right, we need to talk about something. i got a review last night that i only just woke up to. like, i am in bed, on my laptop after waking up RIGHT now. this review talked about logic holes and plotholes. i will say this only once. i understand that there are people who have read and written fanfiction longer than i have that will WILL care immensely about this so i am just gonna say this and face the flak. i honestly don't care. i knew there would be logic holes and such because well... i wanted there to be some. i wont hate on the original material but i will say that there were some places where the original show ALSO had logic holes. naruto is an uzumaki so he should apparently "understand seals as they are in his blood" yet we hardly see him use them in the show. i am simply implementing this information into my story. and in the case that he would need to know what seals are, i could be wrong but wasn't the original time frame between graduation and wave around a few months? for a "prodigy" in seals with "inherited" ability, i think that would be enough time to get enough of a understanding to use a bloodline that revolves around them. and with the sniper parts? i know i kind of skimmed over this part but i'll clear this up now. when kami gave him knowledge of how weapons work, this included the ins and out of weapon creation and engineering. its like she gave him parts of a jiqsaw puzzle and numbered the pieces. he can see what goes where BUT still needs to put together the parts

now.. i know this all sound likes i am singling out this reviewer and having a go at him. i am not. i saw what this review was saying and decided to clear up some of the things that i can see, was not said in my story. you can review whatever you want, just be prepared for me to address what i feel i need to. overall i will say this. yes my story's logic is not fully foolproof or 100% accurate but still, i DO try my best. i am enjoying writing this and its reviews like these that DO help me become a better writer, but please try to make it sound less like an attack on my writing.

once again, not having a go, just needed to say this as despite what it may seem like, i AM still a person who is easily dissuaded and brought down by criticism.