Hiya! right first of all a few tiny corrections...
Paragraph 1, Sentence 1, it's damn, not dam.
Paragraph 1, Sentence 2, It's Festus, not Festas.
Paragraph 3, Sentence 4, It's Nico, not Niko.
And, Leo uses hammers and breath mints from his magic tool belt to fight. Not
borrowed knives/daggers.
Thanks 'guest'! very thorough =-)
Secondly... Please review! I know that the last few chapters were confusing so i sort of want to know if anyone dosent understand anything (but positive reviews would be very much appreciated)
Third... what do u think of the characters i wrote in? views will be very much appreciated!
So i guess the basic message is... PLEASE TALK TO ME! and enjoy the story!
