The Hated Prodigy
Ryuujin96: your welcome on the double standard thing you had.
The next few of days had been well on the Konoha teams, with Naruto fully recovered, Kiba still had a fear of women and always will but was better than before. Kurenai had mostly recovered from the fight with Zabuza, and the rest of them were fine to begin with, even Hinata was slightly more confident, not much but enough to not be shy in a fight.
(Flash back)
It was the third day in wave for the teams, Hinata and Naruto were out training by themselves since Yukari was bad at teaching, not able to teach a basic tree walking exercise. So Naruto replaced her and easily taught team 8, Shino had decent chakra control nearly the same as Naruto despite not having to do the torturous training Naruto had to do but Shino's bugs eating his chakra, made the task difficult so was still working on it. Kiba was just plain terrible having very little chakra control so had a very hard time but Akamaru who could water walk helped the boy. Hinata had the best chakra control out of everyone on both teams, probably since her fighting consists of using high chakra control.
Which was why Naruto simply left a clone to watch over Kiba and Shino while Naruto took Hinata to a small stream in the forest. "W-what are w-we d-doing here?" Hinata asked shyly being alone with Naruto making her embarrassed.
"Water walking, since you have completed the tree walking exercise, it's only logical to go on to the next step" Naruto looked over at the girl "or did you need help with something else?"
Hinata played with her fingers "I w-was h-hoping y-you could h-help m-me with f-fighting, I-I d-don't want my f-friends to g-get h-hurt".
"Sure, you use... gentle fist, right?" she nodded "ok then how about a little spar, no test first". Naruto stretched slightly "gentle fist uses chakra in the finger tips and hitting chakra points, so I want you to show me what you can do without chakra".
"I-I can't..." Hinata protested
Naruto activated his byakugan "don't worry you can't hurt me if you don't use chakra and I will hold back as much as you need".
Hinata shook her head quickly "I can't hurt you since you are my friend".
Naruto clapped in approval "even if we didn't fight, that was an incredible bit of confidence" she blushed and looked down 'maybe I spoke too soon'. "So if you don't want to fight then... let me look at your stance" she quickly got into a rushed gentle fist stance stance. "Hm interesting, stay still for a bit" Naruto walked around her to fully analyse her stance. He touched her arms pushing them slightly "arms are in a good position for defending, not really for attacking".
Ryosuke nudged Naruto on the leg lightly "look at the way she is standing, she looks off balance, go on and help her" he spoke to Naruto mentally.
'Sure' he replied to his sword 'I will just put you down here so you can tell me her position from a further away view and tell me how I should fix it'.
"Roger" Ryosuke mentally saluted, not having arms in his sword form. "First off, we need to check her body type, it is slightly different for most people and effects overall combat" Ryosuke explained "can you get her massive jumper off, I can't tell her body type".
'Ok' Naruto put his hand out to Hinata "May I have your jumper Hinata, I need to check your body type".
"I-I eh... I... ok" Hinata whispered the last part as she pulled her jumper over her head.
'So can you tell her body type now' Naruto asked Ryosuke, who hummed in thought.
"Not quite, could you give me a very accurate estimate of her measurements, don't bother asking, girls hate that" Ryosuke lectured. "Now her waist, don't be afraid to touch her, girls won't hurt you unless you piss them off or they just have anger problems".
"Alright then" Naruto wrapped his arms around her waist, like her was giving her a hug. Hinata's face was pulled into Naruto's chest so her blush wasn't seen '28 waist possibly'
"I see, now her thighs, she has equipment on her legs so just move the clothing out of the way" Ryosuke told the blond.
Naruto shook his head 'touching a girl like this is fine but if I do touch them in a way that you are telling me too, then they get angry with me, I know they are naturally... seductive but if you touch you get hurt'.
Ryosuke rolled his handle "you are an idiot, have you ever just gone up to someone and just start groping them".
'Well no but...' Naruto started
"So you don't think it might be something else you are doing?" Naruto opened his eyes at the fact "yes, they are fine the with you touching them, you're just doing something wrong, so I will talk you through on how to touch a girl". Ryosuke cleared his throat mentally "first pull down the clothes". Naruto released Hinata from the makeshift hug and pulled her pants down, Hinata was quick to react grabbing her pants as they were just above her knees.
"N-Naruto! W-what are y-you d-doing" Hinata blushed in embarrassment and trembled in fear but also excitement. Under the shyness, Hinata was very perverted towards Naruto, in fact every night in wave she spent 2 hours in the bathroom touching herself while she watched Naruto sleep. She also so happenly dreamed of Naruto dominating her, pinning her down and leaving her in a sticky mess but that did not mean she was mentally prepared for what was going to happen.
Meanwhile Naruto just followed Ryosuke's instructions and put his face between her thighs. "See she is not hurting you like you said she would" Ryosuke grinned mentally since he did not have a mouth in his sword form. "So how do her thighs feel?"
'Soft, why do I need measurements for her thighs' Naruto asked.
'Kit he is only trying to help you, just let him do it' Kyuubi growled in anger as it's sleep was disturbed before using 2 tails to cover it's ears to block out the noise.
"Exactly but we still need to figure out her body type" Ryosuke stated. "Men and women have different balance because of a simple reason, different body types, if both genders trained the same way and have the same diet, men will be usually slower but are heavier so are better heavy hitters, women are usually faster and more flexible so are better quick hitters". Ryosuke shrugged "of course this is a stereotype of fighters and genders, there have been multiple body types but there is one thing that can effect a women's balance". Naruto missed the glint in Ryosuke's eyes or blade in this case "simply women have breasts, bigger they are, the more they weigh, added weight on one side puts them off balance but can also give them momentum, I won't go into detail so I need you to get the weight and size of her breasts so we can decide on her stance".
'I am not sure about this, I feel like something bad will happen' Naruto thought worryingly.
"Do you trust me?" Ryosuke asked "after I helped you before"
'But you have never helped me before' Naruto stated.
Ryosuke waved off that comment "don't look at the small details, just at the bigger picture". Naruto stood away from the dazed Hinata, who seemed to have lost her mind and gave Ryosuke a stare "why are you looking at me like that, go ahead and tell me her size"
'No you know what, this sounds too edgy, I don't trust you since we have only met a couple of days ago' Naruto refused to grab Hinata 'the thighs were slightly over the line as well, I think I would have died if I continued, I'm just lucky Hinata is a shy girl'.
Ryosuke sighed "you are no fun, I suppose that can be rectified later, just go and train I guess, tell me when you are finished I am going for a nap".
Naruto shook his head at Ryosuke "sorry about that Hinata". Naruto sighed as noticed Hinata had fainted "why am I always with the weird ones?" not realising he could be the weirdest one of the group.
(Flash back end)
After the incident between Naruto and Hinata, nothing really happened as Hinata thought it was a dream she had due to the indifference in Naruto's attitude. Naruto had successfully managed to teach team 8 tree walking, Hinata and Shino water walking, Kiba how to use his mind in a battle so he did not just charge in, and partially self taught himself the gentle fist but was some time away from perfecting it. In fact, even Kurenai was impressed with Naruto's teachings as he did logical things to teach them and because hardly anyone did that since it was usually too hard for genin and gave chunin trouble. Apart form Naruto the only people more cruel in training would be Anko and Gai, luckily team 8 never really got physical training.
"Okay teams, we believe Zabuza will be appearing again today as the bridge can be finished today, so we need to be extra careful" Anko stated. "We will all split up into groups, Me and Kurenai will face Zabuza, Shino and Hinata you stay here and protect the family, Naruto and Yukari you two will go to Gato directly and deal with the bandits, Katsumi I need you to be Tazuna's body guard just to be sure that no clones or bandits get to him".
"G-good luck e-everyone" Hinata whimpered out as the teams split up.
Naruto and Yukari jumped through the town, taking out any bandit they passed. Usually when people saw dead bodies, they scream but this time they celebrated at the death of their aggressors. Finally they reached their destination, crouching on top of a house to stay hidden "Let's try and make this silent, we don't know the exact numbers". Yukari unsealed her two kodachi's from her wrist and activated her balance eye, Naruto unsheathed Ryosuke and activated his byakugan. "I'll get the far side, you get the closer side".
"Got it" Naruto replied
"Me too" a voice spoke behind them, directly in the byakugan's blind spot "little brats". Naruto and Yukari turned around in time to see a man in his forties before getting hit by a massive blunt object. Luckily the attack didn't do much as the man looked like he was mocking both of them. The man had short brown hair, beard and moustache with a very protuberant nose. He wore a short sleeved black shirt and pants with a ocean blue poncho over the shirt, a light blueish purple fingerless gloves that went up his fore arms.
"Oh is it just some of the brats under that snake bitch, Jinin" Zabuza asked already knowing the answer, wearing a similar black outfit to Jinin but never had a poncho and had bandages on one arm.
"Appears so, never hit them too hard so they should still be alive" Jinin dropped down from the house he was standing on.
Zabuza grunted "are you sure the helmet splitter usually crushes bones easily, they could be dead" he motioned to the massive hammer and one sided axe connected by a chain.
"True but they are moving look" Jinin pointed his axe towards Naruto and Yukari who were shakily getting up. "Get to the bridge and kill the bridge builder, I am just going to have a bit of fun here".
"Don't get carried away again, Haku follow me" Zabuza ordered. Haku simply nodded as he wore a battle kimono and anbu mask.
"Well it's going to be just us for a while kiddos, don't worry I will look after you both" Jinin chuckled moving towards them slowly and stopped when both stood up.
"Yukari, he has two heavy weapons so we need to use speed to attack the openings he makes when he misses" Naruto analysed.
Yukari shook her head "no he has two weapons to counter that weakness, we have to use his own momentum when he swings both hammer and axe in one direction". Yukari stepped forward "in other words we need to force him off balance with one of us gaining his attention so he focuses on one of us while the other attacks".
Naruto put a hand on her shoulder "I know what you are thinking but I will gain his attention, you're faster than me so have a better chance at getting his weak spot".
"Got it, let's hurry before any reinforcements come" Yukari spun her blades "don't forget to take the gravity seals off first, we can't afford to use those in this fight". Naruto nodded as they both released their seals.
"Attack" Naruto shouted sprinted forward as Yukari followed directly behind Naruto. Jinin smirked cockily swinging his axe at Naruto but the blond raised his sword above him and ducked to avoid getting directly hit so could easily deflect it. Naruto then spun round stabbing his sword into Jinin but Jinin slammed his hammer against the sword, while Ryosuke was a durable sword, Naruto was still sent flying back because of the sheer difference in power.
"Lightning style – double kodachi - swift cross" Yukari put the flat side of her blades together and leaped from behind Naruto and aimed to slice Jinin's neck but Jinin twisted around blocking the attack with the axe.
"Helm splitter" Jinin raised his hammer then hit the axe with it, Yukari managed to step back to avoid getting crushed by the force of the attack but the axe went straight in the ground causing a shock wave.
"Fire style – fireball jutsu" Yukari spat out a fireball.
"Wind style – great breakthrough" Naruto blew out a wind enhancing the fireball, transforming it into a wave of fire which engulfed Jinin.
Naruto ducked to avoid the axe that would have cut him in half but wasn't fast enough to move out of the way of the hammer. Jinin grinned "you genin are doing quite well, defeating my water clone is very impressive for someone so young". His grin turned into a smirk "how about you guys become my apprentices, actually..." Jinin stomped on Naruto's fallen body "...I don't need this waste of space, he can't even take care of his sword, you on the other hand have a good choice of weapons and are extremely skilled at using them for your age". Jinin shrugged "you seem like you would do well with my training kid, Zabuza can't be the only one with an apprentice" he muttered the last bit under his breath but with Yukari being able to lip read because of her eyes, she knew exactly what he said.
"Why would I become your apprentice, we are enemies?" Yukari frowned slightly at Jinin for being so cruel to Naruto, who was lying on the ground. "For that very reason alone I will not follow you like some mindless puppet".
"Heh that's a shame, now this poor guy has to die painfully" Jinin put more pressure on the foot which was standing on Naruto which was a mistake. Jinin screamed in pain as Naruto stabbed Ryosuke into Jinin's knee "you little shit".
"Don't count me out of the fight yet" Naruto's hand shook barely able to hold on to his sword.
"I'll fucking kill you" Jinin raised his hammer above his head and brought it down full force on Naruto's chest, a sickening cracking sound echoing throughout the area. Naruto's eyes rolled to the back of his head and blood started to leak from his mouth and nose.
Yukari gritted her teeth and clenched her fists, nearly breaking the two kodachi she was holding "you... bastard" she spoke under her breath. 'Kill him... he took what is precious to you... now make him suffer... make them all suffer... they put you through hell... everyone you have met... the looks they give... the treatment they gave you... return it in full... and...' "Kill them all". Yukari leaped forward at incredible speeds, much faster than Jinin was anticipating, her balance eye faded slightly as the sclera darkened slightly.
Yukari her two kodachi one in the shadow of the first so when Jinin hit the first one away, he was unable to do anything and got stabbed in the right shoulder, with his damaged left leg he fell back easily being off balance. Yukari jumped on top of the fallen swordsman and put her left hand against his good shoulder and grabbed her impaled kodachi with her other hand. "Get off of me you lit... ah you fucking bitch" Jinin screamed as Yukari ripped her kodachi out of his shoulder, nearly taking his whole arm off as there was only a little bit of muscle holding the arm on.
"You seem to need your arms a lot, it would be a shame if I tore them off" Yukari's left hand started to glow in chakra before a dark blueish purple lightning covered her hand, then stabbed his good shoulder until she hit the ground below and moved her hand side to side quickly, removing his arm. Jinin failed to hold his screams of pain as he was unable to do anything as he was at her mercy. Yukari stood up off him and moved a small bit away to pick up her other kodachi 'that's right... make him... suffer' the voice continued to influence her mind to harm Jinin more than necessary.
"Let me go, I give up, p-please" Jinin started pleading but Yukari giggled like she was insane.
"Let you go" she put away her kodachi 'show him... your pain' the voice egged her on. Yukari stood above Jinin and crouched down "never" she pulled her fist back and punched his face with all her strength, breaking his nose then continued punching "die, die, die, DIE"
(With Anko and Kurenai)
Zabuza had appeared like they predicted and was currently struggling to deal with the two kunoichi, although the poison in his body from Anko's snake a few days ago had been treated by Haku, so it wouldn't get in the way of his fighting but he still couldn't use his right arm effectively with his large cleaver sword. The poison was still there and the herbs Haku used wouldn't last long and if he got bit by another snake, the poison overdose would most likely kill him in seconds. Anko was also in a bad condition as her leg had a deep cut in it but it was good enough as Anko could still move fine even though it hurt like hell, other than her leg she was perfect only exhausted. Kurenai looked the best out of the three, only having minor cuts and was not as exhausted mainly because she was in the back using genjutsu, only going into close combat to allow Anko to catch her breath.
"Twin striking shadow snake" two snakes flew out of Anko's sleeve.
Zabuza used the flat side of his sword to bat the two snakes away. "Water style – water dragon jutsu" Zabuza used the water of the river below to create a large water dragon and crashed it into the bridge to hope it would kill either kunoichi. "Water style – water typhoon" Zabuza never took the chance of the two surviving as he used the water that was now on the bridge to create a lethal vortex of water.
"Earth style – mud wall" Anko created a wall to stop the water, although it nearly broke with how strong the water style was, luckily earth was still stronger than water. "Earth style – earth dome jutsu" the mud wall stretched around Anko and Kurenai before Kurenai vanished.
"That won't save you" Zabuza gripped his sword tightly in his left hand "neither will you and your little genjutsu" Zabuza spun around swinging his sword to slice Kurenai in half who was hiding under her genjutsu but Kurenai was able to block it easily against Zabuza's one handed swing while she used two hands.
"True it won't but this will" Zabuza's head spinned around to see Anko launching several snakes at him, all of them ready to bite him.
"Like I would allow myself to be bitten by your snakes again" Zabuza twisted around again which was a big mistake as Kurenai stabbed her kunai into his good arm. His eyes widened as his hand lost strength and dropped his sword, luckily though it still managed to keep the snakes away from him.
"Give up now Zabuza, it's over no more escaping" Kurenai took out another kunai as Zabuza jumped to a safe distance.
"It's not over while I'm still breathing" Zabuza panted, no one noticing the horde of bandits that were slowly closing in on their location.
Chapter end
Review, Follow and Favourite. I was wondering if people like longer chapters which are out later or shorter chapters that are out quicker. Please tell me in a review whether you want long chapters or short chapters and I will write that way.
Now time to explain Yukari's eyes now. They are a mix between both sharingan and byakugan, if you never guessed from a pale sharingan description and they gain strength from love, joy, etc with every stage needing more joy than the last one. Powers will be explained later on when they are shown.
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