frnds extremly srry fr being late..pehle exam tha, fir ek family get together..abhie bhi pura free nahi hu..samne ek cultural function hey fir bahar jana hey..But i thought enough waiting fr u all so lets dig in this chapter now
SALMAZHV kya jaruri hey nayi life suru krne ke liye nayi sathi cahiye?kya ek larki akeli nahi jee sakti?
MUSICAL PRINCESS, GUEST, PIKU, GUEST, CIADANS, GUEST, RAJVIFAN, LUV DUO ND PURVI, GUEST, DRIZZLE, thank you
frnds chapter ki end mey ek impo anouncement hey..pls dhyan se dekh k answer dena
pls ignore typo & lets continue
Suhani came out of the washroom seem to be tensed, she sat on the bed and bit her lips
Sachin came inside the room with "Suhani mere wo kal ki file..kya hua tum pareshan kyun dikh rahi ho?"
"haan..nahi kuch nahi..aap ko koi file cahiye tha?"
"mein dekh lunga..tum baitho..tabiyet thik hey na tumhari?"
"haa haan mein bilkul thik hu, acha aap parso mujhe kya denge?"
"kuch nahi"
"haww..kyun?"
"kyun kuch dena cahiye"
Suhani nodded with a pout "bilkul dena cahiye"
"acha..fir tum mujhe kya dogi?"
"umm abhie taq socha nahi"
"mujhe kuch special cahiye"
"hmm thik hey fir mujhe bhi special cahiye"
Sachin smiled "tumhe mein koi aam gift de bhi nahi skta, u r so special"
Suhani smiled shyly "aap bhi na"
Sachin chuckled "waise humare shadi wala special tofa jaisa kuch mat dena"
Suhani answered defensively "meine nahi diya tha wo gift..wo to apke saliyo ne diya tha.."
"haan kya bakhra banaya..wo bhi ek CID officer ko..yaad hey tumhe"
Suhani giggled,Sachin drifted back to memory lane
*Sachin and suhani came to Suhani's place to fulfill the rasam of pagphera.
After some refreshment at home Sachin was about to move around when two of Suhani's friend and one of her cousin meet Sachin
after some introduction they said "jiju hum to vul hi gaye..hum to aapko ek rasam ke liye bulane aye they"
"rasam?"
"haa devi ki puja ki ek bidhi hey jo apko krna hey"
"kaise bidhi?"
they led him to backyards and showed a photo covered with red cloth, "yea devi ma hey..inki arti krna hey aur kuch kasme khane hey..bas"
"per yea kaunsi devi hey?"
Sachin was about to pull the cover but Suhani's cousin stopped him "arey nahi..jiju arti se pehle aap devi ki cehra dekh logi to Suhani di ke sath kuch bura ho sakta hey"
"kya?"
"mtlb aise mana jata hey we knw aap sayed inn bato pey yakin nahi krte..acha chaliye aap dekh hi.."
Sachin cut her words "nahi nahi..thik hey..bolo kaise kya krna hey..mein kr lunga"
they frwrded a thali with sindur, bindi, kajal on it and said "isse arti kijiye aur kahiye aj se suhani ki alawa aap kisi ki taraf nahi dekhnge uss najar se..usse bahut pyar krenge..devi man puja krenge..uski har baat manenge..wo apke liye sbse khas hogi"
"yea sab bolna hey?bas..yea sab tum logo ko sikhane ki jarurat nahi..mein bolta hu na"
he strted..he noticed the giggling of girls but really didnt get its meaning
when the arti and promising was over they were laughing uncontralbly
"kya hua tum log.."
"aap aab photo se ghungat hataiye"
Sachin obeyed confusingly..its Suhani's picture
Sachin looked back.. Suhani's cousin controlled her laughter fit "jiju yea hum log ki taraf se aapke liye gift tha..surely puri jindegi yaad rehegi kyun..haha" the laughter ballon again burst
Sachin himself joined in now*
"arey kaha kho gaye aap?"
Sachin came back "bas honeymoon phase of life yaad kr raha tha..tumhe yaad hey humare pehle raat?tum itna ghabra gayi ki khud hi dudh piliya tha.."
Suhani turned red but was smilling.. "gala sukh raha tha"
"haan aur haath bhi kaanp rahe they"
"aap..aap chup rahiye kaam hey mujhe"
Suhani got up and rushed out..Sachin was laughing behind
Suhani entered the kitchen, still red.
"sayed iss bar aapko sach mey bara special gift mil jaye"
she moved to hall and picked up her mobile and dialled a number "hello Astha clinic?"
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Suhani came out of the clinic, a special smile pasted on her face
she is feeling like her world complete, and herat fill with a different feeling of love is pounding against her ribs
she touched her belly, she still cant believe..she is going to give such an wonderful gift to sachin?
She tried to imagine what her reaction will be aftr getting in the cab
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Kajal finished her packing and lied back on bed
tommorow she will be leaving fr mumbai
her hometown, she came to mumbai at very early age..her father's last transfer
her college life..her first job her bondings with collugues, some precious relations, some memorable moments, some lifelong lession everything is from mumbai
her loss, her grief, her lonelyness, her broken dreams, her unfulfilled wishes everything from mumbai
the city of dreams made her dream and it only crashed all her dreams
even her last hope, but she is happy today
because somewhere she knows she was not the right choice
she was internally too broken to make some one happy
a smile crept on her lips
everyone advice her to move on, whats this move on means?
Have she not left all those who bothers her
have she not lived an independent life on her on will?
Why moving on for a girl is always tagged with getting married?
She is now living a content life is this not moving on?
Yes she have her share of sorrows, memories that bring tears but she also had her share of joy memories which make her laugh
then have she not moved on?
She is now helping others too overcome the situation she had faced
she now look back but at the end smile tearfully
she is bitterly shocked with her father's behaviour but pleasantly suprised at her luck of getting Sachin as her friend
she is depressed when thinking about the treatment she got from her husband and in laws
but she feels extremely satisfied thinking about the family type enviornment and bunch of friends she got in her first job
she feels extreme hurt thinking how she was thought just as a body to give pleasure, but she feels extremly happy remembering the respect she got as inspector Kajal
she feels dejected thinking how she failed in her love but she feels relieved how looking back how she recovered and now is strong enough to survive alone
she at times complains to god but at times is grateful
so in total now she has moved on..balanced sheet of her life is equally debited and credited
till now she was afraid to face mumbai again..somewhere a weakness was stopping her
but today she is not feeling that vulnarable again
she is feeling strangely satisfied
she wants to see sachin and suhani happy together she wants to meet her family away family
and.. She wants to visit her father once. She will not ask him anything, no complain nothing
she wants to show him that she is still standing..and moving frwrd
he had once taught her to walk..but left her hand when she needed him most
but she didnt forget his lession
she wants to show him
she also wants to know whereabouts of her inlaws
but now she dont feel anger on them, but a strnge pity
really she has moved on
with a smile she closed her eyes.
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Suhani lied down on bed..whole day she was feeling like walking on a rainbow..
Sachin had asked twice but she didnt disclose..its his suprise gift
Sachin noticed Suhani closing her eyes with a smile
he too smiled
while younger he had read a story if someone did something good to you dont just thank but pass it on..
When reading that he didnt realised the true meaning now he did
if you do good to someone something good will return..
And he tried to help as much as possible and it has returned to him
he wrapped his arm around his precious possecion who scoot closer
he smiled and closed his eyes feeling fully satisfied
next chapter will may be the last chapter
now pls review and yes read the thing below carefully
dont strt throwing flames please frnds
in my recently finished stry i discussed that i wl write a new abhirika and for that i need a help from any doctor frnd in ff
but got huge negetive responce and advice that i shouldnt write on abhirika
nw i have a plot in which, both charecters will have flaws in that (some reviwer say i insult charecters im nt sure if they speak truth) that stry wil have again some probs of real life and no guarantee of happy ending
but whtever it is, the plot fits only on abhirika
nw u all decide ki mein likhu yea nah
just give a word yes or no
dnt suggest ki i should write dayerya rajvi or duo instead
bcz fr all that i need time
yea to iss abhirika ko pen down ki bad hi kuch soch paungi mein..or else iss idea ko dimag ko nikalne ki bad, for both i need time..
So just voice your opinion about abhirika
i will go with majority
till now seeing both FF and FB responce its 10positive and 8 negative responce
and frnds who want duo dayerya rajvi..
Srry to them i am nt in a mood to write those now.
So now only give your opinion about abhirika
yes or no..no details bashing!
R and R
