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Chapter 11: Orochimaru's perfect weapon!!(Trace-Kun and Rei-chan to the Rescue!)

By Ruki-kun6

Ruki finished making his handsigns and his green aura formed around two of his finger tips he pointed it at Orochimaru with anger in his eyes yelling " Aura style: DESTRUCTIVE SENBON!!"

A green blast shot out where Orochimaru would have been, but ruki was disappointed when the smoke cleared and he saw, a kid with short white hair, standing in front of him, and it had seemed the kid had adsorbed the blast Orochimaru laughed " you have no idea the power I have in my control now"

Ruki activated his sharingan " try me.."

Orochimaru laughed even louder as the kid actived a sharingan one eye seemed to have that of Ruki's and another seemed to have a regular three pronged sharingan "this is perfect…now to test my ultimate weapon.."

Ruki looked shocked " what the hell is he?"

An evil smile came upon Orochimaru's face " oh..i spliced the last remaining genes of Kimimaru, sasuke, and you together…and it was a success, oh yeah and threw in a curse mark…. He is my perfect weapon..his name is Kimisasuki"

Ruki looked even more pissed "Orochimaru!! Damn you… im going to finish you once and for all.."

Orochimaru snapped his fingers and bones grew out of Kimisasuki " you can play with this trash Kimisasuki"

Kimisasuki lunged forward at ruki, and Ruki barely dodged a piece of his bone managed to scratch across Ruki's face…and blood dripped from the wound..

(meanwhile)

Rei-chan and Trace deployed on a mission to retrieve Ruki, they arrived in OTo in no time..for they hadn't taken a break…they didn't want to waist time…or Rei-chan didn't Trace on the other hand had wished they could rest

They decided on the last location that Ruki had been outside the base of Orochimaru and Trace began to shiver at the sign of charka he was detecting.., Rei picked up the same strange of chakra and Trace softly spoke " do you feel that?"

Rei nodded " yeah… Ruki's down there. But that strange chakra what is it?"

Trace just shivered more " its pure evil…I haven't sinced this kinda chakra since you got pissed at Zin."

Rei smiled " soo Ruki could really be in danger if this kinda chakra is present"

Both Rei and Trace sighed and began to walking the creepy base of Orochimaru

(back to the battle)

Orochimaru had completely disappeared and now it is just Ruki and Kimisasuki in Orochimaru's throne Room. Kimisasuki moved faster than Ruki, so Ruki continually tried to block. Because ruki was never really good at taijutsu and Ruki knew if he had to keep this up, he would surely loose the battle…

Ruki made handsigns "Starlight dragon jutsu" a glowing sphere appearing in Ruki's hand then it took on the form of a dragon, it lunged toward Kimisasuki and when it made contact with him, it blasted him through the Roof causing the whole compound to shake..Then Rei and Trace sped up saying " damn we better hurry up"

Ruki climbed through the whole in the roof knowing it was far from over. He stared at Kimisasuki as he got up…"impressive"

Ruki just staired at him " you're a monster…orochimaru's pawn."

Kimisasuki laughed " like you have room to talk,"

Ruki made handsigns "ROSE PEDAL JUTSU"

Rose pedals floated around in the air and then they turned to needles, and rained down on Kimisasuki, but he was able to absorb them,and then sent them back at Ruki and Ruki fell back words, and then quickly picked himself back up "HYPERLINK "ninjutsu-11.php" \\\\l "012" Mizu no Muchi (Whip of Water)"

Kimisasuki made a whip of water appear and lashed it at ruki. It hit him in the face breaking away part of the shell that Ruki was using to protect himself, then the water whip raps itself around Ruki's neck

Ruki throws out needles as s distraction, forcing Kimisasuki to realease the Jutsu and free Ruki. Ruki moves quickly and makes handsigns " starlight sphere" and then Ruki rushes toward Kimisasuki and stabs the Jutsu right through his body, leaving Ruki staning there stuck in him with a WTF look on his face Kimisasuki just laughs and says " you cant win.. your pathetic" then punches Ruki to the ground .

And about that time Trace and Rei get to where the big whole in the throne room is and Trace spots orochimaru trying to slither away , the Rei says " trace go help Ruki. This bastard is mine" then Trace heads up to where Kimisasuki and Ruki is.."need help Ruki?"

Ruki just laughs while getting up " took you long enough, and no"

A curse mark starts to appear going up the side of Kimisasuki's face as he laughs even more " your all fools now ill kill you both"

Both Ruki and trace staired at him

Then Trace spoke " you sure you don't want my help"

Ruki smiled " not yet"

Then the curse mark began to completely transform Kimisasuki and it looked like a combination curse mark of sasuke's transformation and Kimimarus Transformation

Ruki looked at trace " on second thought yeah I want your help"

Trace just smiled " ok then"

(else where)

Rei-chan chases after Orochimaru and throws Kunai stabbing his leggs and making him fall to the ground, then she stood in front of him " now die you creppy ass pedifile"

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