Makoto Naegi: Super Duper Incredible


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Many thanks to those who read and reviewed this fic. I am really happy and this inspired me to bring in the next chapter, and here the story picks up from last chapter, as the characters of Ace Attorney tries to help Naegi out, but soon finds out it will not be as easy as expected…

Well, read on and enjoy!

At his law office, Ryuuichi Naruhodo is sitting on his chair while facing his table, as he had a look for worry, and bafflement, as he recalled his meeting with Makoto Naegi, whom the teen boy secretly uses an assumed name and disguise, which the ace attorney is unaware about, and by then his assistant Mayoi Ayasato arrived, as she too is feeling worried, having witnessed what Naruhodo and Naegi conversed about and there she talked to Naruhodo, asking him if he is still going to pursue the case and represent the defendant.

"Naruhodo-kun.

"Yes?"

"Um..."

"What's wrong?"

"Are you still going to pursue that case?"

"Yes."

"Even if the defendant..."

"Yes. I will not be deterred or daunted."

Naruhodo smiled and said that he is still going to pursue the case and try to persuade the defendant to cooperate and appear in court, as he believed that Naegi (who is secretly using the assumed name of Mako Nimfomeniaku) is being threatened which resulted in his refusal to cooperate, and he intend to find a way to persuade him to cooperate and appear in court.

Naruhodo then asked Mayoi if she could CHANNEL her abilities and find a way to get through Naegi to persuade him to cooperate, and she said she would try though she noted that it won't be easy given that her training is not yet completed.

"Really, Ayasato?"

"Yes, Naruhodo-kun."

"Hmm..."

"Um..."

"Okay, take your time."

"I...okay."

"We'll solve this case soon."

"Right."


Makoto Naegi - an ordinary teenage boy living with an ordinary family…living in an ordinary neighborhood and leads an ordinary life...however, his ordinary life was shattered upon discovering that he has stage 4 cancer of the brain, and was given less than half a year to live…

Given by an offer from a good samaritan...Naegi took the chance and underwent a secret chemotherapy session in an effort to eradicate the cancer within him. Then, without Gekkouhara's knowledge, he made a secret chemotherapy session in secret, and an accidental overdose of gamma radiation alters his body chemistry.

And now, when Makoto Naegi grows angry or outraged, a startling metamorphosis occurs

The creature is driven by rage and pursued by a young detective moonlighting as an investigative reporter

The creature is wanted for a murder he didn't commit. Makoto Naegi is believed to be dead. And he must let the world think that he is dead, until he can find a way to control the raging spirit that dwells within him


Ch. 11: Nakama no Bengoshi no Ejji no Kachi

As Mayoi said that she would try, Naruhodo glanced at the window, as he is curious about the case, as well as getting the feeling that something was not right, as he got the impression that a cover-up is at work, especially when he noticed that Naegi is not only unwilling to cooperate, he also refuses to go to court to testify.

This gives Naruhodo the impression that someone is blackmailing, if not threatening, Naegi to keep his mouth shut and stay in jail. Moreover, having deduced that Naegi is using a fake name, Naruhodo believed that Naegi seemed to be hiding something, which led him to recall his first contact with the disguised teen boy a few hours ago.

-FLASHBACK-

The scene shifts at a rather fortified prison, where Naruhodo and Mayoi arrived, as they informed the clerk that they came here to see Naegi and represent him, and after being instructed on where to go, Naruhodo and Mayoi went there, and upon arriving, they found Naegi, just like what Masahi Yahari showed on the video he took at the subway, and there Naruhodo watches as Naegi is being booked, and is charged for battery, assault, and violence against women. Because Naegi is wearing the fake beard, he is not recognized, and thus the police did not notice the teen boy's actual age and they assumed that he is in his 20's despite his short height and petite build.

Thus his true identity remained hidden.

As Naegi is being booked, the police took the arresting officers' word for it that Naegi is responsible despite eyewitness' testimonies that a tall, muscular GREEN GUY is said to cause the ruckus, which majority of the policemen inside the precinct chose to ignore as they believe it was just a crazy guy trying to attract attention.

A cop then asked for Naegi's name, and because he does not want to be recognized, and feeling despondent and at wit's end, he gave the interrogating cop his assumed name, which made the cop stare in a suspicious way.

"Okay, asshole."

"..."

"What's your name?"

"..."

"YOUR NAME."

"Mako..."

"Last name."

"Nimfomeniaku."

Naegi gave the cop his alias of Mako Nimfomeniaku, and the other cops began to snicker in response upon hearing it, but the interviewing cop was not amused and demanded to Naegi to give his name, in which Naegi stated his assumed name, not intending to give himself away.

"Don't screw with me!"

"..."

"Tell me your name!"

"Mako Nimfomeniaku"

"Don't give me that crap! What is your damn name?"

"Mako Nimfomeniaku."

"I SAID YOUR REAL NAME, YOU MOTHETF***ER!"

"Mako Nimfomeniaku."

The other cops snickered a bit louder, at hearing this, and the interrogating cop was losing his patience, and shook Naegi rather violently by his shoulders, threatening to get physical if he does not cooperate, and asked him again to state his name truthfully and made it clear that he is not going to waste his time listening to lies and sternly wanted to get the info he need.

Again, Naegi gives his assumed name for he has no intention of telling the interrogator his real name, not wanting anyone to find out that he is really alive, or else his family would undergo severe scrutiny.

"Don't screw with me, you a**hole! I'm not here to listen to your blasted joke!"

"..."

"Tell me your name, damn it! Just tell me your name...now!"

"Mako Nimfomeniaku"

"Don't give me that crap! I'm already losing my patience with you! What is your damn name?"

"Mako Nimfomeniaku."

"I SAID STATE YOUR REAL, F***ING NAME, YOU MOTHETF***ER!"

"Mako Nimfomeniaku."

The other cops eventually ended up in bursts of laughter seeing that Naegi is still giving his assumed name of Mako Nimfomeniaku, and warned their fellow cop to be careful, believing that Naegi is a SEX FIEND, and the interrogator is fuming at what his fellow cops told him.

"What was that?"

"You heard us..."

"If his last name is Nimfomeniaku...then it only means one thing..."

"He's a sex maniac."

"Grr...you guys...!"

"If that guy is what I think he is..."

"Then he intend to rape you..."

"So better tighten up your pants..."

The interrogator slowly loses his cool and grabbed Naegi by his neck and is ready to punch him out, but someone came and stopped the pissed cop from harming Naegi. It was Naruhodo, and he is quite shocked at witnessing an apparent police brutality and he held the cop's wrist and demanded an explanation on why he is about to punch Naegi.

Wanting to save face, the interrogator tells Naruhodo to stay out of this as he is in the process of interrogating Naegi, but Naruhodo would not relent, stating that he is here to represent Naegi and will not allow any forms of unjustified violence befall Naegi, yet the cop insisted that Naegi is performing perjury by not revealing his true name, and believed that he caused the ruckus at the subway station.

And to show that he means it, the cop asked Naegi to state his name, and Naegi gave the usual statement much to the other cops' amusements.

"Okay, asshole. You got a lawyer, and I'm betting he's going to ditch you. Tell us your name...and be honest this time.!"

"..."

"What's your name?"

"..."

"Mako...Nimfomeniaku."

"Don't give me that shit! Tell us your damn name!"

"Mako Nimfomeniaku."

"Get it now, Mr. Lawyer? This guy wants to commit suicide by wanting to stay in jail! So pack up and leave! I bet he wants to stay in jail and make it his home since he's a homeless a**hole!"

Naruhodo glanced at Naegi, and he is quite perturbed at the person's appearance, as Naegi is only in his ripped pants and barefooted, and his petite build belies the cops' claims that he is the cause of the subway ruckus, and yet Naruhodo is quite conflicted as he could not tell if Naegi is a minor or of legal age mainly due to Naegi wearing a fake mustache and beard, but he is compelled to offer him legal aid and believed that he is merely a scapegoat who is being used to cover up the now-suspecting police ineptness within the city.

Naruhodo is also aware that there are corrupt law enforcers here and are working for someone who works behind the shadows, and for now getting details of the subway assault and clearing Naegi's name is his first priority.

Naruhodo then approached Naegi and asks for his name, and was quite bothered that Naegi would not cooperate with him.

"Okay, please tell me...I want to help you."

"..."

"What's your name?"

"Mako..."

"Last name."

"Nimfomeniaku."

"What the...are you serious...?"

"..."

The interrogating cop scratched his head in frustration, while the other cops snickered, and this also shows that aside from rumors of rampant corruption running within the police system, the cops here are also arrogant, and they can be heard making a bet that Naruhodo will give it up and not represent the disguised Naegi.

Naruhodo turn around, and is dismayed seeing that the cops showed out their pocket money, stating that they are making a bet, where the winner will collect the money and the loser will shoulder the snacks, which Naruhodo was silently infuriated at the cops' action as they are not dedicated cops at all, as the lead cop proclaims that he will win, which the other cops rebutted.

"Okay, here's the bet...if that a**hole refuse to give his name and if I win, I collect the money."

"And what if we lose?"

"Yeah, what happens after that?"

"The loser will shoulder the snacks. I bet that the lawyer will give up by the end of this day."

"You're on! My bet is that the short guy will crack under pressure!"

"Me too!"

"I vote for lawyer leaving defeated!"

"Count me in!"

Unwilling to give up, Naruhodo talked to the disguised Naegi and urges him to cooperate with him and promised that he will do all he could to clear his name and expose the true culprit. However, Naegi refuses and said that he rather stay here than go out to the streets.

Naruhodo asked what is wrong and why would he rather stay jailed, stating that he believed that Naegi is innocent, but Naegi said that he rather stay here and not go out, claiming that he would feel SAFER if he stays here in jail, and tells Naruhodo to leave him alone.

Naruhodo stared in disbelief at what he is told.

"Leave…me…alone."

"But…"

"I rather stay here."

"Why?"

"Don't ask."

"But…"

"I'm leaving."

"Wait…!"

After that, Naegi leaves and went back to his cell, and the interrogating cop raised his hands in victory as he collected his winnings, and Natuhodo became more determined, and tells the cops that he is not giving up, and then left.

-END FLASHBACK-

Naruhodo sighed as he had to come up with a way to convince Naegi to testify, for he is sure that Naegi was blackmailed into letting himself take the blame, unaware of the real reason Naegi chose to have himself charged for a crime he never committed.

By then an idea came into his head and uses his smartphone to call someone, and got through.

"Hello…"

"Naruhodo?"

"Yup, it's me!"

"What's the call for?"

"I need a favor."

"What is it?"

"It's like this…"

"…fine. Just as a favor…"

-x-

Near the police station, Kyoko Kirigiri is standing there, as she got info that the supposed culprit in the subway attack is held in custody, where the police insisted that the culprit is the one behind all this, yet she did not buy it given how the bullet train doors were RIPPED OUT by force.

Moreover, Kirigiri decided to come back tomorrow due to visiting hours are up, and she feels that the captured culprit, unaware that it was a disguised Naegi, might know something, particularly the Hulk being seen.

"I must find out if the captured culprit has seen the creature...the Hulk..."

-x-

Later that night, at a hospital, the scene shows that the assault victim from the train station is sedated, due to medical reason. She is the victim who was assaulted and loses her unborn child via miscarriage, and the reason why Naegi turned into the Hulk and caused the ruckus.

As the woman is asleep, a nurse came in and locked the door, and brought out what appeared to be a syringe with a needle, its liquid content is colored black, suggesting it to be a poisoned chemical, and the nurse turns out to be an assassin and intend to assassinate the woman, but before she could poison the victim, someone else is already here.

It was Reiji Mitsurugi, a fellow attorney and childhood friend of Ryuichi Naruhodo. The assassin was taken by surprise as she did not expect someone else to be here.

"So then…"

"!"

"I never thought that someone would want to kill an innocent victim who lost her unborn child to muggers."

"…"

"Why are you here? Why do you want to kill this woman?"

"…"

"Answer me!"

"…"

To Be Continued...


The Lonely Man Theme (by Joe Harnel)
(Ending theme of The Incredible Hulk)


Hope you liked this chapter, and while there is no action showed here, the rather comedic interrogation scenes make up for it, and with the attorney finally speaking to Naegi, it served as an introductory part to the main story as it featured characters from two visual novel series.

Reiji Mitsurugi shows up and now a conspiracy presented itself as someone wants to kill the victim in order to prevent the lawyers from finding out that Naegi is innocent…

Kyoko Kirigiri makes a brief appearance, and is close to talking to Naegi if it weren't for the visiting hours being up. She intends to interrogate the disguised Naegi in hopes of finding out if he has seen the Hulk...


Preview:

The story takes a turn as Naegi is being FORCED to attend a trial…

What will Naegi do…knowing that if provoked he might turn into the Hulk…which in turn would attract Kyoko Kirigiri's attention…

See you in April…

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