Reviews totally titillated me to continue writing, thanks to you guys! XD This chapter… well, you have to find out yourself. (wink) Anyway, Nothing belongs to me except the extra characters and plot. My plot did changed a lot from my first draft. (nod)

Note: KillaCam11, if you're confused of the Ellie/Eleanor issue, did you read my one-shot 'I Never Wanted To Be Strong"? It's needed.

Beginning Is Just Another End

"Not today?"

As Eleanor continued to cook, she looked up to her purple-clad sister and gave her a simple smile.

"No." She replied as she turned back and flipped the omelette, "There's isn't any lesson today."

"But," Brittany spoke up as she was sitting on the dining chair, "I thought…" She stood up and approached her baby sister, "You're not free tonight?" She asked curiously as Jeanette too, walked to her spring green-clad sister.

"I'm am." She giggled at her yesterday's conversation with her green-clad bestfriend, earning exchanged glances from both of her sister.

"So what are you…" Eleanor's sisters started simultaneously as they trailed off.

"I have a date." Eleanor shrugged as she continued to flip the omelette.

Jeanette froze at her spot as Brittany grabbed her younger sister's shoulders, frantically. "You have a date?" Alvin? Brittany gritted her teeth, My plan has failed! She thought nervously.

"Uh-huh." Eleanor answered with a blush as she put the omelette into a plate, "Theodore asked me." Eleanor giggled at her last sentence.

Brittany stepped back in shock as Jeanette raised an eyebrow at that, "Theodore," He really did it? "Asked you…" Jeanette made some hand gestures, "On a date?" She emphasized the 'date' word in surprise.

"Yup." Eleanor gave her reply cheerfully as she took the plate with the omelette, He did kinda gave me the hint… "And he…" She giggled non-stop as she put the plate on the table. "Kissed me."

Jeanette's jaw dropped to the floor as Brittany smirked behind her, My plan is still working, huh? "I thought Alvin didn't even kiss your lips before?" Brittany asked curiously with a snicker.

"Well," Eleanor blushed more as she sat down, "Theodore only kissed my cheek and…" She trailed off with more embarassment.

"And…?" Both of her sister put their palms on the dining chair, asking her to speak out the truth.

"And my…" Eleanor smiled as she recalled her memories, the way how Theodore wanted them to stare at the sunset forever and he did the unforgettable action. "Forehead…" She said dreamily before sticking one piece of the omelette into her mouth.

"But…" Jeanette managed to speak her mind in one word as she gestured her pink-clad sister to continue her sentence. Brittany was the most daring among them afterall. "Uh…"

"You do realise that you have a boyfriend," Brittany and Jeanette tilted their head closer to their blushing sister, "Right?" Brittany asked as Jeanette gave Eleanor their 'bad cop' impression.

Eleanor shrugged, "I thought about it," She ate another piece of omelette, "I'm going to break up with Alvin." She chuckled bitterly, So much to face, before… She smiled at her last thought, Together with my Teddy…

Woohoo! Brittany screamed happily in her mind, Alvin is breaking up! She chanted in her mind. My plan never fails! She thought confidently as she punched the air.

Jeanette sighed heavily before putting her right palm on Eleanor's shoulder, "Good luck with that…" She wished her before turning to upstairs.

"You'll need it." Brittany stated before following her purple-clad sister, Considering Alvin to be so furious… She giggled, Embarassed that… She went into her room with Jeanette leading her in front, His baby brother snatched his girlfriend…

Brittany shook her head twice in negative as she looked at herself in the mirror, Drama is ahead of Eleanor… She turned her head to the window, seeing the Seville's house from faraway, And Theodore.

"What am I going to wear!" Eleanor asked repeatedly as she stampeded her closet, "What am I going to wear!" She cried out in despair as she pulled her pigtails in frustration.

"What are you talking about?" Jeanette asked as she turned her head towards her sister from her desk. She was kinda happy just now…

"My date!" Eleanor cried out in reply before crushing her face into her pillow, "No!" She shouted with the pillow muffling her scream.

"I have an idea." Brittany closed her compact mirror as in a second, Eleanor quickly ran from her bed and her face was directly in front of her pink-clad sister.

"What is it!" Eleanor practically yelled at her face as both of her sister cringed from her exaggerating action.

"Slow down, Ellie." Jeanette calmed her down with a soothing tone, She's kinda crazy about Theodore…

Eleanor quickly took a deep breath, collecting her composure. Calm down, E. Her conscience said worriedly, He's just your bestfriend…

I love him! She snapped at her mind, Don't you get it! She screamed with a pinch of sarcasm.

Her conscience was silent as Eleanor could felt it raised both of its hand defensively.

"As I was saying…" Eleanor snapped out of her mind and turned to her pink-clad sister, "You can wear the dress…" Brittany closed her eyes as she focused to her past memories, "Theodore bought for you." She suggested casually. (refer to chapter six)

"The dress…" Eleanor quickly realised before turning back into her closet again, "The dress!" She screamed while she dug the remaining clothes in her closet.

Both of her sister turned to each other and shrugged, She's not my sister. They mouthed to each other in unison.

"Such formal dress…" Simon spoke softly as he shook his head.

"Do I look okay?" Theodore asked timidly as he looked into the mirror, repeatedly adjusting his striped green-tie, "Do I-"

"Don't worry…" Simon assured him in a fatherly tone, "Eleanor loves you," Simon explained simply, "That's enough." He patted Theodore's shoulders twice.

"But I-"

"Relax, Theodore." Simon concluded as he too, looked into the mirror. "I know the way Eleanor thinks of you." He comforted.

"Okay…" Theodore took a deep breath in his room before continuing, "It's not a big deal…" He mumbled to himself.

Try saying that after the date, His conscience rolled its eyes boringly, When Eleanor won't even talk to you, ever again.

As long she's happy with Alvin… Theodore smiled slightly, I'm okay… He chuckled dryly, That's what I'll do when I love someone…

May my blessings… His conscience sighed with a pause, Be with you.

Thanks. Theodore thought simply, I'll need it. He chuckled.

"Okay," Theodore got himself out of his world, "Alvin is still in the room," Simon whispered as he took a peek at the hallway, "The coast is clear." Simon nodded at his baby brother.

Theodore took the flowers and just before he went out from his room, Theodore turned around and patted Simon's shoulder brotherly, "Thanks." He said truthfully, "By helping me and not telling Alvin." He explained.

Simon sighed before holding his baby brother's shoulders and stared into his eyes, "What are you going to do after…" Simon gulped slightly, "The date?" He asked quietly as he pointed to Alvin's room.

Theodore looked away, I know exactly what will happen later… "I got it under control." Theodore faked a smile, "I know what to do." He half-shrugged.

Theodore patted Simon's shoulder one more time before walking to the front door, preparing to twist the doorknob.

"Oh," Simon walked down quickly as Theodore spun around, "And one more thing." Simon reminded. I'm going to like this. Simon smirked in his mind.

Theodore raised his eyebrows, "What?" He asked confusingly.

"I don't want any niece and nephew, okay?"

Theodore gasped as he punched Simon on the arm, "Shut up!" He snapped playfully as Simon just laughed and took out his phone.

The bell rang as the spring-green dressed chipette gasped in a worried way, "He's here!" Eleanor shouted frantically, "What am I going to do!" She pleaded her pink-clad sister to give her an answer.

Brittany simply shrugged and smirked, "Get flirty with him."

As much as Eleanor wanted to retort at her, Brittany slightly pushed her to the kitchen, "Come out when the time is right." Brittany winked, earning a confused look from Eleanor.

The bell rang again as Jeanette ran down the stairs and opened the door, "Hey, Theodore." She greeted casually as Eleanor gasped again in the kitchen, causing Brittany to roll her eyes, "Eleanor's ready."

"Oh," Theodore smiled at her as he looked around, "Okay." He replied as he continued to look at the chipette's room.

Brittany smirked and whispered quickly, "Now!" followed with a push and Eleanor out stumbled from the kitchen.

When Eleanor stumbled out, Theodore was shocked as the beautiful chipette just popped out of nowhere when he was still looking at her room's door.

Theodore's jaw dropped slowly as he stared at her again, never imagine her to wear the dress he bought for her, "Wow…" Theodore stared dreamily as he rested both of his hand beside him, weakly. Gorgeous and pretty…

Eleanor simply giggled at his expression as she waved slightly, "Hey, Theodore." She greeted with a blush, though with a lot of shyness in her tone.

"You look…" He paused as he scanned her from top to the bottom, gulping again before continuing, "Just…" His voice trailed off as she walked to him. Undescribable…

"I know," She giggled as she hook her arm with his, repeating yesterday's action. "Same to you," She blushed again as she realised what he was wearing, "Teddy." She smiled genuinely. He's shy again!

"Oh, and…" Theodore took out his left arm, revealing a bunch of roses consisting of white and yellow as Eleanor gasped in surprise, "This is for you." He offered sweetly. Yellow for friendship, white for beginning… His conscience paused, What are you trying to say? It asked curiously.

The ending of our friendship… Theodore thought darkly as the next sentence came to his mind, And the beginning of a suffering world without… He slightly sobbed in his mind, Eleanor…

"Oh…" Eleanor gave him a peck on his cheek quickly as he froze at the spot, unexpecting her action. "You're so sweet." She giggled.

She handed Brittany and mouthed, Put it on my bed. Brittany simply nodded, took it from her gently and walked up stairs.

"Shall we?" Theodore asked kindly as he reached out his left hand, gesturing the outdoor.

"Fine." She pouted playfully as they walked outside, still cuddling to each other.

"Wait!" Jeanette waved to them as she looked at the message Simon just sent her, "Eleanor!" She shouted to her. I'm glad Simon suggested this…

Both of the green-clad chimunk turned to her as they raised their eyebrows.

Jeanette smirked in a same way Simon did, "Do you have protection!" She shouted playfully to Eleanor. I like their expression…

Theodore simply looked away, embarassed as Eleanor gasped in shock, "Jeanette!"

Jeanette simply laughed as she walked into the house and closed the door, sending back another message to Simon.

The two blushing chipmunks turned their head to each other, still staring at their shoes, embarassed because of Eleanor's sister.

"I…Uh…" Both of them stuttered at the same time, "She…"

"Shush…" Eleanor silenced Theodore as she explained embarassingly, "It's just a joke." She stated, although herself was still blushing.

But, Her conscience asked curiously, I thought you always wanted that to happen?

Well, yeah… She giggled, It's nice, She thought back to her daydream, Our first time…

So… Eleanor felt her mind raised its eyebrows, Did you brought protection?

Erm… Eleanor blushed, I don't mind if I have Theodore's baby…

Got-cha! Her conscience shouted, I knew it!

Shut up! Eleanor hissed playfully.

"So…" Eleanor started meekly as Theodore gave her a sweet smile, asking her to continue her question, "We're walking?" She asked in cute way.

"Yeah," Theodore chuckled, "Like I said," He closed the distance between his lips and her ears, "We could spend more time together." He whispered coyly.

Eleanor giggled, "I like that."

"Wow…" Eleanor complimented as she looked around, "How can you afford to eat in this place?" She asked while continued to scan the whole restaurant.

"I have my…" Theodore was sitting across her, beside a tiny round, dining table. He shrugged casually, "Own way." He chuckled slightly, Though you don't know how much I wasted in this place…

"Sir," A waiter started politely as the two green-clad chipmunks turned to him, "What do you want to order?" He took out a small notebook.

Theodore simply smiled at him and turn to Eleanor, "You do the choice." He offered sweetly, Unlike me, His thought slightly darkened, I think I made the wrong choice…

"I'm…" Eleanor scanned the menu quickly, He's so nice, "Not…" He's letting me to choose again… "Sure…." She replied slowly as she looked through the menu.

She sighed as she placed the menu on the table, earning a confused look from Theodore, "I can't choose it." She concluded finally.

"Excuse me," The waiter cut in politely as they turned to him again, "May I suggest…" He used the tip of his pen and pointed at a picture on Eleanor's menu, "Love in Dreamland?" The waited cleared his throat, "It's a set," He smiled kindly towards the two chipmunks, "Perfect for you two, my lovebirds." He suggested as he waited for a respond.

As Eleanor opened her mouth to correct the waiter, Theodore spoke before her, "Sure," He clasped his palm on Eleanor hand on the table, making her to be slightly startled, "We'll have a set of that." He answered.

The worker took their menu and walked away, as Eleanor blushed deeply, Did he just admitted that we're… She giggled with excitement, Lovebirds?

"This salad is…" Eleanor paused before she gulp the vegetables into her throat, "Wonderful…" She compliemented as she leaned back slightly, staring at her food.

"If you like it," Theodore smiled sweetly as he put his fork and spoon down, "I can bring you here again." He offered.

Eleanor blushed and looked down to her lap, never to be so shy around a male chipmunk, He's going to ask me out again…? She smiled tenderly, I'm really lucky…

That was a lie, Theodore conscience stated darkly, You know this is the last time you're going to spend time with her. The conscience said with a slight anger. Don't you?

A lie to make her happy… Theodore thought trailed off as he remembered the day he lied to her because of his German test, I'm willing to do it.

Yet you do know… The conscience shook its head lightly in negative, That would only break her heart after tonight…

More than ever.

After this… Theodore took a deep breath, It's Alvin job.

What about you? The conscience asked curiously, Do you remember the promise?

I made a lot of promise, Theodore rolled his eyes at at his mind, Refresh me.

You told Dave that you're going to get a girlfriend… It continued without mercy, Yet you're now giving up your chance.

I'm not. Theodore darkened his voice, Brittany is still single.

If you ever wanted to spend your life with, The conscience asked him, Who would it be?

Theodore slowly ended the tiny argument in his mind as he looked up, watching how the spring-green clad chipette eating her salad gracefully, but happily.

Theodore looked away before giving his answer, Of course it's Brittany…

That sentence… His conscience slowly faded away, Won't last long…

Theodore laughed bitterly in his mind, Sentence changed my life, He faked a smile towards the chipette as she replied with another grin, More than enough.

"If you're finished," Theodore started kindly, "We'll be going." He informed her.

She gasped slightly, "That fast?" She asked timidly, I want to spend more time… She thought hard in her mind, With you…

"I have something planned for you," He explained softly and sweetly as she grinned widely at him. And only for you, alone.

"What do you want to watch?" The green-clad chipmunk asked as Eleanor continued to looked at the posters, deciding to watch the best show.

"Maybe something…" Come on, E! Her concious encouraged, Something to make a move! "Romantic?" She asked timidly as she blushed, really crimson. Please say yes, yes!

"Sure," Theodore immediately agreed with her, She's brave enough to ask me that… "How about…" I appreciate it. "Beautiful Lies?" He stood on his toes in a cute way as he pointed at the poster on the top.

She giggled, "Okay." While the chipmunk went to buy the tickets, She sighed as she stared at him from his back, He too, wanted to watch a romantic movie with me… She thought back to yesterday when he stopped her kiss as she giggled slightly, Maybe he just wanted to take it slow…

She snapped out of her trance as she looked around, worried because of the absence of the green-clad chipmunk. "Theodore?" She asked anxiously as she scanned for him.

"I'm here," Theodore said simply as he used his right arm to hold her waist, "I just went to buy us some popcorn." He informed as she was startled from his sudden appearance.

"Like your promise," Eleanor held up her last finger, "Let's go in," She tilted her head slightly towards the confused chipmunk, "Together."

He smiled as he remembered the promise he had made in front of their class, "Pinky swear." He nodded, "Let's go." They held their hands. (refer to chapter six)

"I never wanted to hurt you," The man in the screen turned away, "It was all a lie…"

"Desmond!" The woman ran and hugged him from behind, "I don't care if it's a lie," She continued with tears dropping, "I only want us to…"

Theodore slapped his forehead as he closed his eyes, Why did I chose this movie? He shook his head, This is probably just talking about, He sneaked a peek at Eleanor who was watching intensely while eating the popcorn that stood between them, The problem I'm having with Ellie!

No one asked you to pick that movie, His conscience rolled its eyes in irritation, Great.

Theodore sighed, She'll probably more angry than she was after watching this movie! He ruffled his hair slightly in frustration, How can I tell her that I'm only bringing her out for one last time? He asked as if he was defeated badly.

I really feel sorry for you, The conscience said sympathetically, Bud.

I just wanted to… Theodore looked to his left side at the chipette, as he was sitting on most right, in the middle row. Grant her… Theodore looked up to the screen once more, Happiness…

Suddenly, the plot twisted as the man and the woman kiss in the screen, followed by everyone else around Theodore.

This is it! Eleanor screamed to herself in her mind, This is my chance! As she slowly leaned in, she was hungry for Theodore's lips.

What am I going to do! Theodore screamed in his mind with frustration, Her lips are incoming! If Theodore had pigtails, He would pull them until they are teared off from his hair, I'm so dead!

Time to make your decision, His conscience teased playfully, Again. It rolled its eyes.

If I was going to give her happiness, Theodore took a deep breath as the inches between Eleanor and his face shortened, I'm going to give it.

One last time.

With that thought. Theodore quickly cupped both of Eleanor cheeks and linked his lips with hers, making her to be shocked that he would make a bold move. Theodore continued to kiss with all his might as he never tried before, this was his first kiss, with the chipette he ever loved, Eleanor.

And his last kiss.

As the thought continued to swirl in his mind, He gathered all his courage as he started to use his tongue, tugging at her closed lips to gain access. Eleanor was surprised, not only this was her first kiss, but this seemed to be more real than the innocent peek in those romantic shows.

Just to give his best kiss.

As much as Eleanor was startled, she never complained and open her mouth, and let his tongue to slide into her throat. Her dreams became realities in one night, not only a first kiss, but a french kiss, by her new green-clad tutor.

And remember this moment.

A wave of love, sacrifice, lust and passion washed over them as Theodore continued to deepen the kiss, causing Eleanor to slide her tongue into his mouth as well. They wrestled with their tongues, stroking each other's hair soothingly and affectionately, rubbing it softly as they felt the wonderful sensation of true love.

They kissed non-stop as the kissing in the screen ended, but they were the only couple in the whole cinema that is still transfering their emotion through their lips and tongues. Was there any guilt? Probably not for the blonde chipette, the thought of the red-clad chipmunk vanished from her mind since Theodore's lips started to touch hers, or even the time they just hung out.

As they finally pulled back from the kiss, not because of satisfaction but rather to breath from that intensive kiss, they stared into each other's eyes. Everything around them seemed to be disappeared into dusts, lingering in the romantic dimension that only consisted of themselves. For a minute, their eyes never blinked, continuing to stare with half-teary eyes, almost seeing their own reflections in each other's pupils.

"I…" Eleanor started slowly as their nose touched, "Love…" Amazingly, she did it this time as she managed to speak out those words which were threatening to blurt out from Theodore's mouth. "You…"

"I…I…" Theodore stuttered before blinking hard and shut his eyes as he turned his head away. He clenched his fists tightly, resisting to cry with all his strength. All the moment he spent with Eleanor flashed through his mind, replaying what had happened in the last few days, or even when they're just ten. Considering the love and feelings Theodore has for Eleanor, he decided to proceed what he needed to do.

"I'm sorry."

Theodore quickly blurted out the words as he quickly stood up from the seat, running to the entrance. He opened the door with a fast speed as everyone in the cinema looked to his direction, startled by the green-clad chipmunk.

Eleanor, though happy with the last occasion, still confused with his action as she quickly stood up too and ran just behind him.

Why? Theodore ran out from the cinema and everybody was staring at him confusingly. He took large steps across the empty streets as nobody was walking at this hour and he continued his thought desperately, clasping his palms on his face sadly. Why would I fall in love with her?

That doesn't matter anymore, His conscience spoke up as he sprinted across the streets, dodging the street lights and trashbins. You had already proven your love, It continued sadly, And you sacrificed your own happiness… The conscience paused, Just to surrender her to your brother…

A tear dripped from his eyes as he wiped away, What has to be done is done, Theodore could hear the faint call calling from behind, exactly the way when he was just merely five years old, And I can't change that.

"Theodore!" Eleanor shouted to him as she continued to chase him, Why did he ran? She shocked her head wildly, I don't understand…

"Theodore!" She shouted again as she finally caught with him, stopping him by grasping his wrist. Theodore stopped immediately in his tracks, courtesy of Eleanor's strength. Turning slowly to her, he couldn't bear to see Eleanor in this state, ironically, it was even drizzling as if sobbing for their messed up situation. "Why are you running away?" She asked frantically.

Because I really love you… Theodore shook his thought away as he pulled himself away from her grip, "Our tutoring ends today," Theodore spoke harshly as he looked away, "We're not spending time together," He closed his eyes, though rainwater started to drip down, "Anymore." He said that word barely through a whisper.

"But Theodore!" Eleanor continued to scream lightly at him, "I don't care about the lesson!" She stomped the ground, "I wanted to be with you!" She shouted the last sentence before the rain started to pour heavily, wetting their clothes and hair through that never crossed their mind.

"We can't be together," Theodore scoffed slightly at her, though it felt really hard to do that. "You're already a girlfriend," He spun around, back facing her. "To my brother."

"I was going to break up with Alvin!" She continued to pour out her feelings, "I was going to be your girlfriend!" She exclaimed in pain as she clasped her hand on her heart.

"I'm just…" Theodore cried as his tears mixed with the falling rain drops, "Sorry…" He started to walk.

Without making any decision, Eleanor ran from behind, hugging him around his waist, pulling him close to her embrace.

"Please, Theodore…" Eleanor managed to mumble the word as she continued to cry and embrace him, "I really love you…"

Theodore clenched his fists when she had said that, how painful that he has to always resist himself from doing something in his life.

"I realised that when we…" Eleanor sobbed through her tears, "Started to hang out…" She hugged him tighter, not wanting to let go, "Even when we're ten…" She sniffled heavily, "I always had a crush on you…"

Theodore was slightly astonished at this sentence as he never knew that, they paused at that position with dazing thoughts going through their minds. "So…" He stood there, letting her to embrace him, "Why did you started to date Alvin?"

"Because," Her face was practically soak wet with her tears, despite the rain drops. "You never ask me out…" She snuggled her face slightly with his cheek, "I was tired of waiting…"

I have to ditch her… Theodore took a deep breath, No matter how much I want to take her back…

"Isn't it rejection…" Theodore spoke rudely, "That you fear?"

Eleanor slowly looked up, staring at him though her tears that stayed around her eyes, "You would…" She started as she sobbed, "Reject me?"

Theodore pulled her hands away, as he took a step forward, before looking at her over his shoulder with an emotionless expression.

"Without a doubt."

After that action, Theodore walked away coldly, though he could feel the eyes of the chipette still burning him from behind. He wipe his tears away and walked towards his house. I'm really sorry, Eleanor…

"Theodore?" Simon asked from the couch as his baby brother entered the house, "Why are you soaking wet?" He asked curiously.

Theodore slowly looked up to him and quickly did what he was better than cooking.

Faking a smile.

"I forgot to bring my umbrella." He walked upstairs, dragging his feets behind, though thoughts still lingered in his brain.

"So…" Simon asked casually from downstairs before Theodore could enter his room, "How was the date?"

Theodore chuckled, really dark. "Splendid," He twisted the door knob, slowly closed the door as he don't want Alvin or Dave to wake up. He slid to the floor, back leaning the door and a single tear streamed down from his eyes once again. He laughed bitterly, pulling off his tie from his tuxedo and threw it to his bed frustratingly. Weakly, he took his diary from the table by stretching his torso. Theodore flipped it open to the newest entry while sitting back beside the door, clicking the top of his pen as a tear dropped on the page.

"Just like I planned."

"Eleanor!"

Brittany and Jeanette ran to her sister when she had just walked in, "What happened to you?" Jeanette asked worriedly as she scanned her baby sister's soaked body.

Eleanor sat on the floor, weakly. "I misunderstood." She mumbled softly, I only want my answer…

"Misunderstood what?" Brittany asked as she was confused by her sister behaviour, seeing her so down after her date with her supposed lover.

She started to sob again, "Theodore's feelings…" She cried out her heart at that while her sister embraced her, ignoring her soaking wet dress and fur. I just want my answer…

Brittany and Jeanette looked to each other, worried. This scene was unexpected as they thought their sister would come back with joy and announce to everybody that she would break up with the red-clad chipmunk. The same thought went through their mind as they continued to comfort their broken, fragile sister. Theodore did this?

They continued to sat at there, for seconds, for minutes, for hours… They don't realise it, two chipettes only wanted their sister to be happy, while the last chipette wanted her question to be answered.

Theodore never loved me?

The climax of the story just ended, and I think most of you made the wrong guess! Theodore was going to reject her, he's not going change his mind! How will the story progress when everything seemed to be so sad and confused? You have to continue to read my stories…

Please review and tell me about your opinions, the more the reviews there are to encourage me, the better the story gets. (soft of, I guess… lol.) And the poll is still going on! I really need to know whether to write Bridore! (I'm still going to write Theonor at one point, don't worry.)

By the way, if I'm not mistaken, has my style changed since after chapter six? I feel like I've been writing in a different way… Tell me about the difference, please. Too bad that most people judge with the first chapter. (Shrug) I was sure that these chapters are better than the first ones.

(Note: If you haven't read my one-shot 'A New World', please do.)

From-Pancakez