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Chapter 11: Alice's Horror!

Chapter 11

Alice's POV

Oh my goodness! What the hell is this painful throbbing? At that glare, it's absolutely irritating my head. Arhh! I feel like someone hit me in the head with a bat! This is absolutely horrendous!

Take it easy Alice. Maybe if you go back to sleep, it would help. The light shining in from the balcony is hurting my head. Maybe I could close it. That would stop the light from flooding in. Alright Alice, haul your bum off the bed and close those irritating curtains so that your head won't hurt so much. I told myself as I dragged myself off the bed. For someone as small as me, I feel as if I weigh two hundred pounds. And that is horrible!

Once the curtains were closed, I threw myself back under the covers and attempted to sleep off my throbbing headache. All of a sudden, there was a loud rap on the door and the door burst open.

"Rise and shine kiddy!" a cheerful voice boomed in the room as I covered my head with the pillow.

"Go away!" I grumbled and threw the extra pillow I had at the intruder causing him to boom out in laughter and my head to hurt worst.

"Get out of her room Emmett!" I heard a harsh whisper as another person entered my room. What was up with people coming into my room? Haven't they heard of privacy before?

Suddenly I felt two gigantic hands grabbing my shoulders lifting me easily out of bed. I cracked open my eyes and saw the huge grinning face of Emmett.

"Good morning little Alice! Rise and shine sunshine cause we are heading to the beach!" the irritating voice of Emmett rang in my ears.

"Shut up and get out of my room." I told him harshly as he laughed at me and dropped me on my bed.

"I'm going, I'm going." He said as he raised his hands in mock surrender.

"She's all yours to deal with Jasper! Just get her down on time man." Emmett said as he walked out of the room.

"Alice?" Jasper's concerned voice called out to me as I felt my bed dip under the weight of him as he sat down.

"Alice, are you feeling alright?" he asked as he placed a hand gently on my shoulder.

"Tell me you have something to stop this hangover?" I groaned as I peeked at him from underneath the pillow. Quickly, he nodded and passed me two painkillers and a glass of water.

I quickly swallowed them and fell back to bed waiting for the painkillers to take effect.

"Tell Emmett I'll be down in a minute Jazz. I need some time alone." I told him as I pulled the blanket over my head and heard him walk out.

My head really was killing me literally! Also I don't feel like getting up although I said I will be down. The painkillers Jasper gave me sucks and it wasn't helping the massive headache I was having.

Not too long later, I heard the door creak open again.

"Emmett! I told you I'll be down soon!" I growled as I pulled the covers off my head to reveal a very surprised Rosalie.

"Rosalie!" I squeaked as she walked closer to me.

"How is your hangover coming along?" she asked softly as she sat beside me on the bed.

"Remind me again never to drink so much," I groaned as she smiled at me.

"Here. Eat this. It will help with your hangover." She said as she passed me a plate of red stuff.

"What is this?" I asked her as I took it from her.

"Eat it first before I tell you. And finish it all. It will help you." she said as I placed a bit of it in my mouth.

"What the hell!" I hissed at her, "It's spicy!" I told her as she rolled her eyes at me.

"If you want to get over your hangover, you should eat that." She told me simply. With a sigh, I swallowed the entire contents on the plate and glared at her.

"What the hell was that?" I asked her.

"Chopped up chili and a few extra ingredients." She said simply as she passed me a cup of coffee.

"What the hell! You fed me chili?" I murmured at her as I gulped down the scalding hot cup of coffee.

"It helps with hangovers. You will sweat out the alcohol." She said as she took the cup from me.

"Go take a cold bath. It will help too." She said as she walked towards the door.

"Rosalie!" I called out before she could leave.

"Thank you." I said as she nodded her head at me.

After she left, I laid on my bed for a few more extra minutes. I could feel the throbbing headache slowly subsiding. Her method did indeed work. Quickly, I stood up and walked to the bathroom and took a cold shower. By the time I came out, I was all dressed and ready to face the day!

When I made my way down the stairs, I found everyone having breakfast.

"Good morning everyone!" I chirped as I took a seat beside Jasper.

"Hey! You are fine!" Emmett shouted as he swept me up in a big bear hug.

"Alright since Tinkerbelle here is alright already, let's go to the beach people!" he shouted as he dashed up the stairs like a little kid.

"We will meet back in the living room at exactly an hour's time!" we heard his muffles shout coming from upstairs.

Slowly, one by one, people left to go upstairs to change. Just as I was about to make my way up the stairs, Jasper stopped me by grabbing onto my arm.

"Hey, are you really alright?" he asked concerned as he looked into my eyes causing me to chuckle at him.

"Yes, I'm fine. I had some really good weird remedy to get over a hangover." I said as I beamed at Rosalie as she walked behind Jasper to go upstairs. When I caught her eye, she gave me a small half-smile and nod before making her way up. When I turned my attention back to Jasper, I saw him smile and nodded his head as he started to walk me to my room.

"So, I'll see you later in the dining room?" he said as he stood outside my room door. I smiled and nodded at him causing him to break out in huge grin as he walked off to his room. Once he was in his room, I quickly ran to my wardrobe to pick out the perfect beachwear. There cannot be any fashion mishaps for Mary Alice Brandon!

Once I was dressed and ready, I grabbed my suntan lotion, sun hat and sun glasses and was about to leave the room when I saw a midnight blue bikini lying in one of the drawers I had. At that very moment, I suddenly remembered something.

"Bella!" I shouted as I dashed down the corridor to her room. When I reached her room, I knocked on it quickly tapping my feet impatiently. When her door opened, I quickly pushed my way inside and plopped flat on her bed.

"Bella wear this to the beach." I told her as I flung the blue bikini toward where I assumed Bella was. However, instead of hearing her soft voice, I heard a deep rumble coming from the occupant in the room.

"Sorry ma'am, but Miss Swan has shifted rooms. She is now residing in the room at the corner." He said as I shot up off the bed.

"Who the heck are you!" I shouted at him as I ran forward to grab the blue bikini causing him to chuckle.

"I am Embry the plumber. I am here to fix the pipe problem. I believe you are Miss Brandon right?" he said as he smiled at him.

"Embry Embry! I got it! I found the thing you were asking for!" a squeaky voice said as another person ran into the room with a tool in his hand. But in a Bella-like-moment, he tripped over thin air and fell face-flat on the ground at my feet causing the guy Embry to break out in a deep loud chuckle.

"Seth Seth Seth! Seriously, be more careful! You can't keep falling on your face every time you see a lady!" he said as he picked the guy up easily and set him on his feet.

"Wha?" Seth mumbled as he shook his head in confusion. Once he saw me standing there in the room, he blushed and mumbled a continuous strand of apologies.

"Seth, where is it?" Embry asked him while he stood there looking sheepishly at his feet and blushing slightly.

"Seth, where is it?" Embry asked again when Seth didn't give him an answer. Yet again, Seth failed to answer or give any indication that he heard Embry.

"Seth!" Embry shouted as he smacked the back of his head. "Where is my tool?" he shouted as Seth blushed yet again and launched into a series of apologies as he passed the tool to Embry.

"Anyways, Miss Swan has shifted room to the room at the corner of this corridor. Seth can take you there." Embrytold me as he walked into the toilet again. "Have a nice day Miss Brandon!" he shouted with a backward wave.

"Now are you going to take me to Bella's room Seth?" I said turning to him as he stood in the corner staring at me mouth agape.

"Yes, yes of course! This way please Miss Brandon." He said squeaking as he led me out of the room. As we walked to Bella's room, I caught Seth sneaking a few glances at me.

"We…we are here Miss Brandon." He stuttered as he showed me to the door.

"Thank you Seth." I said politely and smiled at him causing him to blush as he turned and hurried down the corridor.

"Oh Seth!" I shouted causing him to spin around and almost lost his balance but managed to catch himself at the very last minute.

"You can call me Alice." I said winking at him causing him to blush deeper and ran away with a goofy smile on his face. What a cute guy. Without further ado, I knocked on Bella's door and she opened it almost instantly causing me to smile.

"Bella! What are you wearing to the beach?" I asked as I pushed her back into the room.

"Umm, this?" she asked in a confused tone while I surveyed her up and down. She wore a dark green pullover with some knee length pants. My mouth fell open in horror. It's ok Alice. Maybe she had something better below her clothes I thought to myself.

"What about below your clothes?" I asked her as she looked at me confusingly.

"My undergarments?" she said as I stepped back in horror.

"You are wearing that to swim and tan?" I gasped as she continued to stare at me like I was mad.

"I'm not swimming." She told me causing me to let out a loud gasp.

"Still! You can't wear that! Not appropriate Bella. I will forbid that kind of attire. Bella the sun is out and you need to bare some skin! Wear this!" I said in my no nonsense voice as I threw the blue bikini at her.

"I'll be right back and I don't want to hear any complains!" I told her as I ran out of the room. Fifteen minutes to the meeting time, there just wasn't enough time to give Bella a makeover! I needed some help. But who? I thought as I ran to Emmett's door.

"Emmett! Open the door! Big issue Emmett!" I shouted as I pounded at his door.

"What is the problem Tinkerbelle?" Emmett wretched the door open glancing right and left down checking the corridor as if looking for a mass murderer on the loose.

"There is not enough time!" I told him as he stared down at me.

"You are ready already." He said nodding at my attire causing me to frown.

"Not me doofus! Bella! There is not enough time for her so I'm going to go help her get ready while you guys go to the beach. I'll meet you there." I shouted at him as I turned to leave. At that exact moment, Rosalie walked out of her room looking like a supermodel.

"Oh yeah Rosalie too!" I added as I ran up to Rosalie.

"Rosalie! Big problem! Come with me!" I said as I grabbed her hand and dragged her to Bella's room. I didn't even give her time to respond.

Once we were safely in Bella's room, I dragged her to the closet and dug through Bella's clothes.

"Alice! What is wrong with you?" Rosalie stared at me as I continue to dig through Bella's wardrobe.

"Help me! Bella has nothing to nice to wear to the beach and I refuse to let her go in what she originally wanted to wear. It is a fashion disaster! I need to buy that girl more clothes and fast!" I said. But when Rosalie continued to stand there and not move. I turned to her and sighed.

"Please Rosalie. You are the only person I trust to help me out! I'll owe you one!" I told her as she sighed and shook her head at me before walking over and helping me to dig.

When I heard a throat clear, I turned and saw Bella standing awkwardly at the door of the wardrobe in the clothes I saw her earlier in.

"Bella! Where is the bikini I gave you?" I screeched at her as she blushed.

"Underneath." She muttered and I shook my head at her.

"Strip now girl. Those clothes got to go!" I told her as she blushed even harder.

"Come on Bella. What you have, Rosalie and I have it too. Maybe the size differs but I'm sure it doesn't matter. We are all girls!" I told her as Rosalie chuckled behind me.

"I'm serious Rose!" I glared at her as I continued digging through her wardrobe. At the corner, I saw a green sundress. Perfect! I thought as I pulled it out.

"Bella!" I said turning around looking at her standing awkwardly in the blue bikini I gave her.

"Oh my gosh! You look stunning! I knew blue would look great on your skin! Don't you think so Rosalie?" I said looking at Rosalie as she nodded.

"Now! Put on this green sundress and wait in front of the dressing table. We are going to do your hair!" I told her.

"I was thinking of doing it like that and like that." I told Rosalie as she nodded at me.

"Start on her first please, I'll go get the necessary stuff." I told her as I dashed out of the room and grabbed my bag and brought it over. When I reached, I saw Rosalie half done with Bella's hair.

"Here." I told her passing the pins and clips to Rosalie as she pinned up Bella's hair.

"All done!" Rosalie said softly as she placed the last clip onto Bella's head.

"Oh my gosh! Bella, you look so pretty!" I told her as I let her look at herself in the mirror.

"Oh gosh Rosalie! You are my lifesaver! I can't finish making over Bella if it wasn't for your help!" I told her hugging her as she awkwardly patted my back.

"Yeah sure no prob." She muttered pulling away from me, "We should probably start heading down to the beach. They are going to start wondering where we are." Together, the three of us made out way down to the beach.

When we reached, we saw the guys playing beach volleyball. Jasper and Jacob in one team and Edward and Emmett in the other. From the looks of it, Jasper and Jacob was winning and Emmett kept cussing under his breath.

"Go double E! Beat double J!" Emmett would shout every once in a while causing everyone to smile.

The sun was out and shining brightly. I could tell this was going to be a good day out in the sun. I learnt a lot about Rosalie today. She was not as cold as she seemed. She was nice. Just that she does not smile much. But when she truly smiled, she was truly beautiful. Now all I had to do was to bring out smiling Rosalie again.

Not only that, I need a new wardrobe for Bella. Her clothes are so… un-expensive and not in fashion! That cannot happen! Everyone that knows Mary Alice Brandon knows that she has stylish friends! From the looks of it, I have to personally educate young Bella on art of dressing up. Hopefully Rosalie can help me with that!

Watch out Bella, it is time for the Mary Alice Brandon to step in and give you a makeover. It is time for Barbie Bella to happen…


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