I am aware of a review made on my story about plagiarism. However this is false, it is simply a troll account targeting writers. However i must say this story is a rewrite/adaptation of a former story I have created on another account.


"Who's he talking to?" James said as he nodded towards Peter. He sat next to a girl in Hufflepuff robes across the great hall as we ate lunch. We all glanced over discreetly as we could, she was a short girl with frizzy brown hair.

"She's year below us I believe. I think they met in herbology club or something" Lily answered looking down at her paper

"How the hell do you know that?" James looked at her astonished

"Because I listen, plus I over hear things in the bathroom" She shrugged "Be happy for him"

"I am, just astonished he's managed to pluck up the courage to talk to a girl" He replied, to be honest we all were. Peter was often quiet, reflected perfectly by his animagus, and we never imagined how he'd be in that position. However I found it endearing, he was such a nice boy and deserved it.

"How long till he ends up like you two" Sirius smirked as he glanced at me, which I responded with a glare.

"Oh shut up, will you?" Debbie hissed at him completely unimpressed with his remark

"What's wrong with you?" He snapped back at his girlfriend across the table. She let out a large sigh before responding to him

"I'm fed up of your stupid jokes, really not in the mood" She said harshly, before he could say anything she left the room storming out the hall

"Women need to come with warning labels. Bloody moody time bombs" He shook his head as he looked at the rest of us, both Lily and I wore astonished expression, completely offended at his words "Don't you agree Prongs?"

"No Sirius" James disagreed, which was more shocking to us than the original comment "She's your girlfriend, go after her. She'll get more annoyed if you don't"

Sirius mumbled under his breath which none of us heard, slowly rising from his feet and leaving the hall to find Debbie. Lily looked over at James "Since when did you become a woman expert?"

"Since I've had to deal with Amy for the past seven years" he chuckled nervously, ruffling his hair.

"I'm not that bad!" I exclaimed, looking at Remus hoping he'd defend me. He simply put his hands up as to say don't get me involved. I looked back at Lily who was laughing

"Oh Amy you can be. Remember in 4th year when you threatened a boy because he took the last slice of chocolate cake!" The pair laughed together at the memory, Remus and I sharing a knowing look. It was only a matter of time.


Sirius turned up fashionably late to potions, by himself. He rolled up his sleeves and opened his book ready to get started on his own concoction. I stirred the bubbling cauldron before talking to him

"Where's Debbie?" I asked quietly, the boy let out a sigh as he began to add ingredients to his cauldron.

"She said she's not feeling up to class right now. She just kept shouting at me" His tone blunt, until he looked at Remus "Their time of the month is worse than yours Moony"

"You probably wouldn't be so happy if your internal organs decided to shred themselves causing you days of pain" I grumbled as I read the instruction from the textbook, Sirius' face soon showed an expression of disgust at the idea "Look all I'm saying is just don't be your usual cocky self, it'll just make her angrier"

"Chocolate" Remus finally spoke as he poured some ingredients into his potion "Works for everything"

Sirius looked towards me to see if I agreed with the statement. I titled my head slightly thinking about it before nodding at him. Chocolate probably was the answer if not it was worth a try. I looked down at my creation, a bright green potion bubbled away gently

"If I may say, I believe that is near perfect" Professor Slughorn stood behind peering down into the cauldron "You truly do have a talent for potions, have you thought of a career in the field?"

"Actually I haven't given much thought to any careers at all Sir" I answered, he simply nodded moving onto the next table. Sirius glanced down at his mixture concerned before pulling out the spoon which was not completely mangled "Amy, you think you can tutor me?"


"So there's trouble in paradise, that's what I heard" Peter said to Sirius as I sat by the fire toasting marshmallows over the flames. We assumed Debbie was in the dorm, not yet seen since lunch.

"She's just grumpy that's all" Sirius explained to Peter as he sat down on the sofa "But you got yourself a bird"

"Sirius, calling us birds isn't very respectful" I said popping a marshmallow into my mouth, he waved his hand at me shooing away my comment.

"Well not exactly, we just started talking and we both have similar interests. She's so nice" Peter smiled to himself

"Well we're happy for you" I mumbled over the food in my mouth

"Yeah, but does she have good…?" Sirius said his hands gesturing around his chest, I looked at him blankly. Of all the things he could ask about the situation he asked that, after I'd spent the day lecturing him about being more respectful towards women. I took that as my signal to leave and made my way up to the dorm.

Debbie was stood looking out the window as I entered the dorm. She did not acknowledge my presence at all, her back turned to me so I could not see her face.

"You've been acting weird, is something up?" I asked as I stood in the mirror tying my hair back into a ponytail. She stayed silent. There was no need for words, I knew something was wrong, she was never this quiet. I walked towards her cautiously "You can tell me anything, you know that"

Slowly her gaze drifted from the window towards me, the light reflected of the tears on her cheeks, her eyes red from crying, her lip quivering slightly. Worry filled my body, Debbie never cried, I'd only seen her cry on few occasions. Something had broken the strongest person I knew.

"Debbie, please tell me" I begged, her eyes stared into mine before dropping down, my eyes dropped to notice her hand gently placed on her lower abdomen.


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