Awwww I only got 2 reviews last time :( I know I don't update as often but it would mean so much more if you guys reviewed, it would show me how you guys feel about the direction im taking the story, and it also feels good to see the story is paying off. Im actually really confused right now, because I want to keep adding on to my other story as well, Jasper's love and Nate's friendship but somehow I always end up writing this one, so what do you guys think?

Rachel's Pov

"So..." Neil started looking at Emmet.

"Oh" I said looking back and forth between Emmet and Neil. "this is Emmet."

"Oh I see, so where were you headed too?" he asked almost hopefully.

"Well Emmet was just about to leave , he needs to um go get something." I said almost equally hopefully for a chance to get away from my over excited brother.

Emmet looked confused but as realization dawned on his face, I was almost shoving him away, bruising myself in the process.

"Jasper's going to kill me." he whispered.

I managed to give him the most pleading look I could.

"Fine." he said as he mussed my hair and gave Neil a deathly look.

I sighed in relief, I love Emmet with my whole heart, but boy could he get crazy and an amusement park was just not the right place for that.

"What do we do now?" I asked

"Well aren't you lined up to go on the Fireball?" Neil asked his dark eyes resting peacefully on me.

"Oh,oh ya." What am I getting myself into, I wasn't scared but I the earlier vision of Alice would be the most embarrassing thing ever.

I felt the seat belt go down on me and held on as tightly as I could, there was going to be so much twirling, ugghhh I was feeling sick just thinking about it. I could feel my knuckle going white as I held on.

"Are you all right?" Neil asked concern echoed in his beautiful voice, did I just say that he had a beautiful voice?

"Yeah um, when is it going to star-" I was stopped as the ride began at blinding speed flipping and twirling. I could feel the blood in my mouth as I bit harder and harder into my lip, oh God I would puke before the ride was even over. I heard Neil's laugh and for some reason I felt assured that everything was going to be okay, but that might just have been my imagination.

The ride halted, as I took a deep breathe, had I stopped breathing? I stood up, a bit too fast and almost swayed to the ground as I felt someones arms surround me.

"Rachel!" Neil, it was Neil thank God.

"No don't worry im, im fine, just a little woozy that's all, dont worry" I strained to hold myself up, and every place that Neil had touched was tingling as I felt myself blush.

"Im okay you can let go." I managed to say, over the embarrassment.

"You are not okay." he said as sat me on a bench. "your lip is bleeding really bad and can you please breathe, youre scaring the hell out of me right now."

Oh ya breathe, breathe, I told myself. His face was so close now, just inches away, breathe, ya that's what I needed to do, breathe. I looked away afraid to meet his eyes.

My cell rang breaking the silence, oh thank God, I looked at the caller ID.

It was Jasper shoot. I pressed cancel.

"Arent you going to take that?" Neil asked as he sat beside me, my hand started tingling all over again as his arm brushed against mine.

"No, its nothing." Just as I said that the phone started ringing again , it was Jasper, I pressed cancel but two seconds later it rang again, this time it was Edward.

"The person seems desperate."

"Oh no its nothing." I said quickly shoving my phone into my pocket, and then it started ringing again!.

I opened it one more time, Bella, I offed the cell and put it back, is it too much too ask for a little privacy.

"Can we please go on another ride?" I asked looking at Neil, for all I knew I was probably getting tracked by my family right now.

"Are you sure, you were about to faint a second ago." Neil said his eyes resting on mine.

"Yes Im sure." I said, getting up and take his hand in mine, as I led him through the crowds.

Neil's POV

I would never let ago, I could spend a eternity looking at her, holding her hand. I loved the way, she was quiet one moment then excited the next, how her dark hair flowed behind her... I could never let go.

"Hey you want to go on this one?" she asked dropping my hand, oh eternity just couldn't arrive sooner could it?

"Storm?" I asked looking at the sign "you were just about to puke and you want to be upside down like that?"

She looked at the ride, judging it. It was a large wheel surrounded by cars with people in them. It was spinning really fast.

"Sure" she said.

"alright your wish my command." we entered the line up. "Are you extremely sure you want to go on, it looks like well have to sit in one kart?"

Rachel gave me a questioning look.

"Two to 1 cart please," employ instructed, well this was going to be awkward.

"No, its fine, lets just get on." Rachel said hurriedly.

Rachel's POV

We got on the small cart, Neil was sitting upright and I sat awkwardly between his legs, this was going to be uncomfortable., the small of my back was touching his. The lady came back and enclosed the bars around us , so that we had no way of knowing what was going on outside.

It was just me and him in this small little Kart thing, with no way of escaping.

"He4re you dont have to sit like that you know." He said gently pulling my body towards his , so I was laying on his chest his chin above my head, my legs sprawled between his.

I took a deep breath in to calm my self, I was nervous like hell, he could do anything he wanted with me and nobody would no, but somehow I knew he wouldn't. His scent made my heart accelerate a thousand time faster as I managed to turn around and look him in the eyes, "thanks." I said almost to quietly to be heard.

"No problem." and he smiled and I managed to get myself out of shock and tightly hold on to the bars.

Neil laughed.

"What?" I asked curious.

"Youre going to break the handles you know." he said pointing at my arms linked around the bars.

"Well something could happen." I suggested.

"Were surrounded by this cage, there is no way at all, you could fall out, and I would never let anything happen to you anyway." He said.

And I believed him, just like that and lossend my hold on the bars.

The ride started spining.

"So, who was that guy with you earlier?" Neil asked.

"Oh Emmet, hes my brother."

"Oh, thats, thats good to hear." he exclaimed.

"Why?"

"I thought he was your boyfriend." he awnsered slowly and that set me off.

"hahahahahaaaa, wow,ahahaha, you cant be serious."

Neil laughed to then stopped "what whats so funny?"

"Emmet being my boyfriend, ahahaha, that's , that's funny!" I managed to say in between my laughter.

"Quiet laughing, that mistake could have happened to anyone." he said.

The ride began to speed up and I was pushed tighter and tighter against Neil.

"Sorry" I said managing to slide myself forward but then getting knocked back again as we went upside down.

"Its okay."

"So, were going to high school this year, are you excited?" he asked, I was tired of sitting this way so I let my head rest against his chest and let my body rest against his.

"Ya sure, being even more under the radar with my overprotective family, what can be more exciting than that?"

he did the cute laugh of his "at least you have brothers and sisters, I for one would kill to have siblings."

"You woudnt be so sure once you had them, trust me." I said

The ride ended and we were finally let out, I breathed a sigh of relief as the cold air hit me and I started shivering.

"Here." Neil handing me his jacket, it smelled just like him and I couldn't help but nuzzle my face against it, great now I probably look like a idiot and a stalker.

"Are they that bad?" he asked having not noticed my weirdness, thank god for that.

"No their not, I guess im not really being fair, they're awesome, and loving, a tad bit annoying but great, if they weren't their my life would have been completely different."

He gave me a questioning look.

"I was adopted, my dad died when I was really young, in a car crash, and the Cullens moved in next door, and on my birthday my mom died and ive been living with them ever since." I said.

"Oh, im sorry, really." he said gazing into my eyes for any sign of hurt.

"Dont be, I think that everything happens for a reason, my parents died and because of that I get to live with the family I have today."

"Thats-." Neil started but was cut of by my groan.

I saw Alice, Jasper, Edward, and Bella standing not too far from us. Alice looked giddy, Bella was giving me a wam smile, while Jasper and Edward didn't look as pleasant.

Neil followed my gaze "are those you siblings."

"Yes they are." I was almost whispering looking straight at Jasper giving him the most pleading look I could

"Wow I never imagined they would all be so big."

"Ya, I think I got to go now."I said hastily. I took of the jacket and gave it to Neil. "thanks for putting up with, I had a really great time." and with that I was running towards my doom.

"Wait-" I heard Neil yell.

Sooo...Please review! I only got 2 last chapter! So things are starting to heat up, well they'll only go up from here! A certain werewolf cough Seth cough will come in the next chapter. I think im only going to update if I get more than 5 Reviews! So plz update with a Jasper on top!