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Chapter 11
"Jim is in the truck?" Dan yelled. Trixie nodded.
"Tixie, Honey, Bobby!" Mart, Brian, and Di yell. They (including Dan) race over and hug them for a few minutes then let go.
"What did Pierre want?" Brian asked.
"He...He is using us as hostages." Trixie whispered. Trixie then got up and ran to the corner were Di was, sat down, and cried into her legs...
Then all of a sudden they gang hears:
"Never!" Jim yells.
"Fine, then hear your girlfriend scream and weep." Pierre smirks.
"NO!" Jim yells. "Don't hurt Trixie!"
"Then will you behave?" He asks.
"Yes." Jim agrees.
"Jim!" Trixie yells. "Jim can you hear me? Respond! Jim! Jim." she moaned.
"Ahhhh!" Jim yelled.
"Jim!"Trixie yelled running to the door. Trixie beat on the door. "Jim!" she yelled at the top of her lungs tring to let Jim hear her. "JIM!"
"Ahhhh!" Jim yelled again.
"Jim." Trixie wept. She hit the door a couple more times then sank to the floor right there an wept and wept and every once and a while whispered: "Jim."
Back in the truck...
"Now Jim. I-Want-To-Make-You-Evil" Pierre said simply. After he had brought him to a room in a building and hooked him up to machine.
"Never!" Jim yells.
"Fine, then hear your girlfriend scream and weep." Pierre smirks.
"NO!" Jim yells. "Don't hurt Trixie!"
"Then will you behave?" He asks.
"Yes." Jim agrees.
"Jim!" Jim hears Trixie yell. "Jim can you hear me? Respond! Jim! Jim." she moaned.
Jim was about to respond when Pierre says. " In a minute I will make it so you can hear Trixie and she can hear you." Pierre pressed a button, then another.
"Ahhhh!" Jim yelled. This will make you evil. Jim hears in his head.
"Jim!"Trixie yelled. Jim then heard the sound of something beating on something. "Jim!" she yelled at the top of her lungs tring to let Jim hear her. "JIM!" Pierre presses a button again.
"Ahhhh!" Jim yelled again. Pierre pressed another button and said, "Now I go to get Trixie. You will turn evil at midnight." And Pierre left the room.
