Hai my people... Heres the chapter okay?
BTW Im stopping the 'It's So...' cause its annoying... okay? well here you go!
Chapter 11 Notes lead on to Dangerous things
Max's POV
I am in a store right now full of bathing suits...with Nudge.. Am I happy? Well no..I'm scared to death right now.
"Maaaxxx!" Called Nudge.
"Yeah?"
She came running up to me from one of many lines of swim suits, more detailed? The bikini row.. greaattt.. "I have one for you!" She said. This will be the 13th one so far. Nudge held up the bikini. It was black with red stripes. The top hasties in the back to go over my neck and upper back. The bottoms had a red bow on the side. This one, I actually wouldn't mind wearing " Ughh, another one?" I complained. Nudge rolled her eyes. "Yeah Max, another one. You should be happy! Fang's going to fall head over heels for you, feeding you grapes! Go put it on!" She said as she pushed me into the stall. "UGGHH."
"Shut up and get your ass in there Max!" Mummbled Nudge. Wow..she used...bad language. That's a record there people! A new scarey record!
I put it on and looked in the mirror. Hmm.. Not too bad. "How are you doin' in there? You okay?" The fashtonista of the universe called.
"No, Nudge. I'm digging a grave in the changing stalls right now, so leave a message after the tone. Beep." I grumbled. I was not happy about trying on my 13th freaking swim suit. Imagine, getting undressed, putting something off, then getting dressed AGAIN 13 FUCKING TIMES!
It's killing me. "Do you like it?" She yelled through the door. I looked in the mirror again. "I guess so."
I took it off and got re-dressed. "Yay! Then lets go buy it!" She squealed. I just nodded. This girl has way too much energy. Like a 4 year old. I mean come on! So we bought it and started heading to the front of the mall. When we were in the elevator, a guy with dark brown/almost black hair, that slightly covered his left eye, ran in with us. "Thanks." He huffed. "No problem." I mumbled. I glanced at Nudge, who was drooling over the fact that. He. Was. Hot. I mean, this guy is 2nd after Fang! He had a light complextion, slight build, dark eyes that had some very light blue in them. The guy was my age, blue polo shirt, that was unbuttoned, skinny jeans, and vans. He wore a cross necklace and had a black man-bracelet made of rubber.
He stopped bending ovr on his knees and stood up. Woah. This guy must be 5'11 - 6'2.
He looked down to me, reachedout his hand and said, " Hey, I'm Ryan. Ryan Brooks"
(A/N The name 'Ross' Came to mind but! xDD IDKKK! lol forgive me)
I grabbed his hand, which was nice, big and way firm...but very gentle. "I'm Max." Ryan smiled. " That's a nice name. Does it stand for something?" He asked. I nodded " Maximum. Maximum Ride."
I pointed to Nudge. "That's Nudge Conners" I introduced. He shook her hand too. "Are you guys going to the beach later?" He asked.
"Yeah.. We're bringing tw-mmphg" Nudge's hand just ... wait for it... 'ACCIDENTLY' slaps over my mouth. "Yes, yes we are!" Ryan side- smiled. "I'm wondering.. Are both of you single?" Nudge took her hand away from my now throbbing mouth. We nodded. Fang the ass, is NOT my boyfriend.. the reason Iggy is here cause it's his beach house, and I'm pretty sure he likes Nudge. "Oh, I'm just wondering." 'Ding' The elevator opened. We all stepped off and headed to the entrance. Ryan stopped ad turned to us. He shook my hand again and this time I felt something in it.
He winked and said " Bye."
Walked slowly backwards, then turned around and walked off.
"Woah! He was H-O-T HOT! Did you see the way he left? Like OMG! He is the reason our summer is blazing! " Nudge rambled. I looked down to my hand to see some paper with writing on it. Before I could read it, Missy to my right here, snatched it out of my hand.
'7pm
On the Beach.
-See you there ;D'
"Max... YOU JUST GOT ASKED ON A DAAATTEEE!" Nudge screamed. "Nudge we need to leave, your attracting attention." Sure enough when she looked around there were people starring at us like we were stupid. "Okay. Then lets go home. We'll leave the house at 6:30." We were silent the entire ride home. I bet Nudge was thinking fashion ideas for me... Great. Before we entered the house Nudge turned to me. "Don't mention this to Fang, until I tell you." She warned. I nodded. We walked in and saw Fang and Iggy on the couch watching T.V. Both were sleeping. Figures. I glanced at the clock on top of the coffee table. 6:17 pm. " Hey Nudge, Look at the time." I told her. " OMG! I know! We need to get dressed. I'll wake up the guys okay? Hurry go, go!" She yelled. I started going up the stairs as she sprinkled pepper on their noses. Oh good God... she's just asking for it. I thought.
All I know is after a minute, there were screams, crashes and booms. What couldv'e gone wrong? I put on my bathing suit and right after I got it on, knock knock. I opened the curtains to the door on the balcony. Fang. In his swim suit..Wonder where this is going... I unlocked the door and let him in the room... I walked to the other side of the room. My bed was in the middle of the room, with a white canopy drooping down it. White's not my color but it will do for the time being. I have a bathroom in the far left corner of the room. I was leaning against the wall beside the door. Fang, the really stupid molester, was walking towards me, ending up right infront of me. Now that I think of it... I promised that I wouldn't show him the note.. that might not be possible since right now it's poking out from my pocket in my pile of clothes.
"Hey." Fang said. Ahhh the akwardness is creeping in the conversation already. " I hope your'e not here to steal underwear, you creep." I dared. He chuckled. A light chuckle, it was nice to hear him laugh. As you know this is Fang. Never laughs guy.I glanced at the peice of paper that is just sitting there chillin' in my deflated pants pocket. Looked back to Fang. I inched over there slowly. Inch by inch. Fang must've noticed because he started to stare at the paper also. "Hey Maxt?" I decided not to look him in the eyes.
"What?"
"What's that paper?"
"That doen't make sence you moron."
He glared at me. "I'm not a moron you brat." Yes, you may not have heard it from my mouth till now but.. Fang's older than me..by a damn month!
I cocked my head to the side as I moved back.
"Brat? i'm not a brat, you underwear smeller."
His face turned bright red. "Like hell I am!"
Out of nowhere, but I moved before he did, he launched himself to the pile of clothes.
Fwoooaump! "Aughh Geeze!" I complained. I noticed I was on my back, so I sat up. When I opened my eyes, then I noticed Fang reading the paper. He turned his head towards me and smirked. "Date?"
"Uh-um.. Dunno.."
He started crawling on his hands and knees, while I was backing away from him crab-style.
That's right, I'm a secret crab. I'm just too sexy for people to eat. Thud! My back hit the wall. Great, now Fang is standing on his knees. "Max. Are you going to date this guy?" He mummbled.
I shrugged. Now he looked super pissed. He lowered his head, his hair began to fall in front of his face so I couldn't see his eyes.
"How many times did you meet him?"
"Once." I answered, with a touch of cation.
His head shot up. "One damn time?" All of a sudden my hands were above my head, held by one bigger is Fangs by the way. He took his other hand and lifted my chin so that I had eye contact. " You meet the guy once. Fall for him yet Max?"
"I don't know."
"How the fuck do you not know?" He yelled. Fang moved so that he's basically straddling me.
He lowered his head in front of mine. "You fall for me before any other person. I won't let anyone take that away." He lowered his head to mine and kissed me.
The fuck?
"Hey!"
Fang just smiled. "Like I said. I'm going to make you fall for me before anyone eles. No matter how it's done."
Once again he put his lips on mine. His other hand letting my hands go and taking my waist instead. The first hand left my chin and went to grab the back of my head. I went completely blank. He THEN noticed I was in a bathing suit and took the opertunity. His mouth has found the nape of my neck. I was lowered to the floor. " Don't be so tense." He flicked the skin of my neck with his tongue. Slowly covering the area with his mouth. He started sucking in the skin. Then he bit it. " Ow."
He chuckled. "Did it hurt?"
"No, it felt like a ballerina danced on my skin"
He smirked. " Then let me make the ballerina turn into fire. Let me make your skin burn."
I looked at him carefully.
"Do as you please."
Here it starts. OH! By the way, no this is not 'it' as in THE 'It'.
This is rated T. Not M.
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Rated T. That's why.
AUTHORS NOTE!
YO!
Well The heat wave has passed so i updated the story... there was such a big heat wave i had to live upstairs in my bedroom. with no computer... ive been working on this chapter since my last update and just couldnt think of any way to spice it up, but i tried ... my friend who reads this thinks its kinda... idk something similar to funny in a bad way cause she's like
"How can you write about a love life, if you've never been in love."
I said.
"Fuck off, I'm creative, that's why. :DD"
lol shes mean but we have the exact personality except ive been told im a bit meaner and has a foul mouth lol xDD but what ever
but it does make it harder when ive never been in love, sure i had crushes but they were small so i lose intrest after 2 days. in my life i had like 3 crushes thats it. i mean im almost turning 14 on July 28. but im fine with it, who cares as long as its good enough right? But i wonder what its like :D hmm btw i am now a noveler person...not the one youre thinking of though ive always loved to write stories with my own mind so i looked up its a cool place, im happy cause now i can start a story on my own :D but im still going to update here..
I might end up updating faster because of this. so yeah.. you can thank the umm manga im reading for this :D oh yeah im and 8th grader now! i passed the EOGS
BTW! IMPORTANT TO MY READERS
im sorry
i keep changing my username cause i keep getting obsessed with something!
So everytime i change it from now on ill tell you it okay?
I couldnt take the username 'Cheshire' I was really sad by that
so i had to come up with
'HiddenxCheshire'
:P i like it but i like 'Cheshire' better... well yeah
thats all
Peace
~Kyra
