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Episode 11: You Are Mine Sunshine
Chris stood at the dock. Today, there were dark clouds and harsh winds. Chef was standing there, not moving, while Chris held onto the dock, trying not to fly away. "Last time," he started, his voice a bit more nervous, "on Total Drama Karon Island, the teams played what's apparently a video game also. (Clips of the teams shooting each other and the ground around them.) Ethan got used as a human shield, and that apparently scared him off. (Clip of Ethan running away after feeling paint on his face.) Paul asked out Flora after being socially driven to a corner with awkward interactions, only to be put on hold. (Clip of Paul and Flora talking.) Finally, at the end of the day, the Bunnies faced another awful loss and sent Randall home under Jonathan's wishes and Ethan's doing. (Clip of Randall's elimination.)" The wind was seriously picking up, and Chris was now holding on to Chef, who stood there annoyed. "Who is up next for the sky-high goodbye? Is Flora going to answer Paul's question? Find out some of that, on Total! Drama! Karon Island!" Chris was now blown away, screaming.
Opening Sequence
Bunny Cabin, Girls' Side
Luna was smiling, ready to go outside, when she opened the door. The door almost broke with the strength of the wind. She slammed it shut. "What was that about?" Kara asked.
Luna shrugged, still thrown off by what was just outside. "The winds are super strong today. I wouldn't recommend going outside." She walked back over to her bed, and began sleeping again. Kayla just groaned.
Kayla: Between Paul and Flora, and Luna and Dorkus, this show is getting super sappy. I've had enough. We better not lose this challenge because of them.
Hen Cabin, Boys' Side
"Hey, I got a question for you guys," Norm said nonchalantly. Ethan poked up from his bed. Jonathan didn't move, and Juan was already awake, sitting in bed.
Ethan spoke up first. "Don't just sit there, spit it out," he said curiously. "I'm sure we've got a decent answer for you."
Norm shrugged. "Thanks. Jonathan, to make this clear I don't want your advice here. Whatever your advice is, it will stink."
Juan pounced on that. "Now, you two have had your differences, but I don't think that was very nice." He walked over to Norm and sat closer.
Norm didn't move. "I was considering asking out Luna."
Jonathan began to speak before he was interrupted by Juan. "Jonathan, save your breath. He was right," Juan said. Jonathan just growled and rolled over to go back to sleep. Juan turned to Norm. "If you think it's okay for yourself, you should."
Ethan laughed. "You're one to talk, Juan." Juan looked at him oddly. Ethan went on. "Dude, you took the girl who was definitely crushing on you out of the game." Juan gave him a 'fair enough' look.
Jonathan spoke up now. "Absolutely not."
Ethan went over to the sleeping man. "Woah, buster. Just because you were rejected for being weird doesn't mean- AAAAAAAH" Ethan's sentence wasn't finished as Jonathan shoved him into the wall.
"Listen up," Jonathan said. "We won last challenge under my leadership, and that's how we're doing things this time." Ethan rolled his eyes, as did Norm, and Juan simply shrugged. "Norm, she's on the other team. If you both make it to the merge, which is unlikely, then go for it, but for now, no chance."
"Not likely?" Norm asked suspiciously.
Jonathan glared at him. "Uh yeah. Someone's been targeting you, and my money's on Angie."
Norm smiled at him. "Thanks for letting me know."
Norm: What a doofus. Doesn't he remember I check the votes each night? Angie hasn't voted for me once!
As they started arguing, an announcement came over the loudspeakers. "Uh, guys," Chris said in a worried-sounding voice. "You might wanna get to the dining bunker, and fast!"
"Did he say, 'bunker'?" Juan asked his teammates, who have now stopped arguing. At that they all sprinted out.
Dining Bunker
Chris had gathered both teams. "So what's today's disaster?" Kara asked. "Fire? Flood? Oh wait, we did flood already."
"Silence!" Chris ordered. She stopped talking and went back to her team. "Now, with that out of the way, there's something important you all need to know." He gestured to the wall. "As you can see, this place has no windows. This is ideal, because a tornado is sort of approaching us quickly." Both teams started to murmur and talk amongst themselves. "I said silence!" he ordered again. "Now," Chris continued, "You will all actually be very safe." Both teams started to cheer, but Chris continued. "...as soon as you drop twenty feet underground." He pulled a lever.
"Under where?" Helio asked, until everyone fell down into a pool of water below them.
Mine, Karon Island
All the teams swam to the shore in the mine. They all gathered with their teams. Looking up, the saw Chef and Chris go down on an elevator. "Challenge time!" he says playfully. Everyone else groans.
"You know," Angie complained, "The elevator would have been nice for us too."
Chris shrugs. "Didn't think about it." Angie glares at him. Chris continues anyway. "Now, apparently tornadoes are really bad for an island this small, so we're making sure we don't experience it at all. Bad planning on our part."
"So what was with the dining area upgrade then?" Kara asked.
"Well," Chris said, "we decided to plan ahead, in case there's a volcanic eruption or something. Anyway, when we showed up we lined this place with a security mechanism. It shouldn't harm anyone, but we need you guys to shut it down. First team to pull the switch wins. The island will be fine without it for the day, and we don't want that thing breaking."
Kara questioned the host again. "Uh, yeah. Wouldn't a shield be helpful against a tornado?" Chris glared at her, which silenced her immediately.
Kara: Ok, I know that I'm not supposed to ask any more questions about this thing, but I know he's hiding something! I'll get to the bottom of it, mark my words.
Chris yelled at them. "Go!" He then turned to Chef. Once everyone was gone. "Turn off the 'shield'." Chef hit a button on a remote. The camera zoomed out to the island, where a dome around it went away.
"Why're we doin' this?" Chef asked to Chris. "And what're those kids turnin' off?"
Chris smiled maniacally. "Absolutely nothing. Not a switch at all. Also, we need to turn 'that' back on once the challenge is over. I just really wanted a mine challenge."
"Will do," Chef said.
He started walking away when he was stopped by Chris. "Oh, one more thing," the host said to Chef. "Turn off the tornado up there." Chef complied, and shut the disaster above off.
Karon Mine, Happy Hens
"Ok," Juan said, addressing the team, "we just need to stick together and-" he was pushed over by Jonathan, who turned to the rest of them.
Jonathan rolled his eyes at the Spaniard as Juan glared back at him. "Listen up," Jonathan said. "I'm in charge again, because it worked last time. So, we split into two groups and win this challenge. Got it?"
Ethan shrugged. "I'll take Norm."
Jonathan glared at him. "No, you won't. You're coming with me so I can keep an eye on you."
Angie went over to him. "Keep an eye on him? You've been pushing him around this whole game. I think you two should split up."
Jonathan ignored her. He looked at Ethan. "You come with me, got it?"
Ethan looked at the ground. "Whatever." He kicked some rocks.
Ethan: I've just about had it with this place. Of course, I'm not giving up. I just need to maybe throw Jonathan off his game a bit.
"Well, it's decided, I guess," Juan said, glancing over to Jonathan. The two groups split off to look for a switch.
Juan: I think I smell a rat. Maybe Jonathan's the one trying to control this game. I haven't seen evidence otherwise.
Karon Mine, Bouncing Bunnies
"Two groups of three should be ideal," Flora said. "I'll go with Paul and Luna."
"Guess that leaves us," Kara said to her sister and Helio. They started to walk off when they heard a scream behind them. "Luna!" Kara screamed out, but it was too late. She had stepped on lose rock and fallen down a hole.
Flora stared in shock. Paul put his hand on her shoulder to comfort her. "I'm sure she's fine," he assured her. "Come on, let's find this switch."
Kayla scoffed at her team. "So are we gonna do something or just stand here like a happy bunch of losers?" With that, they got up and started searching.
Karon Mine, Happy Hens
Ethan made his way through the mine, while Jonathan was in the front, leading the way. Jonathan looked back to see Ethan still sulking. "Alright," Jonathan said angrily, "I don't know what you're upset about, and frankly, I don't care. Snap out of it and get in the game."
Ethan sighed. "I'm just tired of being responsible for every elimination. And on top of that, you're targeting Norm, which is basically going to put me out of any friends in the competition."
Jonathan scoffed. "Friends? You do realize you'll have to beat everyone here anyway. Why even bother making friends?"
"Weren't you trying to date Madison?" Ethan asked. Jonathan shuddered at the name.
He turned around and pushed Ethan onto the ground. "That was different, and you need to stay out of my personal affairs." Ethan shrugged, then looked over at a metal pipe. He pointed it out to Jonathan. "That probably leads to the switch. Let's move it," the lover boy commanded. Ethan got up and started running.
Jonathan: Man, what's up with him. He better be ready to take out my target tonight.
Meanwhile, Norm, Angie, and Juan were making their way through a different part of the mine. "Of course that jerk gives us a mine challenge," Angie complained. "What are the odds that thing doesn't do anything anyway?"
Juan spoke up. "We need to keep moving. The switch could be anywhere, but I think it will be down." He kept moving, but was stopped by Angie. "What now?" he asked.
"If you didn't notice," Angie said, "Norm is missing." Juan looked around for him, but he was nowhere to be found. Juan started walking back to go check from behind. "No time," Angie said. "Let's just win." Juan looked back at a hole in the ground.
Karon Mine, Bouncing Bunnies
Kayla, Kara, and Helio were still at the top of the mine. "Me think it down," Helio suggested.
Kayla didn't want to hear it. "Look," she said, "you're strong, and that's great. But that's not gonna help here, so zip it until we find it." She looks around. "Where would they hide a switch..." she said to herself. She then stepped on lose dirt, which caved in below her. Luckily she sidestepped the cave-in at the last minute.
"This is messed up," Kara said. "No mine should be this unstable." She kicked another piece of dirt, which also caved in. She fell down this hole, to Kayla and Helio's shock.
"Uh oh.." Kayla said. Then, an idea came. "Third time's a charm," she said. She took a large rock and threw it at a different location. The rock caved in and created another hole. "This one," she said to Helio. They both jumped in the third hole.
"Wow, you smart," Helio said.
Kayla: I'm not that smart. Guess anyone looks smart to a walking forklift.
Flora and Paul were a level down from the rest their team. They didn't really speak at all, but looked for alternate paths. Then, the ground started shaking. Flora jumped into Paul's arms. Then, a hole opened up above them, and Kara fell out of it. "Uh, hey," she said awkwardly. "Mind if I drop in?"
"I don't think we have a choice," Paul said. They kept moving.
Far Underground, Karon Mine
Luna was alone at the bottom of the mine. She stood in the center of a big circle, with water all around it. She sat in the near darkness that was the mine. She kicks the dirt around her with foot, and uncovers something. "What is that?" she asked. She cleared it off more, and it appeared to be a map of the mine. "This will be most helpful to my teammates," she said happily. Then, a hole opened up in the ground above her. She watched as Norm flew out from it into the water.
Norm got out, soaked and cold. "What's with this place?" he said to himself. Then, he looked up. "Oh, hey."
"Hey," responded Luna nervously.
"Listen," Norm said, "Since we're alone, there's something I need to ask you."
Luna perked up. "Oh! Sure, of course..."
Luna: eeeeeeeee!
Norm sighed. "I'm not gonna dance around the question. "I've liked you for a while, until right after the challenge you saw us take out Daniel. I was wondering if you, you know, wanted to be in a relationship with me?"
Norm hardly finished his sentence before being tackled to the ground by Luna. "Of course!" she said. "I've liked you longer than that."
"Oh," he said. "Right." He looked down. "What's that?" he asked.
Luna got it out of the ground. "It's a map of the mine. We're too far from the switch to do anything."
Norm sighed. "Gotcha. Well, let's find a way out." They held hands and walked out a tunnel to the side.
Switch Room, Karon Mine
The ground opened up from above, dumping Kayla and Helio into the area with the switch. "This is why I took charge," Kayla bragged. She then gasped at the setup of the controls. The shield had to be deactivated through three different switches. "Great," she said. No one's here yet. Looks like we wait."
"Me have idea," Helio said.
"No," Kayla replied quickly. Helio tried to speak again but was cut off. "I said no."
Karon Mine, Happy Hens
Ethan was following the pipe along the wall. It reached a dead end the pipe kept moving up the left side of the wall. Jonathan reached him and looked at Ethan angrily. "Well? Keep going."
"No can do, genius," Ethan retorted. "The pipe doesn't go anywhere. Nothing we can do about that." He sighed. "I bet Madison would have a good idea."
"Yeah," Jonathan said sarcastically. "Who voted her off? Oh, right, your, 'friends' did."
Ethan ignored him. "And it wouldn't have happened had you not gotten suspicious. Neither of us would be in these dangerous positions we're in."
He started walking off. "Where are you going?" Jonathan asked sternly.
"I'm out of here," Ethan said. "I'd rather go alone and ponder my existence in the game."
Jonathan: Man, this stinks! If I want him to keep doing my dirty work, he's going to need to be back in an annoying mood, not this one.
Ethan: Now Johnathan's going to go on some redemption quest for me. That should buy me a few challenges.
Switch Room, Karon Mine
"Please let me do idea," Helio begged again.
Kayla eventually gave in. "Fine, but tell me first." Helio didn't listen.
"No need," he said. He went over and punched a switch. It wouldn't go back up after he punched it down. "Now you pull there, and I pull switch here."
Kayla's eyes were wide in shock. "Wow. That actually worked. Nice job." She grabbed the other switch and pulled as Helio pulled his. When they let go, all three stayed down.
Chris emerged from a door, likely one the levers opened. He surveyed their lack of a third member, and looked at the switch that Helio punched. "Interesting approach," Chris said to them. "But, a win's a win." He went over to a PA system in the room. "Attention everyone," he announced. "The challenge has ended, and the tornado's gone. Everyone back up."
Dining Bunker, Karon Island
"If you haven't heard yet," Chris said to both teams, "The Bouncing Bunnies win this challenge!" The Bunnies cheered, while the Hens groaned at their defeat. Bunnies, go get some much needed sleep. Hens, I have a surprise for you all."
"No elimination?" Angie asked. "Weak if you ask me."
"True, so it never even crossed my mind," Chris said. "The real surprise, is you all are voting right now! Go!" They all made their way up.
Jonathan: With Ethan still all gloom and doom and not a lot of time...
Ethan: ...I need to make sure...
Jonathan: ...The votes still go...
Ethan: ...my way. This'll be fun.
Elimination 10, Happy Hens
The Hens sat at the campfire. They were currently at fifty percent of their original team, and that was about to drop. Angie and Juan sat up front, while Ethan sat in between Jonathan and Norm in the back. Chris went up to them with four marshmallows. "After today," Chris says, "you guys will have lost six players. That must be awful."
Angie scoffed at Chris. "Do we look like we don't know that?"
Chris glared at her, then continued. "Now, while it was no one's fault today, you all contributed big to your loss." He turned to Angie again. "Angie, you weren't even sure if the challenge was real today."
"Sorry," Angie complained. "Let me know the next time you see a tornado on an island."
Chris went on. "Norm, busy hooking up instead of doing the challenge."
"Doing what?" Ethan and Jonathan said at the same time, Ethan surprised, and Jonathan angry.
"Ethan," Chris said. "Lotta sulking, not a lot of winning." He turned to Jonathan. "Jonathan, you led your team poorly." He looked at Juan. "Juan, you left your teammate behind today." He read the votes, just delivered from Chef. "Huh. Well, the following of you are safe...
Ethan,
Angie." They caught their marshmallows. Chris looked at the remaining three. "Jonathan, you sucked big time on your leading today." he tossed him a marshmallow. "Hopefully you learn." He then looked at the bottom two, Norm and Juan both shocked. "Norm, round three. Scared?"
"A little," Norm said. "But I'll manage."
Chris looked at the remaining two. "Tonight's loser is...
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"What?" A confused Juan asked. "Me?"
"Seemed like the right call," Angie said. "Sorry, but eh, not really."
Jonathan looked over at Ethan and growled. Ethan stepped back.
Ethan: I can't believe it. I follow his instructions and he's still mad.
Jonathan: While I would have preferred Norm went home, Juan was getting too close to figuring out my blackmail. So, bye bye.
Launch of Shame
Juan sulked as he stepped onto the launchpad. "Sorry I blew it today," he said, "even though I really didn't."
"Not a lot of hard feelings," Angie said to him. "Still some, but not a bunch. You should feel honored."
"I do a bit," Juan said. "But I know who it is now. The one running the gaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAA-" and he flew off before he could finish.
"He's going a bit higher than normal," Norm commented.
Chris laughed. "Randall complained last night so I figured I should boost the pain power on this thing." The rest of them all left.
Campsite, Bouncing Bunnies
"Nice job today, you two," Kara said. "I hope you didn't suffer too much without me." The rest of the team was celebrating their victory.
Paul went up to Flora. "I don't mean to pressure you, but did you, uh, you know..."
Flora shook her head. "Not yet. I'll let you know when I do though." She kissed Paul on the cheek and walked into the cabin.
"I'm gonna barf," Kayla said, also walking off. Kara followed her.
"Where spirit girl?" asked Helio.
"Beats me," Paul said. "Later," he went off to bed.
Outside Confessional
Ethan met Norm and Luna after checking the votes. "So Angie was the swing vote again," Norm concluded. "Wonder why she wants me in the game still."
"I don't really care," Luna said, resting her head on Norm's.
"About, uh, that," Ethan mentioned, pointing to the new couple. "When did that happen?"
"We were down at the floor of the mines, and one thing led to another," Luna said. "Glad we had that water down there. What else do you think was down there?"
"I don't know," Ethan said. "But I think we need to find out."
The camera zoomed out to Chris. "Fun! A cross-team couple! Wonder how Jonathan's gonna react to that. Who's next to take the high-flying spring flight? Is Flora gonna make up her mind? Find out, maybe next time, on Total! Drama! Karon Island!"
(END OF CHAPTER)
Votes:
Angie: Juan
Ethan: Juan
Jonathan: Norm
Juan: Norm
Norm: Juan
Total: Juan (3), Norm (2)
Eliminated: Juan
Remaining Bouncing Bunnies: Flora, Helio, Kara, Kayla, Luna, Paul
Remaining Happy Hens: Angie, Ethan, Jonathan, Norm
Eliminated: Gretchen, Chad, Sheldon, Daniel, Hannah, Madison, Alexa, Sarah, Randall, Juan
Well, Goodbye, Spanish Boy
Juan was contributing little to the story. After eliminating Hannah and forming the guy alliance he served no purpose. Besides, the rest of his 'alliance' was not cooperating.
No one guessed Juan's boot. Didn't help only one person guessed. Tragic.
Also, The second couple of the story is formed, and the third is so close you probably are wondering why I dragged it out so long. You'll see.
Eliminated Character Fact:
Remember that cut season I had in mind? Yeah, Juan was a final five person there and the season antagonist. Don't worry, I have other plans for Spanish Boy.
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