Mwahaha I've finally written down my plan for a good ending :) Wait till you see then next few chapters! Soooo I know it's shorter than my other chapters, but the ending was so good, that I didn't want to ruin it, so I just added in more details to make it longer! I know, bad author, but I kind of like this chapter :) -Danielle
"Hunter! Please! I-I can't go back, please don't!" I breathed. He had his hands on my arms, blocking the blood from running smoothly through my veins. I tried not to scream; that wouldn't help at all.
"If I can't have you, no one can. You're either a vampire with me forever, or I get to taste that's sweet scent of yours. It's as simple as that, Bree! You've already been through this before, you know what happens. I win, you lose. But, I'm feeling nice, so I'll give you a choice on what you want to lose." Hunter growled. He was insane, obsessive...deadly. I didn't want to be a vampire again, I wanted to be with Diego, but I wasn't done with my life.
"No, no, no, please don't, Hunter please!" I screamed. Too late, he threw me into the brick wall with such force that I actually dented it. My head ached and I was pretty sure that something was broken, but I didn't know what. Pain was everywhere, everything, and it only got worse by the second.
He looked like he was having fun, which worried me that it was not over yet. Hunter picked me up again and tossed me into the air, flying out of the way so I would fall on the gravel. Yep, that was my leg. Ouch. But he wasn't done, the vampire snapped my arm like a twig. More screaming and begging for it to stop, but did he listen? No. Did anyone listen? No. So, the total broken bones was probably already up to three and he still looked hungry for more. Would I suffer through every bone in my body until he was satisfied with his revenge?
Hunter was on me, his lips to my arm. There was a moaning sound coming from close by, though it didn't sound human. Maybe it was me... I could literally feel my blood leaving my body, every drop a billion knives sticking into my skin. Blackness rimmed my vision, closing in on me. It was like the flames all over again, except this time I was permanently dying.
And suddenly, Hunter was gone, though the pain still thrived inside me. I could hear bangs and grunts, but I was too far gone to think about it much. A flash of heat licked my skin, excelling the pain that much further. Not long after, I felt a black wall pushing against me. I let it fall, too weak to try. Finally...peace...
Diego stood before me looking stunning in a black silk tuxedo. He reached out and took my arm, swinging me around a ball room. It was only us, gracefully moving along. My long blue and green gown floated with me, ruffling just right. He smiled softly, slowing down to kiss me.
"Don't worry, you have nothing to fear." Diego whispered in my ear.
A whole night of dancing, and I never grew tired. When the moon began to lower, Diego swept me out into a beautiful garden.
"I won't ever leave you again, Diego. I promise." But despite my words, he disappeared, leaving only a metal door. I tried to open it, but it was really hot. I pulled away sharply, preparing myself to try again when the door sprang open by itself. In front of me blazed a thousand flames, all screaming like they were burning themselves. The place made me want to cry, just sit down and cry. Suddenly, two firm hands pushed me into the flames, a face watching with an evil smile as I was eaten alive by the human fire.
Another scene, this time in the ocean. I was swimming through a coral reef, not needing oxygen or a suit. Everything is blue with tiny specks of random colors. An orange starfish, a red fish, a green sea weed patch. It was truly beautiful to experience. Then a whale larger than my house swam into view, out in the deep ocean. I wondered what would happen if I left the reef. Nothing ventured, nothing gained, my mother always said. So, I leapt from the edge and tried to catch up to the enormous whale. Must have been a Blue Whale, because that thing was very great and mighty. I finally caught hold of one of its fins, propelling myself towards its face. Bad idea! The Blue Whale opened it's disgusting mouth and dragged me into darkness.
I landed with an "oomf" in the hallway of my school. At once the classroom doors unbolted, and hundreds of teenage dead people came stumbling towards me. Their eyes were sunken and black, their clothes ripped. One came right up to me and grabbed my arm. I was immediately..and roughly transported outside. Even there it was dark!
"Bree, Bree, your safe now. Bree wake up! Damn it wake up!" A familiar voice said. I was picked up in strong, cold arms. A strong gust of wind blew against me, weaving it's way into ever tender spot on my body. Somehow, I had lost control of myself again. Everything still burned and ached, but I couldn't do anything except sit in pain. Whoever was holding me had saved me from Hunter, that much was plain. How did they know to burn him? I didn't care; my psychotic friend was dead and I was most likely going to get help. Maybe. Possibly. Hopefully...The quietness of the alley was replaced by noise from a city. My city. But...we hadn't even moved! A siren blared somewhere close by. Unable to bear the pain any longer, I slipped under again.
Whos the mystery person? Talk to me! Tell me what you think! annyythinggggg! :)
P.s. 2 or 3 more chapters and I can click the "complete" little button thing! Yay or nay?