I apologize for the wait, but I believe that recently I have developed a better understanding of the fanfiction game and realize I need to make some serious changes with this story. However because I'm lazy I won't be messing with the chapters already here and focus on making the new ones better. I may do that eventually though. I will no longer write in first person as I know it only adds to the Mary-Sueness, or focus soley on Jen.