Ok you guyz…. I really would like some feedback….. I need to know if I should keep writing or not……….
IN MY HONEST OPINION….THIS IS MY LEAST FAVORITE CHAPTER….. But I think it's necessary….. PLEASE REVIEW (this is in Jasper's POV)
"Emmett, what is going on?" how much anger could one hold? Did Emmett lose Edward somewhere, or was it something else?
"Some help down here would be nice, thanks!" Nice, now on to the sarcasm. The family was down in a matter of moments and couldn't understand the situation.
Edward in Emmett's grasp. Emmett struggling to hold him back. Edward's eyes were cold and black; not with hunger, but with pure hatred and loss. I walked up to him and put my hand on his shoulder. Suddenly, I felt that much was drained out of me.
"Thank you!" Edward whispered, after he stopped fighting against Emmett.
"No problem," I said breathlessly. I couldn't blame him for feeling this way. We all knew how he felt and I more than anyone else.
"How is she?" He looked at Carlisle and then at me. Waves of pain were rolling off of him. I couldn't stand it, if not physically, then mentally.
"She's doing fine. She doesn't seem to be in much pain!" Carlisle's voice let the tension in the room vanish. That is, until I spoke.
"Physically anyways…." I didn't say this out loud of course, but I wasn't used to blocking my thoughts since Edward hasn't been with us for a while. Suddenly he went stiff.
"What?" Edward was outraged, but I didn't think I should help him. I decided that we should talk in private, because you know me and public speaking.
May we speak alone? He nodded his head.
I'll meet you in your room! Again he nodded.
I was walking up the stairs when Alice yelled, "NO!"
I looked up and saw the sorrow in her eyes. "You can't let him in there; you know what she'll do!" I nodded. Of course, I should have thought of that. I turned to face Edward.
Actually, let's meet in my study! He obliged even though he felt very confused. We were in my study and I closed the door, not that that would do much.
"Spit it out, Jasper!" Anger was in his voice, but pain was in his eyes. I didn't say anything; I just let my mind go back to when I was in there, with her. I explained how her heart was hallowed; the feeling she had of doubt, being unloved, disappointment, being unworthy, and of being alone. I also explained that she had no burning of fire inside her from the bite. I was there to help her, but she couldn't be helped. Even with my powers, it was like her heart was blocked with an eccentrically high wall and I couldn't get passed.
After everything was explained, Edward was speechless. I tried to calm him down, but he fought me the whole time. The only other feeling, besides anger, was loss for another. This wasn't going to end well.
After a few minutes I decided to leave. I would give him some privacy, and he would talk to me when he was ready.
I walked out and Alice was standing there staring off into space again.
"Alice?" I was getting worried. She didn't usually have visions this often. "Alice, can you hear me?"
"Bella…" she didn't say anything else because Edward walked out and looked at Alice. His emotions became from being angry to being dreadful. The next minute Edward ran up the stairs to go to his room. I guess he didn't know yet. I ran after him and blocked his path.
"Jasper, not now, please!" I could barely him.
Instead of talking (or thinking for that matter) to him, I simply knocked on the door. Suddenly everything clicked in place for him.
His knees locked and he fell toward the ground. I caught him and weakly smiled; showing that everything was going to be okay.
I knocked again and saw the knob was turning. Edward held his breath. When the door opened, Edward was shocked. But, that wasn't what I felt. The only feeling I got of Edward was unconditional love for her.
He couldn't move; he just stared out after her. I sort of expected this; the way she was feeling, I was surprised she didn't run right after she woke up.
"Edward, are you alright?" I forced him to stand up straight… but honestly he didn't look so well.
"She ran! Why did she run?" His voice was filled with pain and suffering… I couldn't bare this, but I loved Bella too, I had to do this for her.
I was going to explain everything. I mean come on! How dumb can my brother be?! But I never got the chance. Edward started pushing his way downstairs again.
"Alice… what happened?" Edward's voice was shaky, but still stern enough to be leader-ish.
She wasn't responding. What was wrong with my Alice? She collapsed into my arms, and I started to rock her. "Alice, honey, come on. It's Jasper, please!" I couldn't believe this, what was going on. I was going to ask Edward, but he wasn't there anymore.
Moments later I heard Rosalie and Esme enter the room. Now I knew this couldn't be good!
