He cried out. Ed's eyes went wide. "NOO!!!" Al yelled turned after him. Ed's eye brows went down. "I'm not going to loose nor die to this guy," he said to himself.
Ed ran towards it and clapped his hands together and touched the ground. He brought his hand up and along with it was a long sword. He brought it up and took it in his hands. The blast was coming, he held it up and cut right through the wind scar, screaming and forcing it to cut, it was extremely hard but he manage. Everyone was shocked. He stood there breathing hard. Naraku got ticked he called some demons disguised as human to come into the room, but there were more then one. Inuyasha, Kagome, Koga, Kida, Miroku and Al were all in the room. "That's it Naraku YOU'RE DEAD!" Inuyasha yelled. He charged but millions of men blocked the way. "What?" He sniffed the air. "The sent of the Village Killers?" He wondered. "But didn't we destroy them all?" Kagome asked. "Stupid humans, I only need to great more!" Naraku said. "So they were demon puppets after all?!" Miroku said.
"Uh, a little help over here," Inuyasha said slicing a couple at a time to get them off of him, but they kept coming. Soon they were all over the room over everyone there but Naraku. They grabbed both of Ed's arms and bringing him up to Naraku. Ed stared into his eyes angrily.
"You've caused so much trouble boy, it's time for you to die," Naraku said. "NOT ON YOUR LIFE!" Al yelled punching him. He got straight up and opened his arms wide very ticked. The whole room started shaking, and everyone along with it. Walls started forming out of no where. The Village Killers all disappeared but the two holding Ed, they and him stayed close to Naraku. "BROTHER! LEAVE HIM ALONE!" Al yelled using some Alchemy and separating Ed from the Village Killers, and from Naraku. A wall then formed between them leaving Ed next to Al and surrounded by familiar walls and no top. "Brother, are you ok?" Al asked helping him up. "Ugh, yeah thanks," Ed said. "Um, brother? Where are we?" Al asked. "I don't know Al..." Ed said looking around. "I think it's some kind of maze, and the only way out of a maze is to go through it so we'd better start walking," Ed said. "Ok." They began.
