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TwilightLover8000
2010-09-23 . chapter 10

OMG! Fred dont die!

BreeTanner308
2010-09-23 . chapter 10

thanks for updating but i really wanna know what's wrong with bree so please please update soon.

Umbra8191
2010-09-22 . chapter 10

great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

BreeTanner308
2010-07-30 . chapter 9

awesome chap. please update soon

Umbra8191
2010-07-29 . chapter 9

great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

BreeTanner308
2010-07-29 . chapter 8

great chap. i dont think u should make angela weber a vamp. but update soon.

Umbra8191
2010-07-28 . chapter 8

great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

Umbra8191
2010-07-27 . chapter 7

great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

icdeadppl
2010-07-27 . chapter 6

great chapters i can't wait for the next update.

BreeTanner308
2010-07-27 . chapter 6

omg, poor bree.

Umbra8191
2010-07-26 . chapter 6

great chapters i can't wait for the next update.

Umbra8191
2010-07-22 . chapter 4

great story i can't wait for the next update.

vampbooklover3000
2010-07-20 . chapter 3

Awwww! I really like this! Update !

"Fred," Natalie said, never taking her eyes of the wolves. "I was always against harming animals..."

She shift her death glare back to the gray female. "But with this bitch, I'll make an exception."

Before Fred could stop her, the other male wolves jumped towards him, snapping their jaws, clawing at his throat.

Seth

Seth Clearwater was sitting next to Bree as she lay in her bed, sleeping. Carlisle gave her some mild sedatives by injections, in which help the poor girl relaxed after that incident in the forest.

He was both angry and frustrated. Seth was angry that the fact Riley was the main reason why Bree is in her terrible current condition. He's frustrated that maybe Bree wouldn't want to be with him after admitting she was raped.

"Please wake up," He begged her, squeezing her hand.

It literally killed him to she her like that. Leah told constantly that she'd be fine if he left her alone for a while. And constantly, Seth told his sister that he needs to be here when she wakes up.

"Seth I know how much you love her," Leah said. She looks at Bree, then to her younger brother. Seth looked Leah face to face. He saw the one emotion she only had when Sam broke her heart: pain. "But sometimes love is about letting go."

"What are trying to say?"

"I just want you to know there's a chance-"

"What Leah?" Seth said, more pissed off then usual. "That she is going to leave me? That she'll hate me? She's going to be like you when Sam left you for Emily?"

"That's not what-" Leah tried to say but Seth interrupted her.

"Just because Sam imprinted on Emily and left you doesn't mean you have to be a bitch to the whole pack!" Seth nearly screamed. "You just got your heart broken, it's not like you got-"

Leah was now crying. Seth was surprised at his sister. She never cries, or shows any emotion that makes Leah appear…nice. Did he say too much? Or was she really raped?

"Leah, was you…raped?" Seth asked. Leah kept her head down, still crying silently.

"Oh shit, Leah. I'm sorry I didn't know-"

"Just leave it alone, please!" Leah said, leaving Seth alone in Bree's room.

Now he really felt frustrated, first his girlfriend, now his sister. Nice job, Seth. Really screwed up big time. He mentally cursed himself.

Now Seth heard Jacob's howling. Damn, Jake must have found out!

He gave Bree a quick kiss on her forehead: "I'll be back. Promise." As soon as Seth rushed out the door, he phased into his wolf form. Jacob and Leah were waiting for him.

"You called?"

"I got this vampire scent, coming to the Cullen's" Jake said., his giant head gestured towards the west.

"What are you two waiting for let's kick some vampires ass," Leah said as she ran off into the forest.

"For once I agree with her," Jacob said.

"Guess Leah didn't say,"

Bree

I couldn't get him off of me. It was like he was a part of me or glued to my skin. He bit my neck and greedy suck the blood. I felt dizzy. Riley's tongue felt...good. I wanted to scream but I got was a moan. I wasn't supposed to do that. What is wrong with me? It was so real. I was back in the forest with Seth. Now under Riley's mercy. It kept switching back and fourth, I couldn't tell what's real anymore.

Am I going insane? I wanted to die. I rather be dead right now. Maybe I would be with Diego. At that moment, I wanted to rip, tear, kill. I hiss, growled, and snarled at Riley. He enjoyed it, it made him thrust into me hard.

"Great," I heard Leah's voice. "More fucking vampires?"

"The sooner we kill them," Jacob said. "The sooner we get back."

"Right," Seth growled. He glanced at their eyes. "Guys? I don't think they're dangerous."

Leah and Jacob snarled. "Are you trying to be friends with every vampire you meet."

"Look at their eyes! Its honey, not red!"

The black hair vampire was snarling at Leah. Leah snarled back. I looked at the male. I was seeing Fred! He's still alive!

"Fred!" I screamed.

"Bree?" Jacob said confused.

The female jumped to attack Leah. Jacob and Seth suddenly jumped at Fred, teeth bearing and snapping jaws.

"NO!" I screamed.

I was back in my bed. Fred's here but not much longer if I don't stop them. I quickly jumped out of the window, not caring that I was wearing a nightgown or that I have broken my window, but only cared about whether Fred and Seth was going to kill each other.

Fred

Fred moved out of the way. The wolves bumped into each other. He laughed at them. The large male roared at him.

"I know you can do better than that, Scooby Doo," Fred taunted. "Come on. Gimmie your best shot."

The smaller male had its jaws snapping for Fred's hand and nearly got Fred. Damn, these wolves must know we're not humans.

Fred snarled at the larger male. He turned his head and saw Natalie still fighting the female wolf, and at looks like both were equally match. Natalie grabbed the gray wolf by the throat as the wolf was snarling in frustration. In one swift motion, Nat threw her like a rag doll right into the larger male.

"Damn, Natalie,'

"Vamps rule as the wolves-" But was cut off when the smaller wolf suddenly attacked Fred from behind him. "Fred."

Natalie wanted to rush to his aid, but Fred stops her.

"No, he's mine!"

He could smell Bree on the wolf. "What the hell did you do the her?"

When Fred said Bree's name, the wolf howled in anger and now both of them were wrestling with each other, rolling around.

Suddenly, Fred was no longer fighting the wolf. He felt two warm hands on his arm and they ripped him away from the wolf. He snapped his and couldn't believe it: Bree.

"Bree?" He muttered. He turned back to the wolf and saw…a young shirtless boy and…Bree? I'm going crazy. How can she be here and over there at the same time?

"Oh, Fred," Bree said hugging him tightly. He was still slightly confused. She must have been reading his mind. "You must be wondering why there are two of me?"

He laughed. "Yeah. I kind-of did."

"This is going to be hard,"

Please review. Oh and please don't kill me cause I put that Leah was rape around the time Sam imprinted, it wasn't Sam or either of the pack members. I use this when writing this chapter, maybe to show a brother/sister moment, sorry if I offened anyone with this, explain why Leah's strong and how she learn to deal with it. I'll explain how she kept it from the pack.