M.P.O.V (now in the past.)
I sat at near the window looking around in satisfaction. My party was a huge success, practically the whole college was here and some of them scattered in the garden. I was grinning and laughing with Iggy, Gazzy and Angel. Nudge and Fang were dancing with my parents, not in a creepy way. See there is one thing you should know about my parents. They are AWESOME! Everyone wanted them there, and we're in college. Do I really need to describe how awesome they are? That's when Gazzy said," Max will you dance with me?"
"Gazzy. My sweet Gazzy, if I dance then the rest of the party will happen in the garden." I told him smiling.
So… wait where were we? Right we were laughing about Fang's "fight" with James. Yes I got over it, Fang convinced me. Speak …No wait think of the devil and he arrives…
F.P.O.V.(Still past)
I finished dancing with Max's mom, being my usual charming self. I turned to head towards the window when Nudge said," Fang let's dance. ".
"Hmmm ya sure." I said absently making my way over there.
"Come on Maxi. You've made enough excuses. If you don't dance today, then you'll never dance in your entire life." He told me, smirking and sitting down next to me.
"Breaking news," I said spreading my hands wide(A. when she said I looooooove you :D)
Then I dropped my voice to a whisper."I can't dance!"
"But you can walk….." He replied piously.
"What are you saying?" I asked confused and a little freaked out.
Fang cupped his hands and screamed in my years," COME TO THE DANCE FLOOR I'LL EXPLAIN!"
I swatted his arm while he walked off.
Hot sun beating down I can't dance, I can't talk.
burning my feet just walking around.
Hot sun making me sweat
'Gators getting close, hasn't got me yet
Only thing about me is the way I walk.
I can't dance, I can't sing
I'm just standing here selling everything.
Somewhere along the way I joined him and we ended up…..
Blue Jean's sitting on the beach, She's got a body under that shirt,
her dog's talking to me, but she's out of reach.
but all she wants to do is rub my face in the dirt.
Dancing, and don't tell Fang because his ego is big enough, can I just say he is goooooood.
Cause, I can't dance, I can't talk. Oh and checking everything is in place,
Only thing about me is the way I walk.
I can't dance, I can't sing
I'm just standing here selling.
you never know who's looking on.
Fang twirled me around while we danced. I was actually having fun.
Young punk spilling beer on my shoes, Thick smoke, see her smiling through.
fat guy's talking to me trying to steal my blues.
G.P.O.V. (PAST)
I watched Fang and Max dancing, him whispering in each other's ears, laughing, smiling and basically having a great time. I wanted that. Fang was so lucky to be like that with her. So I walked over to the bar and sat down.
"A coke, make it strong." I told the bartender.
When he handed it to me, I gulped it down in a go.
"One more" I requested.
"Easy buddy" he said sarcastically, handing me the drink, watching as I drowned that as well.
That's when Nudge walked up to me and said," What's wrong Gaz?".
Everything. My life. Max and Fang! I wanted to say, but instead I said," Nothing much Nudge." I sighed and continued," Sometimes I just wish that there was someone."
"Who?" She inquired.
"Someone. Who only saw me, and I only saw her…" Somewhere along the way of me saying this sentence, we had leaned in…
A.P.O.V.(still past-last one in the chapter, I swear!)
We were all joking around when I saw them.
"ZOMG!" I said almost screaming.
I just silently pointed to where I saw the SIGHT. Everyone followed my gaze and had the same expressions of shock. Except Fang; but his eyes were wide.
Nudge and Gazzy. MAKING OUT.
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I added the past- present thing in the previous chapters,
Please tell me you guys approve of the length now.
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Iggy's outfit-
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