Chapter 10
~~Step by step~~
I DO NOT OWN Treasure Planet or the Little Mermaid!
(Note: The time setting is just like it is in the Little Mermaid. But technology is advanced just like in treasure planet on land. Jim is 16. Ariel is 16 as well. The the vehicles on land did NOT have wheels. The vehicles floated above the ground. Planet Montressor is the planet Jim and live in the original movie. But since this is MY story Planet Montressor will be a city and it will be called Montressor. Ariel has NO siblings. Plus the mer folk eat some marine life. Just like humans eat cows and chicken, mer people eat some marine animals.
Italic type is thoughts)
The ocean waters were cool and soothing. But deep in the depths disaster was brewing.
Sebastian and Flounder are tied up together in kelp. They desperately try to free themselves to help Jim and Ariel.
Jim's merman time was up and the spell was lifted. But he was transforming back into human...under water.
Jim released bubbles out of his nose and mouth as he struggled to untie himself. He was running low on air.
Jim cringed closing his eyes tightly shut and he grits his mouth as if he were in pain as his lower red fish body then starts to lose it's color. It started matching with Jim's skin tone. His legs were visible and his tail fins turn into feet with 5 toes in each foot. Jim was now completely human once again. The kelp wrapped around his waist and covered his manhood.
Ariel watches in horror as she is helpless to help Jim.
Sebastian and Flounder watch in shock as they watch Jim transform into a human.
Jim continues to struggle himself free but it was no use. Jim starts to lose consciousness
His vigorous struggling starts to come to a halt. His body falls limp in the tangled kelp.
"Ariel...I'm sorry." Jim says in his mind as his eyes close and Jim sees blackness and as his last small bubble of air escapes his lungs and floats to the surface
"Oh no! JIM!" Ariel calls out!
Ariel says but then all of a sudden cringes in pain. She grits her teeth as her eyes tightly shut close.
Bubbles start escaping her mouth and nose as she is now unable to breathe under water.
Ariel now desperately needed air.
More bubbles escape from his mouth and nose as Ariel desperately tries to free herself.
Ariel's lower fish body begins to disappear as it starts to lose it's color and match Ariel's skin tone. Her legs emerge and her tail fins become feet. The kelp wraps around her waist covering her womanhood.
Sebastian finds away to free himself. He frees his claws as he cuts away the kelp that held him. Flounder and Sebastian were now free.
"Oh no! Ariel and Jim are in trouble!" Flounder cries out as he quickly swims to Ariel.
Sebastian gasps as he quickly swims to Ariel who desperately needed to have air in her lungs rather than water. Sebastian looks at Ariel's desperate face to free her self.
"Don't worry Ariel!" Sebastian says and he cuts away the kelp that held Ariel.
Ariel was now free and she desperately tries to swim to the surface knowing there is air up there. But she doesn't know how to swim as a human. She kicks and moves her arms frantically but she doesn't get anywhere.
Flounder spots the golden object on the sea grass and grabs it using his mouth. He quickly swims up to Ariel.
"Ariel! Grab on to me!" Flounder tells Ariel as his voice his muffled by the golden object in his mouth.
Sebastian quickly swims to Jim and cuts away the kelp that held him. But Jim's body was lifeless. Jim starts to sink as the kelp was no longer holding him.
But Flounder swims by Jim so Ariel could grab Jim.
Ariel grabs Jim's arm and holds him close to her body. Ariel looks at the surface as it gets closer and closer.
Flounder struggles as he tries to tug along not one body but two bodies.
Sebastian quickly follows Flounder to the surface.
Flounder makes it to the surface of the water and so does Ariel and Jim.
Ariel takes a huge breath in of the salty sea air. Ariel gasps for air as she is tugged to shore by Flounder holding Jim in her arms.
They finally make it to shore. Ariel doesn't know how to walk so she drags her self on to shore using her arms and lays Jim on his back.
"Oh no. Jim! Jim! wake up please!" Ariel cries out. Her voice over came the noise of the gentle waves crashing beneath her. The waves eventually climbed up on shore and crash against Ariel's back and Jim's body. Ariel cringed surprised by the sudden water crashing on her back.
Ariel then drags Jim's body a bit more up on the shore so the waves wouldn't come crashing down on them.
"Jim please wake up!" Ariel cries out and starts to hit his chest hoping it would wake him up.
Sebastian climbs on to the shore and stands along side Ariel.
"Ariel... he's gone." Sebastian says sadly.
"No! I won't give up! He's not gone!" Ariel cries out determined to wake Jim up.
5 seconds later Jim starts to cough out water. Ariel smiles relieved to find out Jim is alive.
Sebastian smiles as he is glad to find out Jim is alive. Flounder was still in the ocean close to the shore. He watches from a distance with a smile perched on his face.
Jim coughs out much water and then starts to slowly opens his eyes.
He sees Ariel smiling against the night sky. The stars twinkled behind her with the out most beauty.
"A...Ar...Ariel?" Jim says faintly.
"Yes Jim! It's me Ariel." Ariel says happily as she places her hand on the side of Jim's face.
Jim smiles and sits up. "Ariel..I...I thought I was a goner" Jim says with a relived smile.
"Remember that promise we made. I swore that I would protect you at all costs." Ariel says with a gentle smile.
Jim gently smiles back.
Ariel sits by Jim. She smiles. "Guess what." Ariel tells Jim.
"What?" Jim asks.
"You two are humans now!" Sebastian says with a desperate tone.
Jim's eyes widen as he looks at his legs in front of him. He lifts his right leg and wiggles his toes. He then looks at Ariel's legs. They were slender. Jim smiles with delight.
"Ariel...your human." Jim says with a excited tone.
Ariel giggles as she smiles and nods bashfully.
"Oh now the sea king won't be happy with this!" Sebastian cries out and paces the sand.
"His daughter! A human!" Sebastian say as he gestures to Ariel.
Ariel frowns and grabs Sebastian.
"Please don't tell daddy!" Ariel pleads with Sebastian and she does puppy eyes.
Sebastian tries to resist Ariel's puppy eyes and he groans.
"Fine! What ever." Sebastian groans and rolls his eyes looking away.
Ariel smiles. "Oh thank you Sebastian!" Ariel says with glee and sets Sebastian down on the sand.
Jim smiles at Ariel and then stands up. He struggles at first. It's been a while since Jim stood on his feet. He fianlly stands up straight and he feels the sand between his toes and sighs happily. Ariel looks up at Jim. She watch Jim stand up.
Jim looks down at Ariel with a smile.
Ariel smiles back and then tries to stand up herself. Her legs are a little wobbly. Jim watches and chuckles. It was as if watching a baby try to stand on it's own with no support for the first time. But then his eyes widen as he then notices Ariel is not wearing any underwear. The only thing that was covering her woman hood was a poorly wrapped kelp around her waist. Her chest was being covered up by the purple seashell bra.
"Oh my goodness, she's naked!" Jim says in his mind as his hearts beats faster and his breathing gets faster.
Ariel then tries to walk but then trips over.
"Woah there!" Jim says as he quickly reacts and catches Ariel before she could hurt her self.
Ariel looks at Jim in the eyes giggles.
Jim blushes as he carries the wet and naked Ariel in his arms.
"Sorry I'm so clumsy now." Ariel says with a giggle.
Jim carries Ariel as if he was cradling a baby. His face flushes red as he feels Ariel's wet naked body in his arms.
Jim couldn't say a word as he doesn't know what to do.
"Um..let's go and get some clothes..." Jim says with difficulty as he tries to pay no mind to Ariel in the nude. Jim quickly walks away from the waves carrying Ariel and he starts to head towards his metal shack which was 30 feet away.
Flounder was still in the sea. "Here! Take this!" Flounder yells out as he then spits out the golden object out of his mouth and the object lands on the shore just 2 feet away from Sebastian.
"I think it's important that you give it to Jim." Flounder yells out over the noise of the crashing waves.
Sebastian didn't notice Jim leaving with Ariel. "Ok! I will give it to Jim! And Flounder what ever you do don't tell the sea king if she asks you about Ariel or Jim!" Sebastian yells over the noise of the waves crashing.
Flounder nods. "Ok then see you later!" Flounder says and sinks into the ocean.
Sebastian then grabs the golden object and places it on his shell back he then notices Jim walking away with Ariel in his arms. Sebastian quickly runs after Jim with his 6 little legs.
"Jim wait!" Sebastian calls out to Jim.
Jim and Ariel don't hear Sebastian over the crashing waves and Jim contuies walking with Ariel in his arms.
"What are clothes?" Ariel asks with curiosity.
Jim was still blushing and his heart was beating fast as if he just sprinted a mile.
Jim enters the metal shack and the door closes behind him.
"Umm clothes are what people wear to cover themselves." Jim says as his voice cracks in between the word 'cover'
Jim rests Ariel on the makeshift sofa which was a pile of palm leaves.
Ariel feels the new texture of the leaves with her hands.
"So where can I get clothes?" Ariel says as she begins to stand up again. She was very eager to try out her new legs.
Jim watches Ariel. "Oh jeez..." Jim says as his eyes widen. The kelp was dangerously about to fall off of Ariel's waist. If Ariel moved another inch the kelp would fall right off her exposing her woman hood.
"Umm.. Ariel it's best you sit...I'll teach you to walk once you get some panties on..." Jim says as he regretted saying panties. Jim slaps his mouth shut with his hand.
"Panties?...What's that?" Ariel asks with a curious face.
Jim eyes widen as he covers his blushing face slapping his face with his hand.
"Jim?" Ariel asks confused. She was still standing in one spot.
Jim doesn't say a word. He didn't want to say something he would regret saying so he exits the room and enter's his room he quickly and looks for his shirt, pants, boxers, and spare boots. He takes off the uncomfortable kelp off of him. Jim was now completely naked as he continues his search for his clothes.
Ariel watches Jim leave and looks confused and she attempts to follow him into the room he walked in which was his bedroom. She wobbles as she walks but she gets most of her support from the walls of the room. She doesn't notice her kelp around her waist fall off and she enters Jim's bed room.
Jim turns to looks and he feels his heart beat so fast that his it was as if his heart was going to pop out of his chest. Jim's eyes widen and his face blushes red. Jim then quickly remembered he's naked himself and he quickly grabs the sheets of his bed to cover himself.
He covers his eyes with the sheets.
"Ariel...!" Jim cries out as he tries to erase the image of what he saw of the naked Ariel.
"Umm... I was wondering why you were acting so odd. I have so many questions to ask you. Like where I can find clothes, what are panties and a new question... what is that in between your legs?" Ariel says curiously.
Jim eyes widen as he hides his face under the sheets. "You saw?" Jim asks out loud as he talks to Ariel from underneath the sheets blushing bright red.
Ariel smiles innocently. She didn't know it was a bad thing to look. "Yeah!" Ariel says happily.
"So are you going to answer my questions?" Ariel asks with a impatient tone.
"Wait in the other room! Then I will answer all of your questions." Jim says as he forced the words out of his shocked body.
"Ok!" Ariel says with a smile and turns away and walk into the living room with support of the walls.
Jim peeks from under the sheets to see if she was gone and sighs relived. He then drops the sheets and finds his pants, boxers, shirt and spare boots. [Outfit from Treasure planet without his jacket on].
He enters the living room full with clothes on and sees the naked Ariel standing in the kitchen. Ariel was curiously looking at the fire place which was filled with ashes.
Jim blushes once again and looks away.
"Umm my mom has some clean clothes you can wear." Jim tells Ariel looking away and not making eye contact.
"Ooo! Where?" Ariel asks with a smile.
"Wait here!" Jim tells Ariel and Jim quickly runs to his mother's room and grabs a clean light light blue t-shirt and jean capris a white bra and white panties and sneakers that matches the light blue t-shirt. The panties and bra were new and where never worn. Jim comes back to the kitchen with the clothes. Ariel was now siting in the kitchen floor looking at tongs. She was confused on what it was and she fumbles with the tongs.
"Here you go Ariel." Jim says as he looks away and tosses the clothes at Ariel.
Ariel turns her head and looks and then the clothes fall on her face.
Jim doesn't notice and quickly walks away so that Ariel could get dressed.
He all of a sudden hears faint knocking on the front door. Jim curiously looks at the door. He didn't know who it could be.
"Oh! It's mom!" Jim says in his head with a smile and Jim quickly heads for the front door and opens it. He looks around but nobody seems to be there.
"Hmm?" Jim says as he looks around for a human being.
"Down here boy." Sebastian says with a annoyed tone.
Jim looks down and sees Sebastian holding the golden object on his shell back.
"Oh it's you. Umm.. come in." Jim says unsure what to say. He steps aside his boots seemed like buildings compared to Sebastian as Sebastian walked past them and into the metal shack.
Jim then closes the front door and sighs.
"Where is Ariel?" Sebastian asks Jim.
"Jim! I put on clothes for the first time!" Ariel calls out to Jim with a happy tone.
Jim and Sebastian hear Ariel from a distance.
"This way, follow me." Jim says as he walks to the kitchen and looks at Ariel. His eyes widen and then looks away. He then looks back at Ariel. Ariel was sitting on the kitchen floor with silverware every where around her.
Ariel had the sneakers, pants and underwear part right, but her white bra was on the outside of her shirt.
"I did it!" Ariel says happily.
Sebastian gasps and puts down the golden object beside Jim's boots. Sebastian rushes over to Ariel.
"Ariel!" Sebastian calls out as he frantically runs to her.
"Hi Sebastian!" Ariel says with a smile.
Jim bends down to pick up the golden object and then walks away from the kitchen hoping Sebastian can help Ariel out. He steps into the living room and plops down on the make shift sofa of palm leaves. Jim sighs as he looks at the golden object in his hand.
2 minutes later Ariel slowly walks out of the kitchen holding on to the wall for support. She was now dressed correctly. She had a light blue t-shirt on with jean capris that stopped just above her ankles. Her red long hair was now dry.
Jim looks at Ariel and smiles. "That's better." Jim says still sitting on the make shift sofa.
But around the sofa there were not structures for Ariel to hold on to. So Ariel makes a bravedecision and walks to Jim with out support. Her feet inverted towards each other as she walked.
She was very wobbly and ultimately falls over and lands on top of Jim.
Jim and Ariel look into each other eyes. Jim smiles. Ariel smiles back.
Sebastian finally makes it out of kitchen and see Jim and Ariel.
Sebastian pouts. "Ok you two lovers knock it out!" Sebastian says and walks towards Ariel and Jim.
Jim smiles. Ariel giggles and gets off of Jim and sits next to him.
Jim returns his attention to the golden object in his hand. He fumbles with it as he tries to get it open.
Ariel gently frowns. "I saw was in that." Ariel says calmly.
Just when Ariel finishes her sentence Jim gets the golden object to open and displays it holograms of the young Jim. The holograms played mini motion videos of Jim growing up. Him as a toddler, as a kid, then as a happy 13 year old. Jim looked happy in all of the pictures of the hologram. The hologram of toddler Jim would first show off his new toy car. Then the kid Jim would be bringing home a pet the 13 year old Jim would be showing off his blue prints to his very own solar surfer.
Jim sighs. "This is me younger."
"I figured that." Ariel says as she gently frowns.
"I ...I never lied to you. The sea witch was lying to you. I...I wanted to tell you as soon as I found out. But I was afraid you'd would hate me." Jim sadly admits. Jim then looks at Ariel.
"So you really did forget you were human?" Ariel asks.
"Yes! I did. Until I had a dream about my past the night before the carnival. That's when I found out about everything and wanted to tell you...but then again..I was too afraid to tell you." Jim says with a frown.
Sebastian climbs on to Ariel's lap.
"And you weren't working with the sea witch?" Sebastian asks Jim.
"No! Never!" Jim urges.
Sebastian smiles. "I believe you then."
"You do?" Jim asks surprised.
"Yes I do. I can tell who's lying and who's not! And you boy... are NOT lying." Sebastian says with a smile. He then climbs up on to Jim and stands on his head in his hair.
"Your a good kid Jim." Sebastian says with a smile.
Jim looks up at Jim with his eyes and smiles back. "Thanks Sebastian."
Ariel giggles.
Jim closes the golden object turning off the holograms of younger Jim.
"Well one thing's for sure. This isn't a snarfblaster." Jim says with a chuckle.
"It's not? Then what is it?" Ariel asks with a curious tone.
"It's my mother's charm" Jim says as he smiles looking at the charm.
"Your mother... wow.. what she's like?" Ariel asks with a smile.
"Well why don't you meet her your self?" Jim says with a smile.
Sebastian was confused about the whole snarfblaster thing.
"Really?" Ariel says with a bright smile.
Jim smiles. "Yup. But first you gotta learn how to walk." Jim says as he puts the golden charm in his pocket and quickly picks up Ariel.
Ariel was taking by surprise by Jim's forward actions and Ariel laughs as she is held by Jim.
Ariel puts his arms around Jim's neck. And Jim walks away and out of the metal shack with cradling Ariel in his arms. Jim smiles at Ariel. Ariel smiles back. Sebastian was still on Jim's head.
Jim and Ariel make it out side on the sandy beach. Jim and Ariel shoes entering the yellow loose and warm sand.
Jim sets Ariel down and puts Sebastian on a boulder that was beside him.
Ariel was now standing on her own two feet. She looked down at her feet and smiled. Jim was holding on to Ariel.
"Ok Ariel it's one foot after the other." Jim instructs Ariel as he begins walking slowly. Taking each step like a turtle. Ariel was still holding on to Jim's shoulder with her two hands as she walked beside him.
Ariel smiles as she walks. "Yay!" Ariel exclaims happily.
Jim smiles. "Your doing great!"
"Ok now you have to let go of me and see if you can do it on your own...okay?" Jim says as she slowly walks away from Ariel so that Ariel had nothing to hold on to.
Ariel frowns as Jim walks away. But then she closes her eyes and takes a deep breath of the salty humid air and then opens her eyes determined.
"Ok I can do this!" Ariel claims and starts to walk on her own.
She wobbles a bit but not as much as before when she first took her steps.
Ariel then almost falls over but then catches her self before she could.
Jim and Sebastian gasp.
"I'm..ok" Ariel says with narrowed eyes. She was determined to not fall over.
Ariel then straightens her self up and starts to walk normal. Jim smiles. "Ariel! You did it! Your walking correctly!" Jim exclaims with a bright smile and he runs to Ariel and then lifts Ariel by the waist into the air and spins once with her in the air he gently puts he back down.
Ariel and Jim smile at each other. "Thank you Jim! For teaching me how to walk!" Ariel says with a excited tone.
"Now will you teach me how to run?" Ariel asks happily.
"Well let's get used to walking first. Then you can start learning how to run." Jim says with a grin.
Ariel sighs. "Aw ok fine..." Ariel says a bit disappointed but then smiles at Jim.
Jim then holds Ariel's hand and walks towards the cliff grabbing Sebastian to put on his shoulder.
Ariel walks along Jim holding his hand.
"So then you can answer my questions!" Ariel says excitedly.
Jim chuckles. "Yup go ahead ask me anything" Jim says with a grin as he looks at Ariel then looks in front of him.
"What was that thing between your legs?" Ariel asks happily.
Jim's eyes widen.
"Jim?" Ariel asks a bit confused.
Sebastian groans and Ariel's question and falls asleep on Jim's shoulder. It was still dark out but dawn was soon approaching.
Jim sighs and looks at Ariel raising one eye brow Jim grins. "Let's just say...it's the thing that makes me boy..." Jim says.
Ariel smiles. OOOOOO... So that's why I don't have one." Ariel says and then let's go of Jim's hand and pulls away the waist of the pants away from her body so that she looked down at her womanhood.
Jim blushes and grabs her hand so she stopped doing that.
"Umm.. yeah...don't do that." Jim orders as he looks away blushing red.
Ariel looks at Jim and smiles being obedient. "Ok Jim!" Ariel says with a smile.
Jim and Ariel continue to walk on the dark beach towards the cliff holding hands.
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