Hola, Amigos!!! Here's my newest poem. It's set a little differently than the others, so let me know if you want me to keep writing like this, 'k?

See y'all in the mornin'," Rogue said, yawning, before retiring to her new room. It was HER'S, just her's and she was loving it. She had barely gotten undressed and ready for bed when she fell into bed fast asleep, her breath keeping time with Evanescence's Haunted.

The Dream Rogue was walking down a deserted street, somewhere she'd never been before. All around her, she could hear people hissing "Marie!" at her, but no matter how hard she looked, she couldn't see anyone in the thick shadows that swallowed her up. Something was following her, she sensed it, but no matter how fast she ran, she couldn't get away. It was gaining on her and she was getting scared. She started screaming,
"Help! Please, some one help me!" But to no avail. It reached her and she gave herself up to the abyss it was offering.

Rogue shot straight up in bed, sweat dripping down her body. She could taste blood in her mouth from when she bit back a scream in her dream- nightmare, in all actuality. Afraid to go back to sleep, She pushed her covers away and got up, making her way to her desk, which was covered in loose-leaf poems, including Death's Cold Embrace, The Life of the Unknown, Death of Barney, How I see it, The Untouchable, Life, and many more. Rogue took out a battered notebook and began to write.

After Midnight

The clock strikes 1,
My eyes wide with fright, I turn to run.

It strikes 2,
It's coming and I don't know what to do.

The clock strikes 3,
I try to escape, but it won't let me.

It strikes 4
I scream for my life, to which It answers with a roar.

The clock strikes 5,
This is the end, and it makes It's final dive. To the chime of 6, I die, with my crimson blood pooling and dripping away. I realize as I cry for my life-everything I shall miss, things I never got
to try- No one can help me they won't even find me. Please God, I beg, Please, let me live to see my brother and friends one more day! But to no avail, he ignores me and I die lonely and heartbroken.

Ya like? I hope so. I think its one of my best so far, so tell me what you think and any changes you have for me. Thanx!