For my third poem, I'm doing my RiverClan character. Again, you have to guess. I got so many reivews! (Well, in case, it's a lot, meaning I got more than one.) So I am going to do review answers! I didn't plan to, but to reward my readers for their reviews, I will give them review answers.
iceflower of ThunderClan: I'm so sorry, but in the challenge, my cats were asigned to me. Though I would be happy to write a poem about Feathertail!
Spottedpool: I'm so glad you liked them! Ferncloud was a bit difficult to write about, being the empty-headed poet I am! But I threw around a few random ideas into a poem. I hope you like this one, too! And I was giving lots of hints on the Tallstar one, wasn't I?
Peacedove-star-KatxKenny12: Aw, you're just sayin' that! I'm pleased and flattered that you liked the last line the most; it's difficult to fit their name in it.
Goldenfeather: Really? Aha! I fooled you! Well, at least for a few seconds. XD Though, Tallstar and Onestar had a similar history, so I can see where you got the idea. And I do not deserve you compliment though it makes me feel nice!
MatsuriWolfsong: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Mist has always veiled my destiny
I'm now used to it
Mist has always clouded my vision
Surprises spring up like flowers
Mist has always blocked out the light
It takes much skill and whit
Mist has always covered the future
I seem ponder for hours
Mist has always been an obstacle
My father didn't tell the truth
Mist has always walled me in
My mother was a lie
Mist has always kept me guessing
I believed him in my youth
Mist has always made me vulnerable
What can I do but pray to the sky
Mist has always left me wondering
I tried to save my clan from the Hawk
Mist has always been my disadvantage
Though many a cat were harmed
Mist has always fractured my view
The Dark Forest can do nothing but mock
Mist has always made me question myself
As my people are nothing but alarmed
Mist has always been impossible to remove
But it is all a nasty trick
Mist has always kept in the darkness
Mist fades as does the scar
Mist has always left me perplexed
It's swept away when my tail does flick
Mist has always been a part of me
Because I am none but Mistystar
Did you guess? Mistystar plushy to anyone who did! The rhyming was a bit confusing when I read it over again, but basically, after every line, there's a line that starts with "Mist has always...", but if you subtract those, every other line rhymes. Get it now?
Thanks again for all the reviews, and please review again!
