Finding Finn

by SherlockMycroft

What happened after the events in "Finn the Human; Jake the Dog"? Prismo cut off the video after it showed Farmworld Finn flying towards Jake, who was transforming into the Lich. In this story, siblings Vienne and Susan set out to find Finn, who they believed was nothing but a hero. But what happens when Finn can't control the events of the present?

11. Chapter 11

((Announcement from the author:

Hey! If you're reading this, you probably read my story. And some of its ridiculously short chapters. THIS IS WHY I AM DOING SOMETHING.

All chapters are going to either become a one-shot, or greatly edited to be longer/make more sense.

Editing spree sneak-peek;

Original;

Years passed in icy swiftness for the boy. His mind only seemed to spiral downward from its precarious perch on the edge of insanity, until he couldn't remember anything but the never ending cold, and voices urging him to freeze the world. But, sometimes, if he took the crown off, he could almost remember something. A feeling of safety and faces, names that carefully eluded his grasp. Then, he would hear the voices, ever more insistent in their urges, and he forgot whatever silly thing he had been thinking.

New;

The years went by, cold and swift.

The boy's mind began to lose its grip, it's precarious perch on the slippery ledge of sanity faltering as he lost himself. He couldn't remember anything but the deep, aching chill,a whisper here and there giving him quiet urges to freeze everything.

"The ice... it's so beautiful..."

But sometimes, if he were to remove the crown, he could almost remember. Voices, safety, love, names that carefully eluded him-

"... show them all? The ice..."

Then the voices would return, ever more insistent in their urges.

"irrelevant... childish..."

Then he forgot whatever silly thing he had been thinking, and returned the crown to its rightful place on his head.

As you can see, big changes. (hopefully good ones)

Also, if you do want to see a sequel, I'm working on it now!

If you don't want a sequel, then don't read it, my friend!

So, you'll all meet Isold and Qiyana soon enough.

*gasps* Did I just use foreshadowing!? Suspense!? Dare I say CRAFTINESS?!

You'll all see soon enough ^-^

Expect this to be updated soon, and then you'll get to see what I've been doing with Finn.

Hope you like it!

-Myra

P.S. If you actually do want to see more, please review! A good review can mean the difference between working and procrastination xD))