Hey Guys sorry for the long wait !

So Im not updating at much I have so much on atm I have started cricket training it early but pre season (Fitness) and I have school plus I go out two day a week on a workplacement ! its full on for me for the next for weeks, I have finals or exams coming up MY LAST ONES Ahhhhh, Not freaking out only have english. I think. anyways

Shout outs I said i would do the first 5 but i decided to do all of you scince most of you that have commented have being with me since the start this chapter is for you guys xoxox

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anyways i should stop rambeling and get on with the story :) here it is ...

She's WHAT ?

Still Jack's POV

Lauran: "Wow Jack, really, What i'm trying to say is that if you love something, then you should never give up"

Jack: Your right Lauran, If I love something, or someone I should go after them, just like what my dad taught me.

when the rain stopped me an Lauran went back to our house, we had a shower since we were soaking wet and then went back to the hospital.

When we arrived at the hospital I saw Kim laughing.

I opened the door and just stood in the door frame.

Kim: Oh Hey jack

Grace's POV

After Jack went out with Layla to the park I decided to have a shower and get changed, I rang Julie and kelsey, to see if they wanted to come to see Kim, I told them, to come to my house ASAP. When they got to my house we went to my room and got everything we needed, Make up DVD's, Magazines and my computer, when I got everything together, we jumped into my car and drove to the hospital. We got to the hospital and I asked the lady that looked awfully tired where Kim's room was, she told us that it was on level 6 room 288. we went to the elevator and went up stairs. When we got into the room I saw a familiar face in there , talking to Kim.

"OMG" I said

"What ? " Kelsey and Julie said in sink

"Is that? " I questioned

"Whats she doing here" Kelsey said

"It can't be" Julie said

"I'm Gonna go in and see" I said,

after saying one after another I bursted in there with Julie and Kelsey behind me. all I was thinking who is that girl that Kim was talking to I was about to find out but I didn't have to she turned around and I saw her, it was my ex best friend, what was she doing here, are her and Kim friends.

'Donna ?' I questioned

"Oh hi Grace, Long time no see" Donna said politely

"What are you doing here" ? I said replying back to her evil but polite hello.

"Oh I' m just visiting my cousin"

"YOUR WHAT ?" Me Kelsey and Julie said in sync.

"Well I better go, I'll bring Layla in after school tomorrow" Donna said to Kim

"Thank you" Kim said smiling back at Donna.

Donna walked out bumping into me, I just glared back at her, so did Kelsey and Julie.

"Whats wrong with you? " I said

"Nothing, Why ? whats wrong ? " Kim asked

"Grace, can I talk to you out side for a minute" Julie asked me.

"NO ! I wanna no why that ... Girl was doing here ?" i said looking at Kim

"Out side now ! Grace, Please..." Julie pulled me out by the arm

Kim's POV

Me and Layla were on my hospital bed laughing and talking about the fun times that we had as a happy family, when mum and dad where their normal selves. I told Layla that our cousin and aunty would be her soon to pick her up, she was scared to leave me, I told her that I would be fine and that the nurses would look after me. I kissed Layla's for head and then the door opened, a familiar lady walked in around her 30's.

"Oh sweetheart are you ok ?"

"Aunty Nikita, Im fine how are you. "

I'm good thank you, Oh and I brought you cousin along. "

"Hi Kim." Said Donna

"Donna." I said scaredly, thinking that she was going to lash out.

"Relax Kim, where not at school, i'm not going to Kill you."

"I'll let you to catch up, Come on Layla JJ and Mackenzie are waiting for you at home."

"Ok" Layla said, hugging me tight, not wanting to let me go.

"I'll see you later honey." I said kissing her forehead as she hopped off my bed.

Layla and Aunty Nikita walked out and it was just me and Donna where in the room and let me tell you it was awkward, but then she broke the silence thank god!

"Look Kim, I know I was harsh at you at school, but I have a reputation to keep up with."

"I know its ok" I said knowing that we are still family

"Really" She asked confused "I feel really bad treating family like that."

"Donna its ok ?" "No one knows that we are cousins, and my reputation is to look after Layla "

"Yes, but you have to you don't have a choice ?" She said feeling sad

Me and Donna talked for ages, like old time, it reminded me when we were younger when nothing worried us because we weren't in high school. me and donna started to laugh, about would we would do with our nan's food if we didn't like it.

"I remember that," I said try laughing, it was hard because it hurt "Ouch, don't make me laugh it hurts" I said holing my stomach.

"Sorry... " She said as she held my hand

"all good," I said as I looked up at her.

I heard a knock on my hospital door, I asked them to come in. who ever they were they came in and stood there in shock.

"DONNA ? " I heard an annoyed voice

"Oh Hi grace, how are you" Donna said as she turned round, politely

"What are you doing here." Grace said

"Just visiting my cousin." Donna said pointing at me while i waved at the girls that stood before me.

"YOUR WHAT ? " The three girls said insync

"Cousin." donna said clarifying.

"Well I better go, I have to help mum with the girls, I'll come back later." she said breaking the silence, leaving me alone with grace and Julie and a girl that i have never seen before.

Before donna left grace got pulled out of the room by someone named Julie, I recalled the name, by a girl the helped me on my first day.

"Hi, I'm Kelsey" Said the amazingly pretty girl.

"Hi, Im Kim"

"Hi Kim. So... " She asked awkwardly

Me and Kelsey looked at each other in silence for about a minute, it was really awkward,

"So you and Donna" I asked breaking the awkward moment of silence.

"where really good friends, on the other hand, grace and here not so much"

I chuckled "Yeah I can see that, what happened? " i asked.

"Not sure I think It was something to do with cheerleading, boyfriends and Oh yeah High school"

"Ohhh... " (a/n think of something that may of happened to you and your friends and relate that to this part of the story.)

"What about you and Donna" Kelsey asked me.

"Well as you just found out we are cousins, and just reunited" I said feeling better like things where going to get back to normal.

"What do you mean"

"Well, we were really close when we where little, like best friends, and then She moved, here when we both turned 12, I was sad to see here go, we where like twins, we new everything think about each other and new what the other was thinking. "

"Wow sounds like you two where close, what happened ? " She said, and asked in concern.

"They moved away because her mum which is my mums sister, got into a fight, and then that cause me and donna not to talk"

"Oh Im sorry, where's you mum" She asked caring

"Sh...she..s left us last year." I said stuttering

"Where did she move to ?" Kelsey asked

"Heaven" I said looking up

"Oh I'm sooo sorry"

"It's ok... Its hard but I get through it."

Me and Kelsey continued to talk then grace walked in from talking to Julie, Julie calming her down from her craziness from seeing Donna.

"Ok well Sorry about that Kim."

"That's ok, me and Donna have a unsteady relationship, but its all good." I understanding

"Right I brought DVD'S Make up and Magazines" Grace said excited

"Thx Grace, But I think I might Just rest" I said

"This magazine has R5 in it" Grace said singing

"OMG I LOVE THEM, GIVE ME " I said excited.

"hahah I knew that would get your attention" Grace said containing her laugh

When Grace gave me the magazine I flicked threw all the pages till i could find articles about them, I absolutely LOVED them, The lead Ross, He is So... Hot ! OMG I couldn't believe she had these magazines although they did have articles about One Direction, I mean whats with that I don't see what she sees in them, yeah there british, there accents are cute but really I don't see it. (A/n Im not a diretioner - don't hate me) anyways we looked through all the magazines, and watched a movie "A Walk to Remember" Its the saddest movie I have ever seen, and I cry every time I watch it. after the movie me grace, Julie and Kelsey sat around talking and laughing about our child hood past because after that movie you need a laugh. I didn't really say anything about my past because of my mum, well she wasn't that bad it was after Layla was born she got really bad, I guess she couldn't hold the pressure of looking after two girls, I'm surprised my dad didn't crack with what we go threw if you know what I mean.

"Why are you so quiet" Julie asked me

"Oh no reason, I'm just a little tired" I said looking down.

"Oh come on you must have one funny story that makes you laugh" Grace asked me.

When grace asked me that a memory came back to me when the whole family in the back yard, me, mum dad and Layla. Layla was about 5. where were out side on a summers day, in Tennessee sitting on the grass, mum and dad where having a glass of wine and me and Layla where having soft drink, we were on the grass laughing, and then all of a sudden the sprinklers came on, we all got up and ran for cover, we started laughing and went back out and had some fun, we danced around and enjoyed the moment.

"Well one night back in Tennessee we had some drinks of course me and Layla had soft drink" I continued and told them the hole story. we all started laughing then I heard a knock at my door.

Jack's POV

I saw Kim laughing I felt happy to see that she was recovering, and laughing with Grace, Julie, and Kelsey. I knocked on the door and Kelsey came and opened it.

"Hi Jack"

"Hey Kim" I smiled at her

" We will give you some space," Julie said

"Ill take Lauran home" Grace said.

With that Kelsey, Grace and Julie left the room, leaving the room silent with me and Jack in there. I wanted to do something, it was going threw my head, over and over, I just stared at Kim, looking at her beautiful face, that now had a bruised eye, but I didn't care, she look amazing with sweat pants on, I know it sounds cliche' but its something that a guy would do in a chick flick, don't ask me why i know this but having a twin sister and a little sister helps.

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