Chapter 11: Tirek part 2

Tirek Charged for Rage who did the same both had flares of energy around them as the hit the other. Rage was knocked back from Tirek's larger mass. It took a second but Rage got to his feet and readied to attack again. Rage dashed for his foe charging a ball of Chaos energy as he did so. Tirek charges back laughing as he did so. Right before the two collided Rage leaped in the air and released a rain of Chaos Spears on the large enemy.

Tirek just stood there and ate the energy just to have it shock him from the inside. This move however took a lot of energy since he had to use a Chaos powered jump to leap high enough. "You know Tirek you put up quite the fight..." Rage pants

"I could say the same for you red pony. But alas you have exhausted your energy and I still have plenty!" he laughs back

"I have some more-" Rage begins but stops as he sees not only Twilight and her friends but his two brothers, Xage and Icezer in fields of energy by Tirek

"Yeah there going to be the first to feel my wrath!" Tirek laughs "After I am finished with you!" Tirek used his magic to grab Rage while he was still looking at his most beloved friends and family. "Now if you let me take the energy without struggle they can leave. If not... I can't make any promises..." he laughs opening his mouth. Soon Rage could not only feel his Chaos energy being taken but the Negative Energy being spiked from it... Rage knew he had one option... if he did not keep the Negative energy inside him Nazo would reform... Rage was let down weakened by the attack.

"Okay you have my Positive Chaos Energy..." Rage pants "But the Negative has to stay with me... or Nazo will reform... if it's not what you wanted then too bad. At lease you get to remake the world in your own image as you wished. And not have Nazo destroy it...now release my friends and family!" Rage says feeling ready to pass out...

"As you wish." Tirek says releasing them before Rage passes out... as he does so a purple flare of Dark Chaos energy engulfs him from keeping the Negative Chaos energy only he was.. changed. His color was darkened and he had dark gray markings all over his body. Finally two dark pruple stripes on his head and his mane was dark red with a even darker purple highlights. His eyes though closed turned a bright purple... though he saved his friends and brothers he lost his only means of true defense and secondly gave into darkness...

Rage slowly wakes up in the Library and he was alone... he stands up and looks at his hooves, "What have I let myself do?" he wonders before walking down the flight of stairs. On the main floor was Twilight, Applejack,Pinky Pie, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Rarity and Spike all looking at him,

"R-Rage what happened?" Rarity asks "You look so different!"

"I... gave Tirek my Chaos power and had to give in to the Dark Negative power just to keep Nazo from reforming..." Rage says his voice was cold like ice. "So in a way I am me but not really me..." he says sighing "I have failed you... and Equestria..."

"No Rage you did fine!" Twilight said "You may not have stopped Tirek but you did what you could. And it gave us enough time to use the Elements one last time to defeat him. Thank you Rage!"

"Okay but still... I cannot perform my duties without my Chaos powers... I am useless! I will not use the Darkness at all!" Rage says feeling anger building up inside from his choices.

"Rage don't be to hard on ya self" Applejack says

"Applejack's right darling." Rarity adds with a smile "You are still you!"

"But what would my brothers think of me? I am a monster!" Rage cries

"Rage..." a voice from behind him caused him to turn and see both Icezer and Xage as ponies it was Xage who spoke to him "We understand why you did what you did. You wanted to save us no matter what. So even if you are a monster we are still by your side as always!" Xage says with a smile

"And besides with friends like us Rage you'll find a way to get your Chaos powers back! It may just take some time!" Twilight says with enthusiasm

"I guess...you're right Twilight... in fact you all are right." Rage sighs still upset with himself for everything he let happen.

"Rage why don't you take it easy for a while?" Twilight asks him

"I don't know Twili..." Rage says "I feel like I need to help"

"nonsense!" Pinky Pie scream "You need the rest!" she pushes Rage back up the stairs with him stammering in protest the whole time and throwing him in bed before shutting the door.

"Are you sure Rage is okay Twilight Sparkle?" Icezer asks the violet pony

"I cannot say for sure... he has been through a lot... fighting Tirek... saving us, stopping the Negative Chaos beast known as Nazo twice in one day! I am worried greatly for him... I fear his depression may run to a very bad depth..." Twilight sighs looking to the skies of night. The stars shimmered brightly and it made Twilight tear up as Angel Island moved in the way. Soon she burst off and up to her room crying and tears running down her muzzle... She was absolutely devastated on what happened to Rage...her true love and husband. What would become of the hero now?

To be continued

Response to a set of review(s): Okay in Equestria Rage is a bit of a Gary Stu (I hope that's right). But that is due to the fact that his weaknesses being the endangerment of his family and closest friends is not a present without his brothers. And secondly he is naturally going to have large power since he is the guardian of Chaos. But his emotional flaws do exist as you saw in this chapter. So please take that into consideration on why Rage is so powerful in Equestria.