Here is Chapter 10, sorry that it is short.
Chapter 10- Solitude (Sara)
The sun was setting as Sara wearily trudged through the side gate. She was hoping that she would be able to get through the garden and into the house unseen, but quickly realised from the brightly lit rooms that this would be impossible. So instead of going along the gravel path towards the large house, she turned to left instead, towards the woods- and her garden.
Four lines and 70 words- now that is what you call a short chapter- maybe it should have been an interlude?
