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Disclaimer: You know da drill I don't own kingdom hearts.

Talyn belongs to me and my best friend GoldenTalesGeek. Tsusai, Kuro, Ouna and Lynx are mine. The plot is mine. Oh and I'd like to apologize for any oocness done to Sora...?

A/N: Talyn and Lynx have a sorta mind speech ability... :blah:

I reedited this chapter and added on.


Chapter 11: Secrets and Lies...

"Are you going to tell me where you hid it?" Elion repeated as he crossed his arms.

"Hid what?"

"Don't play coy with me Talyn." Elion glared.

"Could you bother me another time?" Tayn returned the glare. "Can't you see we're spending quality famiy time here?"

"Ha. I know you better than that. You're just using them as an excuse." Eion hissed.

"Elion, go away." Talyn turned away. Thunder cracked in the distance, Talyn sighed as He stared up at the dark clouds on the horizon. "Ouna its going to storm soon, maybe it's best you head in."

"Okay.." she looked at Kuro who was sleeping on her lap.

"Here let me help you." Riku picked him up and carried him in. Kairi heped her gather up the food as Sora helped Tayn throw sand on the fire putting the blaze out.

Elion stood there in silence, his glare not straying far from Talyn. When Talyn finally turned to face Elion he growled in fustration. "Tayn I'm not eaving until you return whats mine."

The wind picked up tossing Elion's hair. giving Sora and Talyn a veiw of the dark gaping well, a hollow where his right eye should have been. Sora Flinched at the sight of it.

"How did you get here Elion?" Talyn asked quietly.

"Did you already forget what my favorite element is?" Elion grinned. "Now give it to me."

"So you can go on terrorizing the worlds? Hell no."

Elion's lips drew into a thin line. He shook his head. "You left me with nothing Talyn. You took my power and I want it back."

"Isn't the Darkness enough for you?"

"Of course not." his eyes flickered downward as he checked his watch.

"Talyn..." Sora hissed in his ear causing the older boy to jump. "What did you take from him?"

"..." Talyn shook his head. Something is not right...

:I'd say. Why isn't he trying to kill you?: Lynx asked. :I think he's stalling... but why?:

"Elion what are you stalling for?" Talyn asked outright.

:Gee right to the point aren't we?:

:Shut up.: Talyn mentally growled at Lynx. He had gotten the reaction he was searching for. Elion had finched.

"Who says I'm stalling?" he demanded clenching his fists tightly.

"Gee I don't know.. normally by now you'd be trying to kill me." Talyn sneered.

"I was told-" Elion started then quickly shut up his face going red in anger. "Damn it.." he growled.

"Oh I see now. Who are you working for now?" Talyn narrowed his eyes.

"They'd kill me if I told you... without extending an Invitation to join of course."

"No thank you. I'd rather take a cyanide pill." Not that it would work on me for too long...

"I have one of those." Elion grinned.

"Look I believe my brother said no." Sora said stepping in between the two of them.

"Brother? Well isn't this a surprise?" Elion said venomously. "Tell me Talyn have you told your brother of your adventures?" Talyn's expression went hard. Making Elion smile even more. "Have you told him how you struggled oh so hard to find them but gave up when you were trapped in the dark city? Especially after you met her?"

"Shut up Elion." Talyn growled.

"Tell me did he tell you how he took my eye from me and gave it to that parasite? Or how he killed my little brother?!"

"I said shut up!" Talyn yelled as he ran at Elion.

"Oh you'd try to hit me?" Elion grinned. "Now that'd be the day." Elion grabbed Talyn's wrist and threw him flat on his back. He drew a this katana. "I Don't know how you didn't die but this time I won't miss." Elion said as he brought the sword down. Steel met steel as Elion found that a Keyblade had blocked his kill shot. Elion glared up at Sora.

"Leave my brother alone." Sora said as Talyn stood up. Talyn stared wide at Sora and his keyblade.

"Hmph." Elion glared. His glare didn't last long as he quickly smirked.

"NO!" Ouna's scream came from inside the house. A loud explosion soon followed.

Oh god let that have been Dad and his hot sauce... Talyn thought as he turned towards the house to find a black clad and masked woman standing there holding an unconcious Kuro. "Kuro!" Talyn yelled.

"Let's see how you like not having your little brother Talyn." Elion said as the woman vanished. Talyn turned to find Elion standing in front of a portal. "We'll play another time my dear friend."

"You Son of a Bitch!" Talyn and Sora yelled as they ran towards Elion and the portal. "Oh I don't think so, here play with these." Elion said as multiple heartless appeared. "Tata"

:Lynx follow him!: Talyn begged as the heartless began to attack.

:What about-.:

:We'll handle this! Help Kuro!:

:Got it.: Lynx said just before the portal closed.

"Great now what?" Sora growled as heartless began to muster. You'd think that people would stop using thses things as pets.

"Sora... I'm sorry." Talyn said as he stood back to back with Sora.

"Save the explainations for later!" Sora yelled as he launched into the heartless that kept appearing.

Talyn grinned and opened his arms yelling, "Hold your breath!" the wave he had been holding back slammed into the beach, taking out the heartless with it as it pulled back into the sea. Unfortunatly it pulled Sora and Talyn along too.

"Now can I say I'm sorry?" Talyn asked when he surfaced not far from Sora who glared at him.


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