I'm sooooo sorry about not updating when I said I would but the stupid computer kept deleting what ever I wrote. This one's from Creekfeather's point of view for a twist.
Creekfeather's POV
"Well," Onestar started, "I suppose she can stay."
"Okay, I'll take her to Kestrelflight and Swiftheart." I mew walking out. I bound to the beautiful, shivering white and gray she-cat.
"Thanks for saving me," she meowed.
"It's nothing." I mewed trying to hide the fact that I liked her a lot. But there's no way a she-cat like that isn't already spoken for. "Let's get you to the medicine den" I managed to choke out.
"Okay," Mossfire replies, following me to the medicine den.
"Swiftheart! Kestrelflight!" I called out.
"Yes?" Swiftheart asks coming up from behind me.
"This cat here, Mossfire fell into the stream by the Thunderclan border. I meow.
"I see," she meows eyeing her. Then she walked into the shadows. I heard the rustles of some leaves and Swiftheart emerged from the darkness. "Take this, thyme and feverfew."
Mossfire reluctantly gulped down the herbs. "Make sure she has something to eat before she's on her way home." Swiftheart meowed as we were walking out of the den. She sat near the edge of camp while I grabbed us a rabbit to share. I padded to her with the rabbit and we took small swift bites until all that was left was the bones.
"Thanks for almost drowning," I say licking her cheek. She looks startled for a moment, her willowy green eyes growing huge. Oh no I thought.
"Thanks for saving me so I could meet you," she mews softly with shining eyes. Our tails twine but then she speaks. " I must leave but lets meet every moon-high at the gathering island."
"Okay," I whisper, "I'll get Onestar to send a patrol to accompany you home." Onestar sends me, Crowfeather, and Gorsetail. We near the Thunderclan border and cross it. We crunch through the snow until we reach their camp.
Crowfeather the leader of the patrol meowed "Go. We won't go into camp just tell Bramblestar that we brought you."
"Okay." She mews. We bound through the forest and by the time we reach camp it's dusk and I'm tired so I go to my nest. Will she come to the island tonight or will she ditch me and report all of this to Bramblestar? Oh well I'll see later tonight.
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