Ok, I want to explain few things:
Many of you bitched about Naruko as character. That she's weak girl, that she's lame kunoichi that needed to be rescued by weaklings like Anko or Temari ( lol, tokubetsu jonin and elite jonin are weaklings? Good joke sir ). That she's isn't natural, that first she's scared to death by the village and next time she wants to be Hokage. Some of also said I hate Naruto as male, which is total joke and they expected cool femfutaNaru and they got trash that's even worse then civilian. Someof you were or simple cowards or jerks, beacuse those words were published as an guest review.
What can I tell?
Naruko is main core of this stories. She's one of main characters but not main. She's complicated girl and her behavioral change will be explained as story will go forward. It's simple 'from zero to hero'. In incoming sequel, she's cooler and better, stronger, but still suffer mental trauma which she will overcome with time. She will also start hanging out with Temari and there is Anko and Ayame wedding, so it will be longer then first instalment. From the start this was supposed to be a series. Why this period of time? I used it already in 'Screw this' and as both stories have NaruxTemari parring, why not?
Also, I don't hate Male Naruto. I write also 'Screw' series and other story, 'Czerwień I Błękit' in my native language where he's pretty cool if ya ask me. It's not that I dislike male Naruto and wanted to do from Naruko here weakling girl that can't do anything alone. It's simple story 'from zero to hero' like I said earlier, and to change somebody as Naruko, she needs powerful drive, what can be more powerful drive for her than acceptance and love of her parents who died protecting her? And about Naruto as male, Naruto until Kage summit arc was good enough in terms of power and I understand his still new and more powerful power ups but it's too much. First KCM,ok, I get it, Biju mode, cool, he and Kurama works together, Sage Biju Mode, ok, still it's explained reasonable so it will pass. But lol, Rikudou Mode? New Rasengans from the ass? All possible elemental Rasengans thanks to the Biju? Sorry, not here. Kaguya arc is fucked up in my opinion and right now I can tell that I won't go with official War arc. Until Madara became Jubii Jinchuriki it was good enough and that's from where I will left official manga and do my own ending.
'Lol, she trained with Jiraya, why she didn't defended herself? You done from her a cumdump! etc'
Fear. She was scared to the bone, she was scared to defend herself because she knew they would hurt her friend and step-family. She choosed to suffer if that would keep her family and friends safe. She isn't scared to fight with random vilians like Kisame, Orochimaru or Sasuke. Nope. And don't forget Kirigaya was Daimyo nephew and he decided if the village will get cash or not. It's more complicated.
Plus, if you are raped, THEN WHO YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO BE?! PRESIDENT?! NO! You're piece of meat, cumdup, trash! What you expected? That in the middle of rape she will stand up and tell "nah, I'm sore, c'ya" and walk away? Seriously?
'Lol, Kurama didn't done a thing to help her?!'
And why he should? In original, Kurama didn't liked his containers, why he should help her if he hated her? Her suffering was pure entertainment for him plus, he knew they won't kill her or broke her mentally. He's the reason why she's still alive.
'Lol, how's it possible that she didn't broke mentally?'
Strong will that comes from her Uzumaki bloodline and love to her friends and family. If ya don't get it but you're ok with original manga Naruto strong and his ongoing ultimate technique Friendship Talk-no-jutsu, something isn't right with you.
'LOL, SHE HATES THE VILLAGE BUT WANT'S TO BE HOKAGE, LOLOLOLO!11111'
She hates the village = those who called her names/picked her up/hurt her. But not whole village is like that. Example? Ayame and her father, Kakashi, her friends from class, Konohamaru and his team, Anko, Suna sibllings. Also, as she told, she never thought that she was from clan and that her parents died protecting her. She thought that they left her on the street because she was different. But to her amazement, she found that they loved her even before she was born, that they loved her so much that they sacrificed their lives to protect few hours old girl. So for her parents, for her step-sisters, for her godmother and for her possible love, she wants to make the village better place.
'LOLOLOLO, YOU'R ENGRISH SUCKZ!'
Yes, i'm not going to deny it. My English isn't perfect but it's not my native language. English is universal but not everyone use it to communicate on daily basis. I decided to write 'Genderless' in English, because i knew it will have bigger audience if i would write in in polish.
I try to correct my mistakes, i read and correct those mistakes all the time but unless i find anyone to help me, sorry, that's all what i can do.
'LOLOLOLO, RANDOM HATE'
Just go be troll somewhere else.
And simple advice for all haters, that will make your and my life easier:
Don't like it? Don't read it.
Thank you.