Gladly we have some reviews, forgot to post them:

WizardJedi: Hm...different... ... ...but exciting. It's different yet keeps with the familiar Star Wars universe. Keep up the good work and hope to see another chapter soon, I do, hm?

Livethir: I know its only the prologue, but just for future reference - when referring to more then one Jedi, you still say Jedi. You don't sat jedi's. We will be able to tell if you are referring to more then one Jedi by the way the sentence is written. Also, the second part of the prologue is written in a way that is somewhat confusing. But hey, all I'm doing is nitpicking. I will be able to see if this is a good story when I read more of it. Keep up the good work!

Coruscant Attack II

As the ships prepared for an assault, Mace Windu looked outside from the Crawout bridge. Walon Vau, which was sitting next to him in his Katarn amror said, "Well General we better be off so we can help the forces on Coruscant". Mace which was still thinking said, "I just can't beileve the Jedi there couldn't hold back the droids". Vau thought about that and said, "Well you never know". Mace just stood up and nodded. "Just hope we resecure Coruscant", said Mace. Vau nodded and walked away to talk about the attack. Mace walked off the bridge to the lower decks to see if he can find Obi-Wan Kenobi. Obi-Wan was busy up in the Cantina with Rex and Cody talking about the war. "Well Cody just gather the Elite Orange Squad and take them down to the planet", said Obi-Wan. Cody just looked at Kenobi. Rex who was quiet left so he can get the troops ready for the first wave. "General Skywalker will get that Command Post right General Kenobi", said Cody. Kenobi got up saying, "Better go to the hangar to organize the troops". Cody nodded and stayed at the Cantina. Not knowing what will happen next, Cody was hit by a blaster rifle and fell down on the floor fainting or knocked out. Kenobi grabbed his Lightsaber to start the fight that was happening. "What is wrong with these people", said Obi-Wan slicing a man in half.

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As Ventress sat down in the Jedi Council chamber, Count Dooku called. "Ventress I have secured one of the last cities of the Republic, soon we shall rule the galaxy" , said Dooku over the comlink. Ventress said, "Execellent work Master, has our new Appretice captured that city yet"? Dooku just looked at Ventress. "What"?! Ventress then realized that the new Sith, that was to be transported to the Jedi Temple, was shot down. "Gather Troops Master, I fear that the transport was shot down". Dooku then was puzzled and said, "By who"? Ventress then went to look at the dead body of Shaak Ti, but it wasn't there. "Shaak Ti", anwsered Ventress.

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As Shaak Ti was walking, weakly around the city of Turst, she gathered Jedi and Civilians to help. "Master Ti, we need supplies, did you secure a Comlink"? asked Luminara. Ti nodded and waitied for the com channel to pick up. A civilian named Rahm kota said, "Look Droids"! The Jedi turned around to see them, and some Sith. The Sith saw them and said, "Take them, dead or alive". The droids started firing. The Jedi were blocking while the Civlians were using what weapons they had. Kota was shooting every droid like it was a piece of cake. Then a Droid hit one of the 4 Jedi there. Luminara fled the scene and took a few Civlians so they can reinforce when ever they were in trouble. Shaak Ti engage in a duel aganist the Sith and was to choked and fell. The Sith kicked her body aside. Then he took the 2 Jedi, and what ever Civlians that were alive. Rahm Kota saw Ti lying on the ground. Kota then used what ever force he had, or what he didn't know and grabbed the Lightsaber. "Hehe, that should teach them", said Kota under his breath. While they left, Luminara came back to grab Shaak Ti and took her to their camp inside the building.

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As the ships reached Coruscant, the Iron Hand was looking at the first ship that came, the Crawout. General Grevious was looking on with some Droid pilot and Nemodians. "Sir, we picked up Republic Transports and fighters in the sector", said a pilot. Grevious said, "Blow them away". The droid pilot nodded and hit a Droid accidently and its head broke off, the body was rolling away from the bridge quickly. Grevious walked off the bridge and down the hallways. "Hehe.....Count Dooku will be proud off me for getting rid of the Republic is this space once and for all". Grevious walked into the hangar and saw a Droid climbing into his ship. "Hey, get out of my ship"! yelled Grevious. The Droid was scared it killed itself. Grevious looked at the body and smirked. As he got in some droids got into Tri-Fighters. "Time for a Assualt men", said Grevious on the ship COM system.

Well that felt entertaining. The Battle has begun. Shaak Ti is injured, but were is she going to. Where will the 2 Jedi, and the civlians go? Who is Rahm Kota? and what will happen next in this 4 to 5 chapter battle. Every question will be anwsered in the next chapter. Also Review and look at the polls.