Here's another chapter of the familiar Starkit's Prophecy. Enjoy!

Chapter Ten The Recluse ( :/ )
"EVERYONE FOLLOW ME" meowed StarPleam ( Pleam...really? ) as she charred ( Thoughtful of her to leave the other a path to follow. ) for the entrance to the camp. Tears streamed down her face she was so sad her father had died her leader was gunn. ( Yeah, cat TOTALLY know how to use guns. ) "FLAMEPAW LAKEPAW DUSTPELT ( Apparently she can resurrect cats from the dead. ) MOM LOINBLAZE ( Xd ) FOLLOW ME." She said. "I NEED A PAROL." ( Nah, I'd rather have you stay in jail. )

They run into the frost ( Still leaf-bare, I see. ) their pass ( All cats get a pass each moon to teleport to one cat/spot in the territory. ) working fast. She wood kill HolyLeaf and TigerSar for what they'd done! ( Hollyleaf was threatened, please don't kill her! And I don't see how wood is effective to kill someone... )

She battle cried ( That's how you alert your enemies to you position. There goes the sneak attack! ) using his nose to tar down ( How all great heroes defeat evil. ) the evil cats. Her heat burned! ( She has...heat powers? Confused. )

Soon they had funded them. ( This is a play and you gave them money to do that?! Besides, I didn't think you supported evil. ) They were hiding behind a boulder. ( BEST HIDING PLACE EVER! ) "HAHAHAHA" LAUGHED HOLylesf putting her claw on FiresTarS throat. ( RESPECT THE WARRIOR CODE! ) "IVE GOT YOU KNOW!" ( You've got VOLDEMORT on your side?! )

StarGleam gasped. "noooooo Fireheat!" ( When did he step down and change his name? ) she screamed "FalmePawgo!" ( I wasn't aware this was a Pokemon story. ) she said.

Flamepaw hurled at HolyLeaf. ( Ew. Hollyleaf, I'd run away from the digested food that is now on the ground. ) Hollyleaf laked at her in surprise. ( Hollyleaf, don't flood the territories! ) "What how could they have followed me." ( Simple. They have a Mary-Sue with them! ) She dogged ( Huh, dogging must be a pretty old move. ) at Flamepaw her blue eyes flashing.

"NO FLAMEPAW" whaled LakePaw ( She can speak whale? ) seeing her sisters about to die. "I LOVE YOU FLAMEPAW." She yowled jumping herself in front of HOlyLeaf. ( Is she defending Flamepaw or Hollyleaf? )

HollyLaffs paw cut into her throat blood came out LakePaw fell down. ( I'd assume so, I didn't think things could stand if they were dead. )

"NOOOO!1!11" StarPaw screamed. "FLAMEPAW!" ( It's Lakepaw who's dying though... ) She ran for HoltLeaf but it was no use. LakPaw was dying. ( Yep. Starpaw, it is impossible to turn back time. ) "I love you StarGleam." ( SHE'S GAY! ) She whispered before her blue I's ( Blue I's? ) closed.

"NO WAKE UP LAKEPOOL" ( Stargleam, you don't have the authority to give her a warrior name. ) shouted Stargleam-she was so sad and depressed she was crying! ( Is she going to self-destruct? *takes cover* )

"hahaha" laughed HollyLeaf evil. "You just don't get it do you I'm one of the Tree! ( SHE HAS A KINSHIP WITH THE TREES! )I have powers beyond your imagining!" And then…. She turned in…. A BARE! ( GET SOME CLOTHES! )

"Gasped" gasped everyone. It was a bare!

"I'M A SHAPESHIFTER!" said Hollyleaf joyfully. ( Huh, looks like the trees gave her powers, in particular the mighty oak. )

"Stargleam." Said FlamePaw crying. "I need to go back to the damp. ( Damp what? ) I goat bury lakepaw. ( Wait...so you're going to bury her with a goat? Or are you going to have a goat bury her? OR will you bury a goat in place of her? ) I've never been out of camp before how do you get back!" ( Short term memory here. )

"You just walk to the the east. said StarPaw." ( So descriptive. )

Thanks said FlamePaw crying she picked up the LakePaw ( Because there is only ONE Lakepaw. ) and put her on her back and ran. ( Is she secretly a tom? )

"Not so fast!" said Holyleaf! "Your not gonna get away that easily!" ( Why are you worried about them? Lakepaw is dead. ) With a roar like an volcano erection ( I've always wondered how it sounds when a volcano is created... ) she jumped at StarGleam!

Everyone! Gasped! ( So. Amazing. There. Had. To. Be. A. Period. Between. Each. Word. ) "NOOOO." Yowled StarGleam as something long and sharp plunged into her back. "YOU CANT GET ME THAT EASILY." ( You should be dead now. )

Everyone jumped at the HoBare! ( Watch out for the bear wielding the hoe! ) The bare roared in pane! ( Hopefully the glass didn't shatter. ) Starepaw ( Random new apprentice, whom is talented at staring enemies down! ) sent her teeth into its fore. ( Foreleg? ) It roared.

"oak ok" ( What's ok with the oak? ) HolyLeaf the bare said. " I know you're not gonna be beaten that easily." Suddenly she was a cat1 then her body dropped her eyes went dark she was on the ground. ( DON'T DIE HOLLYLEAF! ) Suddenly there was howl ( DOGS! No wait, they're our clanmates. False alarm. ) from the other side of the frost. ( A carpet of frost? )It was LaFlamePaw! ( She went to France? How fast can she go? Or has she been French this whole time? SO MANY QUESTIONS, NOT ENOUGH ANSWERS! )

"LAKEPAW YOUR BACK!" SHE SAD ( Why are you sad? Your sister is alive! Assuming LaFlamePaw is speaking... )

WHAT SAID SPARGLAME. ( Does this cat like to spar? ) Then she locked. It was LakePool! She was running toward the forest starGleam was so appy. ( So she is obsessed with apps? What types? ) Then she sawyer eyes. ( She had a character's eyes from a book? Creepy. )

THEY WERE OLLYLEAFS! ( OH NO! )

A/N: the next chatter ( Why does this person like to chat so much? ) wil coke soon! AND STUP FLAMMING YOU HAETRS. YOU JUST DONT BELVE IN GOOD. ( No, I believe in the goodness of others.)

Woah, there was a BARE! xD

I may call Flamepaw LaFlamepaw from now on...

Have an epic rest of your day.

Au revoir, mes amis!