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~*~Here's a few of the reviews from Chapter 10…~*~
Dazzledeyes 22 wrote: Okay, I was really waiting for this showdown between Bella and Alice. It has been brewing for sometime, but I was truly surprised how good it was. The
Unabashed Gaul of Alice to call Bella out on the silent treatment and not take
any blame for what she did was mind boggling. Alice could have played it cool
and let Bella come to her, but this was consistent with Alice's attitude in
the kitchen with Edward and her parents. She and acts like the ends justifies
the means. Unbelievable! I was so glad when Bella socked her and what was that
in Jasper's look. He can't feel good about Alice's attitude either. Rose said
it right when she said that, "girlfriends are a sisterhood" and that Alice
"disregarded all the rules that goes along with that and for that I can't
even respect her as a woman, so why would I want to be friends with her." I
await her breakdown when she truly realizes and apologizes for what she has
done. Awesome chapter! Keep up the good work!
Kerry Hale wrote: That was fab chapter. The scene with Ali was not over the top at all. I am
so glad to see that Rose and Bella are to still friends. I hope Bella and
Jasper and be friends again, but not so much with the friendship of Alice and
Bella. Can't wait to read about her birthday.
Kiara-elle wrote: Another great chapter, love the title. Catfight scene was great - not over
the top. So eager to see what Edward has planned so update soon.
I must have dozed off to sleep while Edward and I watched "Hancock". I normally never fall asleep on a Will Smith movie, so I must have really been tired. Edward must have moved me to the bed when I fell asleep because I know for certain that we were on the sofa watching the movie.
As I looked around the room I noticed that Edward is no where to be found. I get up from the bed and look around to see if he's left a note or a clue as to where he went. Sure enough sitting on the breakfast bar is a note saying that he stepped out for a moment to check on a few things and for me to go ahead and take a shower.
Since I wasn't sure what our plans were for the night, I didn't pick out an outfit to wear. After my shower, I put some lotion on my body and blow-dried my hair. I put on one of the terry cloth robes that the hotel provided for us. I wish Edward would have given me some for information or something, I feel weird just sitting here in nothing but my bathrobe.
Not even ten minutes later, Edward walked through the door.
"Hi love. Did you see the note I left for you," he said as he walked over to me giving me a kiss.
"Yes, I did read it. I wish you would have told me what to put on because I didn't know what to pick out for tonight," I told him.
"Don't worry about sweetheart, there was no rush for you to get dressed. Now that I'm back I can assist you with picking out an outfit if you like," he answered giving me that dazzling smile of his.
"You know that's so not fair right?"
"What do you mean? What did I do?"
"When you smiled at me like that, I lose all ability to think straight. You're dazzling me mister."
"Bella, I don't know what you're talking about. All I did was smiled at you," he said sounding sincere.
"Well now you know…but don't think I'm mad, because I'm not. It's actually cute."
He laughed and then looked at me a bit strangely. He walked closer to me and put his hands on the lapels of my robe.
"Love, what are you wearing under this robe," he asked.
"Nothing. I wasn't sure what underwear would be needed, considering that some outfits require specific undergarments," I told him honestly.
"Bella, you're seriously going to kill me. Don't you know that it's taking everything in me not to ravish right here where you stand? You are breathtaking and you're only in a bathrobe."
"Edward, stop being ridiculous. No one looks breathtaking in a bathrobe, especially not plain old me."
"How many times do I have to tell you that you obviously don't see yourself clearly? You are beautiful, sexy, gorgeous, alluring, and everything that a woman should be. What's even more is that you're all mine."
"I'm glad that you think so. I've never been my biggest fan when it comes to people paying me a compliment. You are right though, I'm all yours babe."
I closed the distance between us and placed my arms around his neck so that I could kiss him. I pulled his head down to meet my lips and then gave him a very sensual kiss on the lips. I immediately sought out his tongue and played tongue hockey with it. His kisses are amazing, I will never grow tired of them.
I could feel his erection harden against my stomach and I was beginning to get even more turned on. I moved my hands down to his pants and undid the button on his khaki pants and moved the zipper down. I reached my hand inside his boxers and grasp his length. I moved my hand up and down his shaft, eliciting the most erotic moans from him.
"Oh God Bella, your hand feel amazing on me. Uh yeah baby, I'm so close."
I knew that he was tense and had been so for awhile now. He gave me my release on yesterday, so I thought it was only fitting that I give him his release before we go out and do whatever it is he has planned.
So I released his dick from my grasp and moved his pants and boxers all the way down his legs and then I positioned myself on my knees in front of him. He tried to tell me that I didn't have to this, which I already knew that, but I wanted to. So I shooed him away telling to just enjoy it.
I took him fully into my mouth, getting him nice and wet and then I went to work on his dick. Moving my mouth up and down, making sure to keep a firm grasp on his hard dick. Of course I couldn't fit all of him in my mouth since he's so well endowed, so I put my hand on the part of him that wasn't inside my mouth and massaged it.
"Fuck Bella, that feels great love. Shit, mmm, yeah…oh fuck baby, I'm about to cum."
His cum slid down my throat and I made sure to clean him up real good before making him go and take a shower. He just stared at me in disbelief, with a sexy smile on his face before walking into the bathroom to take a shower.
A few moments later he came out of the bathroom with a towel wrapped around his waist, looking like a Greek God. Together we picked out our clothes for tonight. He finally told me he was taking me to a club in downtown Seattle called "Trinity". I was looking forward to him and I going out to dance. After the morning I had, I need to let lose and have a good time. I plan to do just that with my man.
I picked out a black beaded babydoll halter dress to wear tonight, along with my black satin Christian Louboutin heels. My shoes are red on the bottom, so I chose a red necklace and bracelet to wear along with my black and red handbag. As for make-up I didn't do anything over the top, just some mascara, eyeliner, and lip-gloss.
Edward chose a black pin-stripped button up shirt, with a pair of denim old navy jeans. He paired his outfit with some black Steve Madden loafers. He looked damn good once he was done getting ready. We both gave each other the once over and then we were ready to go.
Edward said that we had to wait down in the lobby for something before we could leave and go to the club. I was none the wiser so I didn't ask any questions.
As we sat in the lobby, me with my back to the door and him facing me in the chair opposite mine, we made light conversation. We talked about everything from school, to summer vacation, to our childhood. We wasn't in the lobby that long before I felt a pair of hands cover my eyes.
I began to panic and then I became a little angry. I didn't understand how Edward could not see someone coming up behind me and not warn me. Before I could say anything, I heard several voices yell…SURPRISE! Then the hands that were covering my eyes were lifted and standing before me were Ang, Ben, Emmett and then Rosalie came from behind me. I immediately began to cry.
"I guess she's not happy to see us. Way to go little bro. Next time make sure your girlfriend actually want to celebrate her birthday with other people before inviting them," Emmett said.
"We can leave little sis, we don't want you to be sad on your birthday weekend," Emmett said to me as he put his arm across my shoulders.
"No, no, I want you to stay. These are happy tears silly boy! I just didn't know what Edward had planned for tonight so you guys caught me off guard. I'm so happy you're here though."
"Good because I didn't come all this way just to have to turn around and go back to Forks. I have plans for Rosie's little ass tonight when we get to our hotel room," Emmett said loudly.
Rose smacked him upside the head and then started laughing. Everybody else followed suit.
"Oh my God guys you are such great friends to make the trip up here on a Friday night no less. I really appreciate it," I told them.
"Anything for you Bella. You're our best friend, of course we're going to be here for you," Ang told me.
"Remember what I said, this is a sisterhood. We do shit like this for the ones that count and you, Miss Swan, most definitely count," Rose said.
"Thanks Rose. I love you girl!"
"Okay now that you guys are here, let's get to the club," Edward said.
We walked out to the car and parked next to Edward's Volvo was the finest piece of metal I've ever seen. My jaw damn near hit the ground. I had never seen a car that was a beautiful as the one I was staring at.
To top it off Edward walked over to the driver's side door and popped the locks. I just looked at him like he was some type of mystical creature. Words were forming in my head, but I couldn't get anything to come out my mouth.
I could see Rose, Ang, Ben, and Emmett off to the side silently laughing at my expression. I guess Edward finally decided to let me out of misery because he finally decided to explain.
"Bella, love, this is my special occasion car. I had Emmett and Rose drive it up so that we could use it during our stay in Seattle. They will be taking the Volvo back with them when they leave tomorrow."
Finally, my mouth decided to cooperate, "wow Edward, your car is amazing. What is it exactly?"
"It's an Aston Martin V12 Vanquish. I only drive it on very special occasions and your birthday fits that particular category."
"Oh Edward, I'm so touched. You truly are a rare, wonderful boyfriend. Thank you!"
"You're welcome love. I told you that I was going to spoil you for the rest of your life, because that's how long I plan on sticking with you."
He had moved over to me as he said those things to me and when he finished talking our lips were connected and in my mind, nobody else was around. It was just him and I, because at that moment, nobody else mattered.
"Get a room already. We didn't come all this way to see you two go at it like rabbits," Emmett commented.
One day he's going to learn to keep his mouth shut, because his head always seem to connect itself to Rose's hand.
"What Rosie, I was just telling the truth. That hurt that time. Can you kiss it and make it better," he said to her giving her a pouty face.
"I'll kiss that and much more if you behave yourself for the rest of night," she told him seductively.
"Alright, let's go. I'm ready to party hardy now," Em said.
Edward and I released each other and he helped me into the passenger seat of his car, before going around to the driver side. The other's were going to follow us in his Volvo.
When we pulled up to the club the line was down the block. I knew that we would never be able to get in this club. It looks like the bouncer is being very selective about who he lets inside.
"Uh Edward, I'm not sure if we're going to be able to get in. Look at that line."
"Don't worry about it love, we'll get it. Let's just find the valet and then we'll go inside."
We valet both cars and made our way over to the entrance to the club. Edward walked right up to the bouncer and said something to him. Next thing I know, the bouncer is shaking Edward's hand and pulling him into a manly hug.
Edward called me over and introduced me to the bouncer. He was tall and very muscular, with locks in his hair. He was very attractive, but not as attractive as Edward was.
"Bella, this Garrett. Garrett, this is my Bella."
"Hi Bella, Edward has told me very nice things about you. I hope you have a good time celebrating your birthday this weekend."
"Thanks Garrett. I'm sure whatever Edward has planned for me this weekend will be memorable."
Edward introduced everyone else and then a waitress named Leah led us to one of the VIP lounges. She seemed really nice, but a little too interested in my Edward. Once inside the lounge she took our drink orders and we settled into the seats in the room. Moments later we had our drinks.
No one was drinking liquor tonight, everything was 100% nonalcoholic. Rose grabbed my hand and said that we should go out and dance. I grabbed Ang's hand and the three of us went out on the floor.
Justin Timberlake was bringing "Sexy Back" while me and my girls moved to the beat. We were having a blast, just shaking our asses and grinding up against one another. It was nothing explicit, just something "straight" same sex friends would do if they danced together.
As the DJ changed the tune to "Cyclone" by Baby Bash we continued our movements with one another before the guys came out to join us. I never really had a chance to see Edward dance and I must admit he was pretty good at it. What couldn't my man do?
He leaned into me and whispered, "you look so fucking sexy when you were dancing with Rose and Angela. I just wanted to come grab you and take you back to our hotel room and do so many things to that body of yours."
"Oh yeah, is that a promise," I said flirting with him.
"I'm willing to do whatever you'll allow me to do to you love. If you're still not ready for us to make love, then I'm not going to force you. I'm willing to go at a slow pace if that's what you want."
"Thanks Edward, I'm glad to know that. I promise that you won't have to wait though. I made my piece with Jasper and I promised myself that I wasn't going to dwell on the past anymore, it's not fair to you or to us. My focus is on you and making sure you're happy. When the time comes, I will not turn you away…I swear."
"I don't know what to say to that love, other than you've made me even happier than I've been, if that's even possible.
After that we danced for awhile to the music, before Emmett twirled Rose over to us saying that they were hungry.
Come to think of it, I too was hungry. I hadn't eaten anything since we ordered room service right after checking into our room. That was hours ago.
Edward looked at me for confirmation that we could leave and I nodded. We rounded up Ben and Ang and we left the club after Edward paid our tab.
There was a 24-hour IHOP right around the corner, so we decided to go there. Once inside I noticed that it wasn't busy at all, considering it was a busy Friday night.
Of course the waitress was very attentive to Edward and Emmett, but one look at Rose and she quickly took our orders and went about her business.
Nobody goes up against Rose. Just one look from her and people turn and go in the other direction. She told me, not long after we first met, that I was the first person to ever stand up to her besides Jasper.
We had got into a disagreement about clothes and she didn't think I would stand my ground, but I walked up to her and told her to her face that I was going to do it my way or no way.
I thought for sure she was going to hit me, because she didn't say anything for a good 30 seconds after I stood up to her. Then all of a sudden she grabs me up in a hug and says that we are going to get along beautifully.
From then on, we have been the best of friends. She's like the sister I've always wanted…her and Ang.
While we waited for our food to arrive we talked about school. They filled me in on all the gossip about what happened between Alice and me. Apparently the gossipmongers made sure to spread the news amongst our student body. It got so bad that Jasper had to take Alice home and Emmett drove her car back home after school.
I held no sympathy for her embarrassment. She brought everything on herself. Maybe if she was little bit more apologetic about the situation, then things would probably have turned out differently. I didn't want to hit her, but was being such an ass that I couldn't resist.
When our food came conversation became minimal as everyone tore into their food. We didn't hang around after we were done, we all were a bit tired. We drove back to the hotel and bid our friend's goodnight, promising to meet up in the morning for breakfast.
Back inside our room I went and took a nice long shower. It was 20 minutes until my birthday and I wanted to bring it in wrapped in Edward's arms.
I took extra care to shave my legs and all other necessary areas before I got in the shower. Edward didn't know this yet, but I was planning to let him make love to me as the clock struck 12 (not that I would be watching the clock).
I had bought a special outfit just for this occasion. I slipped into it, being sure to put on the terry cloth robe before leaving the bathroom. Edward was sitting on the sofa watching TV, with his black silk pajama bottoms on and no top. He looked so tasty!
He noticed me coming out of the bathroom and clicked off the TV and walked over to me.
"Hi there love. Do you feel good after your shower?"
"Yes, I really love the showerhead that they have in there. It projects the water out just right, hitting all the right spots."
I realized a little too late how that comment could be misconstrued. However, Edward didn't say anything about it.
"How about we turn on some music," he suggested.
"Sounds good to me," I replied.
He went over to his luggage and removed his Ipod with the docking station and hooked it up. He asked me if I wanted to dance.
"I would love to dance with you Edward."
"Bella, I would prefer to hold you and feel your body heat up against me…but I can't do that with this robe covering you up. May I please take it off of you?"
I don't know why I got nervous all of a sudden and I knew that he would pick up on it, so I simply nodded my head and gave him a smile.
That was encouragement enough, because he untied the belt and then slowly let the robe fall from my shoulders onto the carpeted floor.
His eyes almost popped out of their sockets when he took in the clothing I was wearing under my robe (A.N. Edward's lounge pants and Bella's lingerie is on my profile).
"I've never seen anything more beautiful in all my life, love. You are more than breathtaking,, you are an angel that belongs to me and only me," he told me.
"I'm glad you like it. I bought it just for this occasion. I wanted our first time to be special," I told him.
He moved closer to my body and took my right hand in his left and placed his right arm around my waist. We begin to move slowly to the music as it drifted through the room. As the first strands of Beyonce voice started singing "At Last", I could feel Edward's lips placing delicate kisses along my jaw and neck.
At last, my love has come along
My lonely days are over
And life is like a song
Oh, yeah, at last
The skies above are blue
My heart was wrapped up in clovers
The night I looked at you
I found a dream that I could speak to
A dream that I can call my own
I found a thrill to rest my cheek to
A thrill that I have never known
Oh, yeah when you smile, you smile
Oh, and then the spell was cast
And here we are in heaven
For you are mine
At last By the end of the song, Edward had moved us over to the bed and gently laid me on top of the down comforter.
He hovered over my body, doing his best to keep his weight off of me. He claimed my lips with his own and immediately sought out my tongue. His tongue felt so right touching mine. Everything about him seems to fit perfectly with me. His mouth moved further down to the top of my mounds.
He took his teeth and untied the tie that was holding my babydoll negligee together. It fell to the sides of my body, leaving the matching thong as the only clothing covering my body.
Edward worked on my breast, kissing, sucking, biting, and caressing them before he journeyed down to my belly button. He dipped his tongue in and out of that opening and then moved down to my panty line. He ran his tongue along the top of my panty line making my body shiver.
"Hmmm, Edward baby I need to feel you in me now," I moaned.
"Be patient love…I want to take things slow. I promise you won't regret it," he replied back.
It's like he was torturing me, but it felt oh so good. He lightly blew his breath across my belly and then up and down each leg. Nipping at different locations along the way. He then took my feet and sucked each one of my toes before moving up to remove my panties.
He moved my legs apart, so that he could lie between them comfortably. First he blew across my core, causing me to tighten my legs up against his body.
"Relax Bella, please relax and enjoy this as much as I'm enjoying doing this for you."
I tried my best to just relax, but he was so good at what he was doing that I swear I could cum right now and he hasn't even touched me with his tongue, fingers or dick.
I felt his fingers open me up to him and then he dip his tongue inside to taste my wetness. Oh yeah, I was dripping wet for him. He lap at me until he brought me to a screaming orgasm. Yes…I was screaming when he took me over the top. I'm sure everyone within a 50-mile radius could hear my screams.
Once he finished licking up all my juices, he moved back up to my lips and kissed me. I could taste my juices on his tongue and the combination was intoxicating.
While he was kissing me, I felt Edward place himself at my entrance. He rubbed "maestro" up against my wetness, teasing me some more. I thought I was going to die from the wonderful sensations I was feeling from his touch.
"Please baby, please…enter me already," I demanded.
"My Bella, you have got to learn some patience. I want to make love to you for awhile, not just 5 minutes. I'm not that kind of guy. Please love, let me make this special for you."
I conceded and just basked in the blissful feelings he was producing in me. I wouldn't have to wait for long, because I could tell that his resolve was weakening.
Sure enough, within a few minutes of his declaration of patience he entered me in one swift movement. It was a bit uncomfortable at first, due to his size. He was larger than Jasper and my body was only use to Jasper's penis.
After he let me adjust to him, he pulled back and thrust in deeper. I wrapped my legs around him and hugged him close to my body. I was damn near elevating off the bed from the intensity of our lovemaking.
I was vaguely aware of the song that was playing in the background, although I was able to determine that it was one of my all time favorites. "Open Arms" by Journey was one of those cliché songs, but I loved it nonetheless.
Lying beside you, here in the dark
Feeling your heart beat with mind
Softly you whisper, you're so sincere
How could our love be so blind
We sailed on together
We drifted apart
And here you are by my side
So now I come to you, with open arms
Nothing to hide, believe what I say
So here I am with open arms
Hoping you'll see what your love means to me
Open arms
Living without you, living alone
This empty house seems so cold
Wanting to hold you, wanting you near
How much I wanted you home
But now that you've come back
Turned night into day
I need you to stay.
Edward still has yet to release and I know he had to be working hard to keep from cumming too soon, I felt myself on the brink of another orgasm.
"Shit Edward, baby I'm going to cum. Cum with me."
"Oh God Bella, baby you're so damn tight. I'm going to cum too. Uh, mmm, ahhh, shit!"
"Oh yes, yes Edward…don't stop. Keep doing just like that. Fuck, baby Eeeeddddwarddddd!
"Bbbbbeeeeellllllaaaaa!"
Nothing and I mean absolutely nothing has ever been more wonderful. I've never felt this way with Jasper and we had amazing sex. This thing with Edward is just so much better, so much more intense. So much so that I was crying when I released.
"Bella, are you okay love? Why are you crying?"
"These are tears of joy Edward. I'm crying because I never knew love could be this wonderful. I've only known the love I felt when I was with Jasper, but with you it is so much better and so much deeper. I'm in love with you Edward and what we just shared was beyond words."
"I feel the same exact way love. I've never even been in love with anyone before. With Tanya it was more lust than love. Like with you and Jasper, Tanya was my first everything and I didn't have anything to compare that experience with. Now I know that it's not close to what I have with you."
"Thank you Edward. Thank you for bringing me here and making tonight special for me…for us."
"I want to spoil you Bella. One day you are going to be my wife, but until then, I want to shower you with all that I can give and never stop showing you how much I love you. Happy Birthday baby!"
No other words needed to be said after that, we got under the covers and fell asleep in each other's arms. I knew that this day was going to be one that I would never forget, all because of the man whose arms I'm laying in right now.
As I was drifting off to sleep I heard my cellphone beep, indicating a new text message. It would have to wait until the morning, because nothing could make me move from this spot.
So there it is, Edward and Bella's first time making love. How did I do? I wanted it to be very sensual and special for them. I just hope I brought that vision across and it was something that you enjoyed reading. Up next is the events of Bella's birthday. I'm aiming to get it out to you by Thursday. As always please review. I swear it's my motivation. Thanks to my BFF for helping me to come up with a name for Edward's penis. "Maestro" was very fitting in my opinion.
BTW, who do you think sent Bella a text at 1am in the morning? I loved to hear your thoughts.:)
Musical Inspiration While Writing
At Last by Beyonce Knowles
With Open Arms by Journey
Higher by Creed
Always and Forever by Heatwave
My Immortal by Evanescence
What Hurts the Most by Rascal Flatts
She's My Kind of Rain by Tim McGraw