Underlined speech is thought.
Italicized speech signifies emphasis put on words or a change in tone. You should be able to figure it out from the choice of words and the character.
CAPITALIZED SPEECH IS YELLING.
These are … interruptions in …speech caused … by things …like laughing,…crying, thought,.. and…others.
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Bold words are author notes.
(Previously on "The Ultimate Shinobi." Back with Naruto, he his complaining about having to stay in the hospital. This attracts Tsunade and they get in a short yelling match ending with Naruto against the wall. He then learns that he will get to leave a bit earlier. With Hinata, she wakes up and goes to eat breakfast. She encounters her father on the way out of the compound and tells him she is going training with her team. She arrives to find Kurenai and Shino already there. A conversation starts with the picture but leads to Hinata's new jutsu. Everyone was surprised by the results of the demonstration. As Hinata prepared to do an offensive demonstration, Kurenai left the immediate area to check on an extra spectator. She learned that he has some form of intent towards Hinata and attacked him. This resulted in her being pined.)
Anybody can do what I did in this chapter, but I doubt that they can do it with a two day time limit along with going to school.
Also, this is the last chapter of my rapid updates. A new chapter will be out every Sunday from now on. Don't waste your time telling me to "update soon." Chapters will be once a week, unless I decide on a random Wednesday update.
Over her immediate fear, Kurenai growled at the man behind her. "What do you want with her. This man can do anything he wants and I can't do a thing."
Another chuckle sent shivers down her spine yet again. "With what I have planed for the girl, she won't be hurt ... much. It will also be quite entertaining for me. Whether she will enjoy the experience or not, I don't know."
Kurenai's expression went from angry to beyond furious. "NO WAY AM I LETTING HE DO THATTO MY HINATA-CHAN." Every inch of her body was used in trying to get out of the man's hold but he was too strong. A feeling of hopelessness clenched her heart.
After some deep thought, the man began laughing loudly into Kurenai's ear, infuriating her farther. It took five seconds for his laughter to subside. "Gomen, poor choice of words I'm afraid. I assure you that I am by no means a pedophile of any kind. If I wanted to do that, I would have done it already. Did you know that when she trains for that jutsu, she does so alone andin the nude. She trains on top of water so when she finises, she is wet, nude, and exhausted. Any genin could take her. No, my true intent is far different than that. She is actually lucky that I was there each time in case someone did happen upon her."
A good deal of the woman's anger was replaced with relief. "Are you saying that you would protect her."
"Hai, she plays an intricate part in the future that I have planed out. I so hate when things don't go according to plan so I will protect that future in any way possible. I have already planned for all possible obstacles."
Kurenai returned to glaring at the man. "What part does Hinata-chan play in your plans?"
"Hump, I don't think I am going to tell you or anyone else that. But since you seam to think of yourself as the girls mother, I will tell you how I plan on getting things started." The man leaned in closer so he could whisper into his captive's ear. When He came back he saw a expected expression of shock on the woman's face. "Just to let you know, I will be watching you to keep you from spilling the beans, so to speak. I rather the Hokage be the second person to know, with my choice of timing."
The man then let his chin rest on Kurenai's shoulder causing her to growl at how uncomfortably close he was getting with her. He fell into a deep state of thought before suddenly snapping out of it. "Now I am torn between leaving you here as you are or leaving you as ticked off as womanly possible."
Kurenai hardened her gaze towards him. "What do you mean 'ticked off as womanly possible?' I am already ticked, as you so eloquently put it."
The sky blue eyed man smiled hard enough to force his eyes closed. "Well, first I am going to tell you that I cast a genjutsu on your students so that they can't feel your killer intent. Second, you facial expression and tone of voice will appear calm to them. Now for the ticking you off part."
Kurenai could feel the arm around her neck move away from her only to feel the now free hand pressing forcefully on a more personal aspect of her body. Before she even had time to be angry, the man disappeared. Her arms trembled at her sides in anger as she could still feel the place where she was groped. "I swear, the next time I see that man, he..is..dead."
When Kurenai finally got back to her students, killer intent was coming off of her in waves. She wasn't surprised that her students were not reacting the it or that the log was decimated. When she reached Shino, she placed her hand on him, sending a burst of chakra into his system. The bug user turned towards Kurenai due to the sudden amounts of killer intent coming off her. She leaned down to whisper to Shino. "We need to talk to Hinata-chan." 9.
Shino looked back at his sensei. "The spectator?" 4.
Kurenai nodded. "Hai, he was watching Hinata-chan." 9.
Shino turned his head back towards his female teammate. "If he wants Hinata-san, then we should inform her. We should also make sure that she remains calm as well." 26.
Kurenai nodded again and stood up strait to approach Hinata, followed shortly by Shino. She place her hand on her other student's shoulder and broke the genjutsu on her as well. Hinata hesitantly turned her head back at the amount of killer intent she felt despite the fact Kurenai tried to restrain herself. "Kurenai-sensei, d-did I do s-something wr-wrong?" 15.
Kurenai looked at the nervous teen with a serious expression. "No, it is not that. There is something other than your jutsu I have to tell you about." 22.
"S-something else? W-w-what is it?" 9.
I will do a short skip because it is not time for you to know this yet.
Hinata now stood in her protective posture. "M-maybe we sh-should tr-trust him i-if that is all h-he wants." 17.
Shino being the voice of reason spoke next. "We do not know if he is lying or not, therefore. we can't trust him." 18.
"Y..your right S-Shino-kun." 7.
Kurenai dropped down to Hinata's eye level while wearing a hard expression. "You be careful Hinata-chan. This guy could be dangerous so stay safe. We should go see Kiba-san at noon so we can let him know as well." 34.
Hinata gave Kurenai a nod. "H-hai." 3.
Kurenai stood back up. "Good, you two are dismissed. Go home and stay safe." 11.All three went their separate paths. When alone, the genjutsu master felt a shift in her senses. "Genjutsu. ... Release!" After dispelling the jutsu, she whirled around to face the same stranger as before.
He chuckled. "You must be quite a genjutsu master to sense that."
She smiled smugly. I am the greatest genjutsu specialist in Konoha. You actually thought I wouldn't be able to dispel your genjutsu."
He chuckled again. "That title didn't help you much against me."
Kurenai's eyes widened. "That's right, he was able to dispel my best genjutsu instantly.How did you dispel my genjutsu so quickly."
Another chuckle. "I didn't dispel it. It never took effect."
Her crimson orbs widened further. "W-what kind of ninjutsu are you using to do that."
He can't stop chuckling. "Although I dohave a ninjutsu that makes me immune to genjutsu, I never use it in that manner."
Eyes grew even wider. "If it is not ninjutsu... Is it a Fūjutsu?" Sealing jutsu.
"Once again no. Since you are apparently out of choices, I will tell you that it is technically a taijutsu."
"T-t-taijutsu?"
This time the man sighed. "Hai, it isa taijutsu that makes me immune to genjutsu believe it or not. It takes no chakra in any way, shape, or form to use. Only a taijutsu can be described that way."
"H-how?"
"I am not going into a detailed description but I will tell you that the jutsu is called Seikūken. I would also like to tell you that you did not dispel the genjutsu I cast upon you."
Kurenai felt a bit annoyed that all she learned about the jutsu was it's name. She glared at him for the second sentence. "Are you saying that I am still under your genjutsu."
"No, I am saying that what you felt earlier was not the casting of my genjutsu but the removal of it."
Kurenai's eyes widened. "What do you mean?"
The man sighed. "I am saying that it is far easier to detect my Interaction Distortion Jutsu when it is being removed that when it is being put into place. You are actually the first to detect it's activation but thanks to how the jutsu works, I was able to change your memories."
"That is not possible. How can this random man perform a genjutsu of such caliber. Where did he come from?"
He laughed loudly yet again. "I see that you don't believe me. How about I show you what your students saw." He then flew though a blur of hand seals. "Memory Transfer Jutsu."
Flashback.
A smiling Kurenai placed her hands on Shino's shoulder to catch his attention. "I was nothing. How's Hinata-chan." 9.
"Her ninjutsu?" 4.
"Kurenai nodded. "Hai, How did she inflict that damage?" 9.
Shino tuned his head back towards his female teammate. "Its speed and power are high. Her arms became blurs as she blew off and cut off many portions of the wood." 26.
Kurenai nodded again then stood up. She then walked to Hinata, followed by Shino. When she got to her pupil, Kurenai placed her hand on the girl's shoulder. Hinata slowly turned her head in order to face her sensei. "Kurenai-sensei, d-do you think I-I did alri-right?" 15.
Hinata's eyes met with a kind smile. "You did very well. By making a jutsu like that one, you have proven yourself quite strong." 22.
"M-me strong. No I-I-I can't be." 9.
Not liking the doubts in Hinata's eyes, Kurenai tried to quell them. "Hinata-chan, you arestrong. You are always working harder than anyone else to better yourself. A trait that I am happy to say you got from a certain good influence in your life. I believe his name was Naruto Uzumaki."
"N-Naruto-k-kun, I-I can't b-be as strong as h-he is." 17.
Seeing his teammate's distress, Shino decided to put in his two cents. "You truly underestimate yourself Hinata-san. You are quite strong." 18.
"Re..really S-Shino-kun?" 7.
Shino nodded as Kurenai dropped down to the Hyuga's eye level. "Hinata-chan, you are strong. Don't let anyone tell you different. Let's tell Kiba-san about your jutsu at noon. He'll tell you the same things." 34.
Hinata nodded. "H-hai." 3.
Kurenai stood up then. "Good, you two are dismissed. Go home and relax." 11.
End Flashback.
Breathing hard and sweating, Kurenai glared into the camouflaged man's light blues eyes. "What... what was that?"
"Didn't I tell you. That is what your students saw."
"You did all of that with one genjutsu. Even I can't do that."
He release three loud laughs. "Actually it was two genjutsu. One on you and one on your students."
She went wide eyed again. "That is not possible. No one should be able to do that. Your genjutsu has to have some kind of limitation."
He began to smile broadly under his mask. "That is the genius part of my genjutsu that makes it so that only I can use it properly. With all of the things that I can control and reshape in m Interaction Distortion Jutsu, I cannot change the amount of speech between scenarios. As a genjutsu specialist, you should have very good memory. If you play each scenario through your head, you will find that each has the same number of syllables."
After thinking about it for a few seconds, Kurenai found herself in a state of complete shock. "He is not lying.Why do you use such a difficult genjutsu."
"Simple, it makes it so I can put more focus on making the jutsu difficult to detect. Besides, with my talent with Haiku, matching up syllables has become natural for me. I will say that it was especial difficult this time because I also had to make sure that the time between each of Hinata's stutters were the same as well."
He eyes widened a bit. "Genjutsu must be your best skill."
"Hump, actually genjutsu happens to be my weakest subject. I have none that can be used in battle."
Even further. "I-if that's so then what is your best."
"That would have to be taijutsu with ninjutsu a good bit behind."
Her eyes started to widen farther before they switched to an analytical gaze. "Let me guess. . Seikūken."
"Hai, that is correct." The man took on an informative pose. "Have you noticed that we have been talking like a couple of old friends."
Kurenai's complexion pulled a Hinata. "WELL, THAT STILL DOESN'T MEAN THAT I TRUST YOU!"
He began laughing again. "Just to let you know, I don't care if you trust me or not so long as you don't tell anyone. I will be making sure that you don't." He took up the informative pose again. "Didn't you say you were going to kill me for groping you earlier."
Before Kurenai could react, the man was gone yet again. "I hate that man. I can hear his laughter in my head." Needless to say, she was seething mad. When she looked up th check the time, Kurenai found that it was almost noon. "That's not good. I don't need to be like Kakashi." A sneeze could be heard in an adult bookstore.
A bit later, a winded Kurenai arrived at the hospital where both students were waiting. Hinata went wide eyed at her sensei's out of character entrance. "K-Kurenai-sensei, w-what's wrong?"
"Don't worry Hinata-chan. I was just being held up. I probably will never get a chance to tell her."
Seeing the arrival of his sensei, Shino began walking into the hospital. "Shall we go?"
Both females nodded and spoke simultaneously. "Hai."
In Kiba's room.
"HEY EVERYONE! I WAS WONDERING WHEN THE WHOLE GANG WOULD BE HERE!"
Hinata blushed lightly. "Y-you shouldn't b-be yelling in the h-hospital Kiba-kun."
He began rubbing the back of his head. "Gomen Hinata-chan. I am just a little frustrated."
The genjutsu mistress rested her right fist on her pelvis. "Being frustrated in no excuse of a shinobi to lose control of themselves like that."
"Gomen Kurenai-sensei. I will try to not let it happen again."
She nodded. "Good, don't let it happen again."
Shino decided to get to the point. "Kiba-san, the primary purpose behind out current visit was to inform you of Hinata-san's newest jutsu."
When Kiba first became part of the bug user's team, he had trouble understanding Shino when he decided to use more complicated words. Even now, Kiba can only figure out what Aburame's speech when he picks out bits and pieces that he does understand. "You mean I missed the premier of Hinata-chan's jutsu." Shino nodded. Kiba sighed disappointingly. "Can you tell me how it looked and how strong it was?"
Shino being the only one to see it first hand other than Hinata, he went into the description. Short time skip.
Kiba hung onto every word before turning to the silent Hyuga who happened to have an increasingly pink face with each compliment from the bug user. "Your jutsu sounds awesome. I can't wait to see it in action."
She blushed even pinker. "H-hai, I can sh-show you when you g-get out, i-if you don't m-mind."
Kiba did a confused head tilt. "Mind?" He switched to a toothy grin. "Of course I don't mid. I would love to see your jutsu."
"Arigato Kiba-kun."
A yip could be heard in the room's corner. "Akamaru wants to see it to."
Hinata looked at the pup with fading colors and a sweet smile. "H-hai Akamaru-chan."
Akamaru whined. "Akamaru still doesn't like it when you use the chan honorific."
"Oh, g-gomen Akamaru-ch-kun."
Everyone, except Shino of course, chuckled at Hinata's self correction and Akamaru's pouting. The Hyuga tried to hide her blush. Finished laughing, Kurenai turned to the still laughing Kiba and spoke in a stern voice. "Kiba-san." This caused him to face her. "Do you know when you and Akamaru-san will be released."
"Akamaru is good to go in two days." He sighed. "I am stuck for four days."
"I-it's okay Kiba-kun. Y-you will be up a-and running in n-no time. J-just be patient."
He began smiling broadly. "Arigato Hinata-chan. You always know what to say to comfort others."
Hinata took up her protective posture and looked down to hide her blush. "N-no, I am n-not that special."
Everyone sighed but it didn't show in Shino. Kiba held his fist in front of himself. His words were more forceful than loud. "STOP THAT HINATA-CHAN. IF YOU KEEP CALLING YOURSELF WEAK THEN YOU WILL STAY WEAK. YOU'RE A BAKA FOR LETTING OTHERS DRILL THAT BAKA'S IDEA INTO YOUR HEAD. THINK FOR YOURSELF FOR ONCE HINATA-CHAN."
When Kiba finished his pep talk, he looked at Hinata giving him the opposite reaction he was expecting. She stood in the same position as before with the addition of small droplets falling of her chin. Kiba then began to wave his hands defensively. "Gomen Hinata-chan. I-I didn't mean what I said. I am not saying you are weak. I am just saying that you don't have any confidence."
Hinata's tears grew larger informing Kiba of his mistake. "WAIT, that's not what I meant either. It's just that. ." Kiba sighed loudly and let gravity take control of his arms. "If I say anything else I could just make it worse."
All spectators including Akamaru had one collective thought. "Baka."
Kurenai rubbed her temples. "Kiba-san was never very good at improving Hinata's low self-esteem condition." She placed a hand on the distraught Hyuga's shoulder in order to calm her down. Kurenai was only half successful as the girl looked up with puffy eyes and a few tear drops moving down her cheeks.
After a sniffle, Kurenai disregarded all professional boundaries and let her maternal instincts take full control of her body. This caused her to drop down to her knees and pull the girl into a affectionate hug. The rubbing of her back coaxed Hinata to join into the hug, crying on her sensei's shoulder.
After Hinata had enough time to pour out her excess stress, She reluctantly pushed herself away from her current emotional crutch. Shino decided at this time to speak. "We should leave."
Agreeing with the bug user, Kurenai wrapped her arms around Hinata's shoulders and led the girl out of the room, followed by Shino.
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