Hey everybody! So I finally decided to rewrite my story (again) and I've written up to chapter three, since I've been really busy. So I wanted to tell all of you that my first chapter will be up either tomorrow (Monday) or Tuesday. It will be posted as The White Wolf, rewritten.
I just wanted to know if any of you could help me to beta read my story, since it's full of grammar mistakes. Please, I really need a beta reader! Your help would be appreciated. I've made a lot of changes in the new story.
Here's the new summary: Bella and Kim had disappeared without a trace. A few weeks later, and the people of Forks and La Push had accepted that they were gone for good. When the pack came across what appeared to be a lone white wolf, they felt that it's trespassing and decided to destroy it in hopes of getting over Bella and Kim's disappearance. However, things turn out completely different than what they had hoped for…
Here's a sneak peek:
I walked aimlessly down the road until I spotted Embry. A strange feeling came over me as I saw him laughing with Quil and Paul, and I wasn't sure if that feeling was a good or bad thing. So I sucked it up and walked over to them. Paul spotted me first. "Hey, vamp girl," he said with a flirty wink. I laughed and said hi to him. I walked over and ruffled Quil's hair and gave Embry a hug. "Why does he get a hug?" Quil complained. I shook my head and, laughing, gave both Paul and Quil a hug. I sat down on the ground, leaning against Paul's legs. "So, did you guys hear the news?" Embry casually said. Quil looked up with interest. Paul shrugged and asked what it was. Embry gave me a sly grin as he said, "Bella's coming to the party tonight."
"No way," Quil said, gazing at me with wide eyes.
"Nice," Paul said with a smirk. "Jacob's going to flip."
Like it? Hate it? Please let me know about the beta!
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