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Hey guys!
I am so sorry that I have not been updating everyday like I have promised. My mom has been on the computer everyday. -.- Plus, I had got writers block and I needed to find out what to put next.
For every time there will be a flashback, I will put a long line between the story and the flashback. One of my readers gave me that suggestion, he/she's name is Reiko. I thank that person for the great advice and all and I will try to work on it!
One of my reviewers said that I should at least listen to a little of criticism y'all may put but I am not sure... I mean, I know I should listen to what y'all have to say about my story and the problems I may have like grammar and what not, but every time I think of what y'all may put, I think that y'all will put some total unnecessary stuff like how bad it might be. I will consider y'all telling me your thoughts about this story! I don't want to hear anything bad that you will or might say but... I guess I will just have to suck it up! -^-
And if anyone has any requests for a story, I will gladly accept, depending on what it is and what couple you may choose! :D
Disclaimer:I do not own One piece.
Chapter 11: Love is all we need
Nami POV
After hearing such beautiful words, I froze. Breath caught in my throat; coming out hitched. I don't know what to say and I have never been in this type of situation before. I know I have heard it from Ussop already, but hearing it from Luffy himself made my heart race. Of course, people have confessed to me before, but... I actually kind of like him. I like the way he keeps his black-straight hair messy, I like the way he always has something to smile about, I like the way helaughs and trust me, his laugh is weird. He always laughs like... shi, shi, shi or something like that. It's kinda weird but after a while you get used to it.
As the rain pounds against my skin like it's trying to rip through it, me and Luffy continue to stare at each other with want.
"Luffy...um...I don't know what to say," I said in a quite voice; still looking up into his mesmerizing-dark eyes.
"... mjsjdehjj," Luffy mumbles, making me confused. I can't understand the words that just flew out his mouth. All I saw was the shadow of his beautiful lips moving with a sounds of bees coming out of it.
"What?" I asked.
But he doesn't answer. All I can hear is silence as Luffy's long bangs cover his face. He really needs a haircut because this is so ridiculos! But the problem is Luffy does not ever want to cut his hair.
Luffy tightens his arms around my slim waist and he stuffs his head into the crook of my neck, he breaths in my scent and smirks, I can feel it. The way his lips move against my neck, breathing becoming shallow and leans his body more on me, pushing me back; causing me to stumble backwards and squeak out his name until I touched the wall on the left side of the alley. I blush at the contact going on between us, and stutter...
"L-luffy are you okay?" I ask, body feeling weak and legs feeling like jello from the contact of our bodies making contact.
Luffy doesn't respond, instead, he lifts his head from my neck and looks me in the eyes again, causing me to blush.
OUR FACES ARE ONLY A FEW INCHES APART FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!
I move my head back, trying to leave some space between our faces, but instead of moving back and leaving space, I cause myself to whimper from increasing pressure on my head to the wet bricked wall behind my head.
"...Luffy," I gasp, before he pressed our lips together.
At the mall~
Vivi POV
Me and Nami went looking for Luffy a few hours ago and I told her that if nether one of us finds him by 8:00 we need to meet up by the mall, but she isn't here. Where is she.
As they walked through the bright field and towards the big tree where they always eat lunch at, Nami is telling Vivi about how she didn't see Luffy this morning and how chopper and Ussop was acting weird. Of course, Vivi does not know what has come over her friends because they don't have the same classes, but she did know that she is going to get to the bottom of this problem. As they made it closer they saw everyone there at the tree except for Luffy. They also saw Chopper and Ussop biting their nails.
"Choooperrr," Vivi hissed, stomping over towards him and Ussop. "Uussooopu."
When she got close enough, she grabbed their collars with a large scowl on her face.
"WHERE. IS. LUFFYYYYYYY," she screamed, face scrunching up from anger; causing them to scream like little girls.
The action caused Nami to giggle.
"Don't laugh Nami," Ussop said, tears falling out of his eyes; straining to look her way because of Vivi's tight hold on his collar. He looked like a struggling animal, trying to get out of a net.
Nami turned to him, smile leaving her face. "Why?" she questioned him.
Ussop frowned and tried to not make a sound from his mouth. "Nami...this morning we saw Luffy and...and we were just messing around with him, I SWEAR!" he said, gripping his head; shaking it from side to side.
Vivi's face softened, knowing that she should not be so hard on them. The more they are hard on them, is the more that they won't spill the beans, "What happened to luffy," Vivi said calmly.
Ussop looked up at her, growing calm, "well...we were just messing around with him about him liking Nami and...he just ran off.
'Where are they?' I thought, looking from left to right; hoping that they might pop out soon.
When I look to the left for the third time in a row, I saw a red shirt in a distance. I squint my eyes, hoping to see the owner for the red shirt and see Luffy. His long black bangs were covering his midnight black eyes and wore a large frown on his face.
'What is wrong with him?' I thought, frowning and slouching a little.
"Hey luffy!" I squealed.
Luffy heard my loud squeal, and looked up. His eyes look red and poofy and had a large frown on his face.
'What's wrong with Luffy?'
So... what do y'all think so far? I might update this tomorrow, depending if my mother stays on the computer for long or not. -.-
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