I've decided to stop writing this story. I don't have the time anymore, and the reviews from Guest, GUEST, and gfd have kind of brought me down. Plus, I have no idea where my plot's going anymore. I've been trying to give hints as to why Dimitri is acting dead to the world without revealing what's wrong with him, but I guess you guys need an explanation since I'm done writing this story. Dimitri is under compulsion from Adrian; Yes, he told Rose about Baia, but that was just to get her to fight with Dimitri. Every night, Adrian was visiting Dimitri in his dreams to keep the compulsion going. Adrian was compelling Dimitri to stop him from loving Rose so that Adrian could have a chance with her. Adrian was going to keep visiting Rose in her dreams, too, so that they could become close. So, Dimitri was being compelled to not show his feelings towards Rose, therefore he had no reaction to her being raped. As for Lissa and Christian: Well, Lissa knows that Rose will tell her when she's ready, and Lissa doesn't want to pressure Rose in fear of losing their friendship. Christian knows to keep his mouth shut because he doesn't want to be punched in the face. Now, what's happening to the crew in that last chapter: They're escaping my using physical strength and magic. My plan was for them to escape, and on their way back to court Dimitri and Rose would fight, blah blah blah, and then have a little bit of drama when they get back to Court, Rose would realize what Adrian's doing, she'll cut off all connection with him, and then Lissa would find out that she was pregnant, and then two months later Rose would find out that she's pregnant, and everyone will think that Rose's baby is Ryan's baby, since she was raped and dhampir's can't have babies with each other. Then, Rose and Lissa will have a baby shower together, then Lissa has her baby, Rose has her baby, and Christian and Dimitri take Lissa and Rose out for a double-date after the baby-births to get a break from Anne, Rose's baby, and Georgia, Lissa's baby. Dimitri and Christian propose to Rose and Lissa, they get married, on on their wedding day Rose gives Dimitri a gift: A paper which has some test results on it and proves that Anne is the baby of Rose and Dimitri.

GUEST: Was it sick or perverse when Veronica Roth added Lissa's torture scene to the the book? No. And rape is only mentioned once, and I don't even describe that scene, much less the torture scene! Do you honestly think that I would write several chapters where Rose is raped/tortured? I mean, I seriously doubt that there are groups of people around waiting to capture Rose in a story. I understand when you criticize my story, but you have absolutely no right to criticize me when you known nothing about me, except that I write fanfiction. The fact that you put that you would be 'disgusted' with me is totally uncalled for when you have no clue where the plot's going. I really don't appreciate you're review of me. Do you get some sick enjoyment out of calling other people perverted or disgusted?

So, the whole plot is up there; Or, what would've been the plot. If anyone still wants me to write it, then I will gladly try, but if no one is interested in me continuing, then I won't waste my my time. The good reviews outweigh the bad, but I realize the point; Dimitri doesn't show emotion, this doesn't really seem like the real VA books, blah blah blah... Well, now you see the reasons. So, would anyone like me to continue writing?