Well, this is it guys. The last chapter. I'm sorry it took so long to be written. I was busy fighting my archenemy: school.
If you review, (and please do,) I want you to tell me specific things you liked and didn't like, so that I can improve for next time.
Yours in Pucktasticness,
May
Sabrina was uncomfortable. Something was touching her forehead. She opened her eyes and gave a little yell. Her yell woke up Puck, who was lying across from Sabrina on her bed, his fingers on her forehead. Both of them sat up, with Puck yelling, "What just happened?" while Sabrina cried, "Are we still in Ormitium?"
Granny, Jake, Red, Daphne, Veronica, Henry, and Mr. Canis stood at the side of the bed, where they had been waiting impatiently. Daphne flung her arms around Sabrina. "Never do that again!" she said to her big sister.
"How long have we been in Ormitium?" Sabrina demanded of the adults.
Granny frowned. "Lieblings, you were asleep for all of five minutes."
"What!" Puck said. "We were there for hours, or at least, like, forty-five minutes."
"That's mucho-crazio," Daphne said, crossing her arms.
Jake turned to Mr. Canis. "Is that how long it normally takes?"
Mr. Canis flipped through the pages of So You Want to be an Everafter? "It doesn't say anything about that in here."
"Most dreams last from five to twenty minutes," Red said quietly. "Maybe it was the same with Ormitium."
Everyone turned to her. "How did you know that?" Jake asked.
Red shrugged. "I've been reading some non-fiction stuff recently."
Veronica hugged her daughter. "So what did you two do in Ormitium?"
Puck and Sabrina glanced at each other.
"Nothing!"
Before anyone asks, I don't have anymore stories planned at the moment, but I'll still be on the site, and the little Sisters Grimm corner of my mind is still churning out ideas. So I'll see you around!