YN69: I've had to rewrite this chapter TWICE already
Ash: dang
YN69: let's just skip the opening monologue and get to the story
Ash: okay
Arisato stood outisde the pokecenter, upset that his pokemon had been defeated, in the distance he noticed a Rayquaza and Staraptor flying west of Pallet Town "So they're headed to Johto huh? If I'm correct they're looking for a Professor, and Professor" he smirked "then with my Alakazam I can block off New Bark Town and take the eggs from them there and with my luck it looks like they're headed northwest, so they'll end up in Blackthorn city" he laughed "I can't wait to see the looks on their faces when they see the surprise I'm going to leave them" Soon after that Nurse Joy had brought him his reinvigorated pokemon and he held Houndour and released his Alakazam "take me to New Bark Town, Alakazam" Alakazam had obeyed it's trainer and within seconds Arisato, Houndour, and Alakazam vanished. Elsewhere Rayquaza and Staraptor had landed in Blackthorn city as Arisato expected. They had made Rayquaza and Staraptor return to their pokeballs then Narukami pulled out a small map "so New Bark Town is...South of here" Poochyena seemed upset over something, Pikachu noticed this and walked over to her "what's wrong?" Poochyena faced Pikachu "you see, the region is where my older brother was born" Pikachu nodded understanding what she meant "I guess you wouldn't have good memories especially since he has tried to kill you and your children" Poochyena jumped on Narukami's back and gripped onto his shirt "don't worry, I won't let them hurt you, I'd kill them before they could do that" Ash's eyes widened at the thought "kill? they must really hate each other " Pikachu nodded in agreement "I'm glad I'm an only child" Narukami smiled "no, I don't really hate him, but he hates me, same goes for Poochyena and Houndour, just jealousy of younger siblings I guess" Somewhere just a few feet out of New Bark, Arisato had went to the tall grass and sent out his Tyranitar "Alright, use stone edge in front of the grass and on the left and right sides as well" Tyranitar obeyed it's trainer and used stone edge on all three sides, creating 3 rocky walls and confusing the wild pokemon that lived in the tall grass, Arisato had smirked as he was about to reveal his sadistic side to these pokemon "alright Houndour, use flamethrower on the grass, I want these little piece of garbage to know fear before they meet their end" Houndour smiled "gladly" it then took a deep breath and set the grass on fire, the wild pokemon became horrified since they couldn't put out the small fire Arisato then laughed as the fire slowly made it's way over to the small and helpless pokemon and eventually lit them all ablaze "let's see...15, no 30 burning pokemon, music to my ears" Arisato laughed asthe pokemon continued to scream for their lives until they eventually became quiet. However, a brave Rattatahad jumped onto the stone edge and tried running past Arisato, only for him to stomp on it's tail "hey you two" Houndour and Tyranitar looked at him "lunchtime" The Rattat having heard this screamed for it's life as it was thrown at the two, Tyranitar caught half of it with it's mouth and Houndour got the other half in his mouth. The two turned their heads away from each other, ripping the poor Rattata's body apart as the small Rattata's body lost it's intestines, blood,bones,lungs, and stomach Arisato had laughed as his two pokemon had munched on the pokemon corpse and as he watched it's organs splat on the ground beneath them. As the two trainers and their pokemon had gotten closer Poochyena had took a sniff "Narukami!" he looked at his small partner "yes? what's wrong" she shook a little bit "t-there's a fire...and screaming, the screaming suddenly stopped...we have to see what happened!" Poochyena jumped off his back and followed the horrible scent with her nose and soon enough they how found a terrible sight Pikachu was instantly moved to tears seeing all the dead Pokemon "w-why would anyone do this?" Pikachu jumped down from Ash's shoulder as Poochyena started to dig a hole and close her eyes to hide her own tears "how heartless" Ash had helped her dig the grave and Narukami had put the bodies in the ground "they were trapped by this stone edge attack, some evil person did this on purpose" he then covered them with dirt "they didn't stand a chance of survival" the four of them had bowed their heads in respect for the newly deceased pokemon "may they be at peace now" "It's beautiful isn't it?" Poochyena turned to see her older brother Houndour with a smirk on his face "i'd say I did a good job" Poochyena growled at him "why would you do such a thing?! they were helpless!" Houndour laughed in her face and Arisato appeared from behind a tree "surprised brother?" Ash looked at them "how could you do such an evil thing! what is wrong with you?!" Arisato walked over to Ash and smiled "nothing at all" Houndour smirked "we just love to see people suffer, like how we love to make the unborn die" Narukami looked over at them "make the unborn die" there he saw a Tyranitar fire it's hyper beam aimed at Poochyena "Bastards!" Narukami pushed Poochyena out the way and took the hyper beam head on and knocked him down. Arisato chuckled at him "well brother, this is what happens when you care too much, you get hurt" Arisato stomped his leg on Narukami's chest and stomach, making Narukami yell in pain. Ash was annoyed about his friends being attack then he threw his pokeball "Greninja, take care of Tyranitar!"Greninja came out and looked at his opponent "I'll deal with you quickly" Greninja glared at Tyranitar, who laughed in his face "I'm so scared, of some stupid blue frog with an overgrown tongue" his sarcasm had annoyed Greninja who started to fire his water shuriken repeatedly but Tyranitar kept using protect "oh no, what ever will blue kermit do?" Greninja used double team and surrounded Tyranitar "sorry, I just don't like cowards that use protect" Tyranitar had loweder his guard as he yelled at Greninja "I am not a coward!" All of the Greninja smirked "no, but you are incredibly stupid" soon after that all of the Greninja clones had used Hydro pump doing severe damage to him and knocking him out instantly. Ashyelled out to Greninja "now help Pikachu and Poochyena!" Greninja nodded and dashed over to the two and fired another water shuriken at Houndour but Houndour jumped out of the way in time and grew angrier then his teeth glew yellow and he jumped at Greninja and bit him, he had used thunder fang then he used sludge bomb, badly poisoning Greninja, Not willing to make Greninja suffer, Ash made him return to his pokeball. The weak Narukami still had some strength to stand up and throw out a pokemon and grab Poochyena "Rayquaza! get us out of here!" Rayquaza appeared the Narukami and Poochyena would quickly climb on as Narukami threw another Pokeball "Lugia get Ash and Pikachu! Lugia would move under Ash and Pikachu and soon the two legendary Pokemon would take flight however Rayquaza shook uncomfortably "what's wrong?" Rayquaza would roar and fly in a circle revealing that Arisato and Houndour had grabbed onto Rayquaza's tail and they were climbing on him to get closer to the Latias egg "tell me brother, why do you want to defend that egg so much?" Narukami growled "because you haven't realized it yet have you? I don't want caring souls to become evil and hatred and cause destruction, I don't want them to become sadistic and cruel to each other!" Tears had formed in his eyes as he yelled at Arisato "I don't want them to fight for their lives because the other one tries to kill them" Rayquaza and Lugia had both flown higher in the sky, far above the clouds Pikachu and Ash only watched "Pikachu you have to be ready in case that guy tries stealing the eggs' Pikachu nodded. Arisato laughed "You could've just let me keep Poochyena, You could've had Houndour and I could've been the trainer with the better dog!" Seeming to forget that Houndour was right behind him, the hurt and slightly angered pokemon tried to burn it's own trainer "after all I've done for you you still like Poochyena better?! t-that's why I hate Poochyena! that's why I'll kill her and her babies here and now!" Houndour then fired his flamethrower at Poochyena who gasped feeling there was no way to avoid and knowing that if she got hit she would fall off Rayquaza, to her own death. "I'll prove myself!" Houndour yelled as the flames got closer to his sister. Narukami threw the Latias egg off Rayquaza and Arisato's eyes widened, he jumped after the egg Narukami walked through the flamethrower as he took damage and threw Houndour to Rayquaza's tail, however before he could fall he had gripped Rayquaza's tail and quickly climbed back on" Narukami quickly looked around "Arisato?! where are you?" Arisato yelled to his brother "over here!" Narukami looked over the edge of Rayquaza's body where he saw Arisato hanging onto one of Rayquaza's rudders "Arisato! throw the egg up here and give me your hand!" Arisato smiled "you really are an idiot, brother, but that's a good thing about you" Arisato threw the egg at Narukami's feet . Narukami looked at Arisato confused "Houndour...old friend" Arisato had tears in his eyes as Houndour went over and glared at his dangling trainer "I enjoyed having you at my side...you were my best friend, I'm so sorry that I hurt you" he then looked up at Narukami showing that he had tears streamind down his face "sorry that I hurt both of you, forgive me" Ash noticed Arisato's grip loosen "don't do it!" Arisato "help Latios and Latias become good pokemon...Houndour, obey Narukami, he's your trainer now" Pikachu yelled at him "Stop!" Houmdour looked at Arisato with a sad and worried face "what are you doing?!" Arisato let out a relieved sigh "I'm redeeming myself, I'm so proud of you Houndour, you too Poochyena, and especially you, Narukami" with one last smile Arisato let go of Rayquaza's rudder and plummeted down below the clouds. Narukami looked on in horror as Rayquaza tried to catch up to the falling boy "ARISATO!" Houndour was about to jump off and join his master only to be stopped by Poochyena "you can't go!" Houndour looked at her "get off! my master needs me" Poochyena shook her head "He wants you alive idiot!" soon enough after this, Rayquaza had stopped moving and Narukami fell to his knees on his large dragon. Lugia, Ash, Pikachu and Houndour looked in utter horror as Arisato hit the ground with a splat, the rony of it all? He landed right where Ash and Narukami buried the murdered Pokemon, Arisato's pokeballs were shattered, rendering any pokemon inside their balls dead, and any pokemon outside their ball released. Both flying pokemon landed as Narukami had dug another grave for his brother without saying a wrd, and Houndour silently helped, after a moment of silence Narukami held the Latias egg while Ash held the Latios egg, and the two walked to Professor Elm's lab, along with their newest member, Houndour.
YN69: AAAANNND FINALLY THIS CHAPTER IS FINISHED!
Ash: wow, you seem excited
YN69: normally I do 2 - 3 chapters a day, but I was busy so I could only do one, and here it is
Pikachu: that was a rather dark end to this chapter
Poochyena: yeah, I didn't see that coming
Ash: do you have something against brothers?
YN69: nope, I just don't have one is all
Ash: oh...
YN69: well I won't be as busy tomorrow so I should be able to do another chapter tomorrow so...keep reading!