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Chapter 12 Were does your loyalty lie, Mr Malfoy?

Nita felt the rage fill inside her as she stared at the man. She had never seen him before, but she wasn't suprized to see him look so much like a snake. His bloodred eyes looked her over and she felt a shiver down her spine, even if the rage was somewhat bigger than the fear, for now anyway. She decided to not grace the man with an answer at the question, so she remained silent.

"My beautiful Caede, it's a pleasure to finally meet you." She stared at the wall infront of her, but she could sense the man walk around her. She remained silent. Her brain worked at top speed. How should she be able to come alive out of this?

Voldemort stopped infront of her and she stepped to steps back.

"Afraid of me? Don't be, my child, I mean you no harm." Sure“ Nita thought.

I felt your magical aura radiate power some moments ago, tell me, can you do wandless magic?"

Nita wondered how long she could keep up her silence, before Voldemort threw a fit. She remained silent.

What should she do? Duel him? Try to escape? Fake her loyalty? She wasn't sure she would be able to do that thought.

Voldemort walked back to his throne and sat down again.

"Do you feel any loyalty to me, my child?"

The question suprised her, what did he think?

"Why would I?" She spoked up for the first time and Voldemort, he gave her a small smile. "Maby because you're my daughter?"

Nita frose. So he knew. Did he know she had known?

She opened her mouth and spoke a few words that she knew she would regret some tome soon.

"I'm not your daughter. My name is Not Caede Riddle, My name is Demonita Potter."

Voldemort rose from his seat. "Watch yout tounge!" He hissed. "You're not a bloody Potter, and you know it! But," he took some steps forward, towards her, "..do you know who is the second of your fathers? Hmm? Have they told you about him? I would not thinks so."

Nita was scared for what was about to come, she didn't want to hear it. She was scared to know about that last piece of information, she was scared to know about the man who raped her mother.

"One of my most loyal servants he is. Oh yes, a good spy to, the old fool Dumbledore and the ministry never suspects him."

Before Nita could even think of an answer, a feint knock on the door was heard. Voldemort glared daggers at the door and Lucius Malfoy appeared in the doorframe. He stepped into the hall and fell on his knees. Nita looked at the man. Something abut him made her feel.. She didn't know how she felt. The man radiated evil, but for some reason she felt a bit unsure about his loyalty to the dark, something that she never felt before. he had changed since the day before, but what had changed him? she glanced at Voldemort. Did he feel it to?

"What do you want, Lucius", Voldemort said, "I thought you knew not to disturb me?"

Malfoy rose to his feet and spoke with barely a whisper.

"Longbottom is on the loose. He is still within the manor thought."

Voldemorts eyes flared up in anger. "You incompetent fool! How can I even have someone like you in my ranks!" The dark lord drew his wand and Nita came out of the chock she recieved to hear that Longbottom had managed to escape, somewhat. She knew she had to do something about the situation and the only thing she could think about was to step between the too men.

She stepped infront of Voldemort in the last moment. She cursed her Gryffindorish behaviour.

"We have no time. Lets go find Longbottom instead, and you can curse who you want after that." She prayed thet he would listen to her.

Voldemort lowered his wand. "So, you will join me?" Nita swallowed and gave him a small nod.

"Yes father."

She saw the look on Malfoys face. He looked shocked for a second but hid it a moment later. Voldemort on the other hand, looked pleased.

"Lets get that brat then."

Nita was chocked of how easy it was to fool the dark lord. She had thought it would be much harder.

Voldemort took the lead and she went after him, with Lucius behind her. She had a feeling that he had an whatchful eye on her.

Outside, a few death eaters stood and talked to each other.

"Find him! Don't stand here and let him escape!"

After that, they spread out. Nita ran together with Malfoy and another guy who she never seen before. What was she going to do? She couldn't let them catch him.

She looked at Malfoy again as they entered the dungeon, were Longbottoms cell was situated. She detected anger from the man, and a feeling of dread. Was he worried of Longbottom? His face showed nothing of the sort, but she knew she could trust her feelings in most cases.

She had been five years old when she discovered thet she could read other peoples magical aura. In most cases, she could feel if the person told her the truth or not. Obviously, she didn't do that to her parents tahat often, otherwise she should have discovered that they lied to her about her true parentage.

Malfoy stopped.

"Nott, take the left way, and Potter and I take the right."

They saw not dissapear in the hallyway and they turned to the right and started to search after The Boy Who Lived And Were Soon To Be Dead, if Voldemort had it his way.

"Do you think his still in the dungeons, or do you know?" she asked him and he looked at her.

"Why would I know?" he hissed and gave her a glare.

"Maybe because you helped him escape?"

Malfoy didn't answer, just stared at her. She smiled in the dark corridor, she had been right. Malfoy started to walk again.

"Mr Malfoy," she wispered, "I know that your loyalty don't lie with the dark lord, and neither do mine. We have to find him before the others and get out of here."

The blond stopped and for a moment she thought he would curse her, and that she had been wromg, but after a moment, he spoke with a wisper.

"You're exactly as your father, I have to tell him later that you saw throught me in less than an half an hour. God, I want to see Severus face when I tell him that his daughter have the same sharp mind that he has."

Nita gasped. She was the daughter of Severus Snape?


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