Chapter 11-
Skin
Authors Note:
The Twilight Series was not written by me. I'm using Stephanie Myer's characters while my original story ideas simmer. I always need to be writing something, =)
Playlist
Scarred- Combichrist
Sold Me-Seether
Skin- Assemblage 23
Demonoid Phenomenon-Rob Zombie
Edward's Point of View
I was lost to the writing haze after I took Bella home, Sunday. I'd forgotten what a high being Dominant could bring. My body ached to have her underneath me. I wanted to hear her gasp in pain, then moan from pleasure. Her submission added to my dominance rather than chipped away at it. I had submissives who left me drained after a session, craving sleep or some alone time to recharge. She still felt hesitant about bdsm, I saw in the way she reacted. What she experienced, she had liked, but I knew it'd take her time before she acknowledged that she wanted it. I didn't want to scare her into deciding s/m wasn't for her.
Victoria had been careful not to overwhelm me, when we first started. My first ever Domme had enjoyed using belts. When she realized how high my pain-threshold was, she was really, really pleased. She rewarded me with my first edge-play session, using two lethally sharp knives. Mistress Victoria had known how to use them, scratching my skin, yet never cutting into it. It hadn't become a serious interest, and I really only enjoyed it with her. The passion she had for knifeplay made me like it, more after I'd found out how wet it made her. She taught me what it was to surrender for pain. I had come close to subspace with her, but it wasn't until my second Domme, Jane, that I discovered what it was.
Jane was more sadist than Domme. She had helped me alter my Checklist, made safer after our first session together. Much as I had wanted to see her again, I deleted her number because... I really wasn't masochistic enough for her. No matter how deeply I wanted pain, she went beyond pain to levels of agony that I wasn't equipped to handle. Thinking back to our two sessions together always made me smile. My body was hard with arousal, remembering what it had been like to be on her bondage table. Jane had sounded more sadistic than she'd allow herself to be, but I hadn't known that at the time. The fear I'd felt wasn't something I wanted Bella to experience.
Jasper taught me to use the more primal side of my nature. I learned that the Darkness could scorch and burn rather than freeze. His energy felt like a whip cracking, solid, the air vibrating with his confidence, warm and pulsing and so very alive. Of all the Dominants, he made me feel most alive as I submitted. Victoria had craved control, Jane inflicted pain to sate her sadistic side, Jasper just enjoyed bdsm. He showed me that taking pain didn't have to happen intensely every time.
"Break time, nice," he said, sitting on the sofa chair. "Is it really break time, or am I interruptin'?"
"I'm done for tonight. What's up?"
"The pain session we're going to have this weekend. You still down?"
"Of course," I replied, feeling my desire for it spark to life. "What day?"
"You pick. You want Bella to be there, right?"
"I think our next session should be just between us. It's been a while since I've taken hard pain. She just saw our demonstration at Leah's, so..."
He nodded. "Good idea. How about tomorrow night, then?"
"That's not too soon for you?"
"I figure you'll have Bella here Friday into Saturday, maybe longer. We can't have a session while she's here. I don't want to wait until Monday."
"I don't, either. Tomorrow's fine by me."
"I'm going to look over some of the s/m stuff. Then I'm turnin' in. 'Night, E."
"G'night, man. Thanks for always checking."
Jasper made sure all of the equipment he'd be using was in top-notch condition. He liked doing it, having the alone time to plan out what he wanted from our session. I grabbed two books and laid down in bed. Words blurred as I stared at the pages.
The holidays were always busy. Jasper and I had chosen to use free time for writing rather than s/m play. September became October, November... Had it really been that long since I'd taken pain? In the past, I was lucky to make it a few weeks without craving it again. Jasper had helped me mature as a submissive. Bella had helped. Much as I wanted to include her in the scene, waiting until after the holidays felt like a better plan. It was the time to start new things. Provided we worked out as Dominant and submissive, January could be a good time to take our s/m play to a new level. Her pain threshold was much higher than I expected it to be. She didn't flinch easily, nor did she make harsh pain sounds... until I tried to make her. I had wanted to see if she could react to pain. The way she had moaned drifted through my head.
Thanksgiving would be fun if- The thought froze as reality descended. There was a good chance her father would shoot me. I went to get a drink, vividly remembering why he would want to take aim. It had been my eighteenth birthday, when my mother and brother came up with a 'plan' to help my bisexuality, and my interest in bdsm. One big misunderstanding later, a Pro-Domme and an escort had been called.
I put a pillow over my face, wanting to pull the memory out of my head. Neither of them had cared that it was a misunderstanding. They wanted to be paid. I had $200 in cash, which sent the vanilla escort into a fit. She stormed through the house, looking for the "bastard who booked her." I heard their eventual screaming at one another, Jake, because he really was a bastard, refused to pay her.
The Pro-Domme had been willing to negotiate. She heard my mother join in and finally warmed, studying me as a submissive rather than just a client. "Make me come in the next ten minutes," she patted the side of my face, "and I'll leave you with your $200." I hadn't heard a car pulling up to the house, or Charlie talking to Mom and Jake downstairs. When they opened my bedroom door, I had the Domme laying with her legs over my shoulder, my lips pressed against her inner thigh.
"Don't tell me that's your girlfriend."
"Just a friend," she said, after I knelt back and stood next to her. "My name's Kate, you can check my I.D."
I let her up, so, so glad that she hadn't asked me to fuck her. "She stopped by to help celebrate my birthday."
"And the money on your nightstand, there?"
"Left from when I cashed a pay-check. It's not for her."
"Are you-" Kate looked shocked. "Did you just accuse me of being a-"
"Get the other girl up here," the Chief said. "You're all really lucky I was in the area."
"It's holiday, donation time for Forks P.D. We haven't forgotten, Chief. Thank you for checking in on us yourself," my mother said.
"You," he said, having the escort come into the room. "Do you know this woman?"
"What if I do?" she asked, looking at the Domme.
"You don't," Kate sat, very lady-like on the bed. "I don't hang with people like you."
"Bitch, what does that even-"
"That's what it means. I don't do what you do."
"You think you're not a whore, just because you work for some high-end, fancy agency?"
"Eloquent. I don't work for any high-end escort agency," she replied calmly. "I'm just his friend."
"That answers that question. Take a minute," the Chief said, looking at Kate, then harder at me. "Say good-bye to your friend for the night. We're going downstairs to the living room." He paused at the doorway. "If you try to go out the window, I'll tase you."
Kate smiled at me, both of us quiet until we heard them get down the stairs. "What's your e-mail, if you feel like sharing it? I'd like to do an s/m session with you."
"How much do you ask for that?" I inquired, not really taking her offer seriously.
"I'm not sure yet. I have to see your Checklist first. We can negotiate from there." She smiled wickedly. "The more you can do, the better you are at doing it, the less I charge."
I gave her my e-mail address.
"If I get out of here without being arrested, I'll give you 30% off the first session."
"Not 50%? I just helped you not be arrested."
"To save yourself, too. I'm not even asking for gas money."
I handed her $80. "That could get you out of Washington."
"50% off," she smiled. "Later, sexy."
In the end, because I had been a minor less than a few hours ago, the Chief had let everyone go with a warning. The escort was warned not to enter Forks for work, unless it was legal work. Jake kept his mouth shut about Mom ordering the Pro-Domme, and she cleared him by throwing me on the grenade. I went along with it, only because Jake would have done a day in jail for Soliciting. He wasn't a minor. It was my last Free Pass from the Chief.
All it had accomplished was to make me appreciate female Dommes more. She and I hadn't ever met up, but I'd thought about calling more than once. I liked her yellow-gold hair, the pink punk stripes at the end, and her blue-gray eyes. When I saw that her specialty was electricity, my interest in her waned.
Charlie Swan couldn't know I was with Bella. He would tase me for looking at her, let alone knowing we did anything else together. While I wasn't really afraid of him, I didn't want him thinking badly of Bella. The holidays were stressful enough without adding to it. I did, however, look forward to sharing a hotel room with her. Charlie's place, so far as I remembered, was only large enough for him. The Cullen house, on the other hand, could fit a quarter of the town in an emergency situation. Perfect, I snorted, they'd keep the blue-bloods and 'useful people' together.
I picked up my phone and called without thinking.
"Hello, Sir," Bella answered, her voice already soft with submission.
"Hello, sexy. Are you free tomorrow night, after ten?"
"Yes, Sir. I was hoping you'd call."
"I said we'd meet up this weekend."
"Thank you for having me over, Sir," she said hesitantly.
"You're very welcome. Sorry to call yo u so late."
"It's only ten. I'm nocturnal, so... I've been writing."
"I did that all day." I grinned. "How's it going?"
"Really well. Thank you for asking, Sir."
"You don't need to be so formal." I reminded myself to watch for other ways I could help her relax. "I don't mind casual submission."
"Cool." She chuckled, "Thanks."
"You didn't like doing that?"
"I like it, Sir, but since you don't, I, uh-"
"I like it during sessions, Bella."
"Okay. I'll remember that, er, Sir."
I laughed. "I know you will. I'll let you get back to writing now."
"How did yours go?"
"Really well, thanks."
"Good. I'm glad for you."
She was sincere. I wanted her all over again. "I'll talk to you tomorrow to confirm, then I'll be there around ten to pick you up. Is ten okay?"
"Yes. Sure you don't want me to drive there? It's no problem."
"Nope. Let Rose have the car. Can you stay all weekend?"
"Absolutely, Sir."
"So sexy... I'll see you tomorrow, Bella."
"'Night, Sir. Thank you again."
I smiled, hanging up. That she couldn't stop being so polite was a part of sub frenzy. She didn't want to accidentally "offend" my Dominant side, so submission remained alert all the time for her. I had the lower back half of her body flushed bright red by the time I'd stopped. She had taken being spanked really well, though I was careful to keep all humiliation aspects out of the scene. After reading through her Checklist, I had seen glimpses of her curiosity, fears- She didn't mind the idea of being in a three-some, but she didn't want to be shared with other Doms or be made to watch me with another submissive. Unless it's Jasper, she had added before we left. That she had remembered... I planned to let her come a lot over the weekend.
I'd never had a submissive be so accepting of what Jasper and I did together. I liked Bella a lot more than I did any other sub because of it. With the intensity we already had in bed, the fact that I was her first-ever Dom, I was treading carefully.
Jasper's POV
My stomach was growling, I needed to change, and my cigarette supply was dangerously low. I had, however, finished another chapter. Four more and it would be time to contact Mike about moving things to the 'Get this published' phase. The room was ready for our pain session, I had done that before hunkering down in front of my computer again. Between Edward and Alice, my energy levels had been running on high for weeks. They were both powerful personalities.
"Hey, Alice." She called instead of writing back to my text.
"I thought we were going to try and be friends, too."
"I thought we became friends, the moment we said we'd try." Her silence made me smile. "Round one, again."
"Friends do friendly things together."
"Are you hungry?" I asked.
"Not really. Are you?"
"Nope. What about movies? Anything out you want to see?"
"I don't know. I usually just download stuff. You?"
"I'm a little behind on movies."
She laughed. "Alright, okay. You made your point. You're willing to do Friend-Only things. C'mon over, if you want to."
"Yeah? Are you sure, because-"
"I know you're 'Tease' voice. I want a re-match of last time."
"I think you liked it. You gave in so fast..."
"I'm willing to raise the stakes."
"To what?" I asked, getting into my truck. "I'll be there in half an hour, by the way."
"If I win, I get another night like the first. You doing anything I say."
"And if I win?"
"If you win... I'll have a friend stay over the next time you swing by. Male or female, you pick."
"Mind repeatin' that?"
Alice laughed, a sexy, feminine sound that made my skin prickle. "You heard me, cowboy."
"If you're not serious, I'm going to settle for a pain session. Nothing less."
"I'm serious." She laughed, sounding excited. "I've always wanted to have a three-some, but I couldn't find the right guy."
"To what?"
"Trust. I won't appreciate if you fuck my friend behind my back."
"Not my style," I reassured her. "You've already decided I'm going to win, have you?"
"Nope. If not this time, we can wager it another time. You'll want it more. I'm patient enough to wait. For that." I suddenly heard a buzzing sound.
"You play dirty."
"Don't you like that?"
"Fuck me. Yes."
"Can you hear this?" Alice turned one of her toys on, I knew what a vibrator sounded like. "The Rabbit is amazing. Thinking about having you inside of me... I'm wet already. Are you hard yet?"
"You'd like to know, wouldn't you?"
"I'll take that as a yes."
"You'll take it any way I want you to," I replied.
"Not before I make you beg, first. You started with me, last time. Not tonight." I was impressed that she could keep her voice steady and clear as she built toward orgasm.
"You going to come for me over the phone?"
"Get ready to use your imagination." Alice cried out, I could see her hips bucking into the air, holding as pleasure twisted through her. The way her hair spread across the pillow, her eyes a bright blue that burned. The scratches on my back and hand throbbed. "Fuck, Jasper!"
Part of her mental warfare, or had she really just came while thinking of me? I stared at my phone for a moment before putting it back into my pocket. She hadn't been faking it, her voice had sounded relaxed again.
"I'm walking to your front door. Come open it for me."
"I'll buzz you in. You have some catching up to do, once you get up here."
Author's End Note:
Happy holidays everyone!
A huge thanks to everyone who has added to me to their Lists! And thank you to everyone that rec's Switches on Twitter, personal blogs, websites, etc. I've noticed more and more people leaving reviews, and I wanted all of you to know that it really means a lot that you support Switches and Subs, because it's so, so much fun to write. ^_^.
Author's End Note 2:
If you want to read something else naughty & fun over the holiday break, come check out my ebook: Subfrenzy. It's available on Amazon: a realistic, sexy bdsm Romance. (It can be read on any device that supports the Free Kindle App.) If you've read it, come Like me on Facebook. Subfrenzy has it's own Facebook page now! =D
Jes-
I'm really enjoying writing Edward and Bella. I don't think she's going to be as dangerously submissive, but it's fun writing how... It feels that Edward's the end result and Bella's going to show how one can get to that point. Does that make sense?
I Love hearing that people can 'feel' what's going on in the Chapter. It makes me really happy. Thanks so much, Jes!
Sophdrea-
Really? The clothespins scene? Awesome! Thanks so much! Jasper's sexy, haha. I love male dominance, so long as they're not arrogant, over-puffed, condescending. Blargh. I wish I could find pictures that work with what I see in my head. Robert Pattinson, Jackson Rathbone, and especially Kristen Stewart... not really cooperative on that front. 'sigh.
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Jasper won't consider 'love' yet. I have the feeling he'd go running if Alice were to say that she's developing feelings for him. Just as I think Alice would disappear if Jasper were to admit that he Likes her. Complex, the two of them.
Thanks for All of your reviews, sophdrea. Much as you love reading the story, I love reading everything you have to say. =). Really, thanks so much!
Kelysuperficial-
Oh yes, 'intimate beyond the d/s.' I didn't want anyone to be impersonal. No, 'submit to me, then leave' type of scenes. Not sure about Jasper, but Edward's more into the long-lasting bonds. ^_^
Itlnbrt-
Thanks for All of your reviews! For Handcuff, especially! Wow! =D
Dereklover-
Hahaha, Jasper joins soon!
Analitica-
Thanks! =D. Pleasure and pain, so much fun to write!
Cbzoo-
I'm surprised by how much of a story Switches became, too. It was supposed to be something I wrote when Handcuff was lagging. And... now Handcuff's lagging because the images for this story keep burning. I don't even know how to begin getting Jasper and Bella together, sexually. Not sure if that's going to happen, though I'd like it to. We'll see, I guess. They're kind-of dancing around it now, but they could easily become friends rather than 'lovers.' Jasper's happy with Alice (and friends?) anyway... hahaha.
WitchyVampireGirl-
Cool name, if I haven't said it already! Thank you! "It makes an outsider feel special," thanks for that! =D
CCBTH-
Good point about flushing condoms! I'll keep that in mind for future chapters. Thanks!
For now, I think Alice is the distraction that Jasper needs to keep from thinking about Edward and what Bella might mean for E/J long-term. He's not a huge worrier, hahaha. I tried to have him think about Edward, what Edward means to him... and he decided to go and get cigarettes. Ah, well. The Session should bring some of that out. =).
Csp4-
Me too. If I didn't have the bdsm 'toys' already, I'd want the Dominant to have them already. Bella's uncomfortable with Edward paying because... she's quirky? Lol. Canon Bella and Canon Edward from the Twilight Saga. Getting better about it, I think, mostly because Edward's all "This is how it is... go with it." =P. He didn't do that in the books or the movies. Edward could have been a Lot more assertive. Ugh.
Pain, hmm. Not like slamming your hand in something or stubbing your toe. Hahaha. I'll write more about that in Chapter 11.
I don't know how aware of Bella Edward's going to be, especially because that's what got him into 'trouble' in the first place. Hahaha. I wouldn't want to provoke Jasper to greater violence in the mind frame he's in... or maybe I would? Muhaha.
Raven's twimom-
Thanks for reviewing at all, Raven! I like reading E/J, but... don't know how to write it yet. The story's just starting, I wasn't expecting a possible menage a trois to form with Jasper and Alice, but... here we are. Lol. Thanks for R+R'ing!
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There's so much repression going on between Edward and Jasper! Edward realizes it, a little. Jasper's blissfully unaware, or he pretends really well...
Mountainlioness13-
Alice is hot. I love, love her. She's so... manipulative, in a good way. So much fucking fun!
Latuacantante4him-
Nice, lolol. Tub reading, =P.
I'm hoping Edward and Bella are moving toward the Relationship-stage. It shouldn't be difficult to write, though I don't know which will be more dominant... their relationship or the bdsm play.
Vtweetymccn-
I tried to PM, but you've got it disabled again. Couldn't find you on Twitter, either. Sorry. Had to answer your questions here... but considering the Session hasn't really started yet, I don't think it'll be cheating for your bet. =).
Yeah, when Edward had the belt around Bella's throat, he was using the end part to cause pain.
Oh boy! The question you asked...
No, Bella will Not be giving Jasper a blowjob during the Session. Just because Jasper is Edward's Dominant, that doesn't mean he can order Bella to do anything he wnats. He most certainly can Not do that, your instincts were dead on. It would be like saying... because Edawrd takes the Dom role for Jasper, he's able to do things to Alice just because. ... guess that really doesn't apply because Alice isn't submissive, but all the same. That's a huge no-no.
The only way I could say that scenario would be possible... if Bella were Edward's slave, and only if the terms of her submission said that she wouldn't mind being used by Edward's Dom.
No clues for who the Domme is going to be for the J+_/Edward Scene. =P.
Everythingmusic1-
I want to write it! Had to get this Chapter out of the way first. Can't explain how Edward feels during the Session without a little backstory. Lol.
LuvinJazz-
Thank you! That's quite a compliment! ^_^
LilySmith-
Lily! There's a lot of repetition for bdsm. I don't want to (Star, Star, Star)- hate that, too, by the way- too much, but I don't want the story to get boring, you know? The belt is going to be a big part of Bella and submission, though, and I don't want it to be Lost... finding a median between repetitive/boring and developing the plot's been trickier than I thought. I love marks, too. Haha.
I Hate canon Bella. I'm not going to lie. I read the books, watched the movies, and while I love the actors and actresses... the characters annoy the ever-loving Fuck out of me. Bella's so placid! Ugh! And Edward... what the motherfuck. He's a fucking vampire. Victorian or not... come the fuck On! In 107+ years, it's believable that he's able to withstand from taking her blood And having sex with her? God, all the guilt! Psh! It makes me so frustrated, I want to write another six chapters just thinking about it. Lol.
Popola-
Bad when it comes to reviewing? Oh my Fuck, you blew me away! Wow!
Thanks for letting me know the story doesn't feel rushed to you. Trying not to 'snail's pace' it, but I don't want to skip details and have to add them later. Like the lack of piano, that one doesn't bother me so much. In this chapter, E+B have a conversation about a piano that isn't currently in their apartment. Lol. Who knew I'd need it?
It's actually easier for me to write Edward, followed by Jasper, before I write Bella's POV. Not sure why. I'm a submissive, but writing from the Dominant POV is easier? Go figure.
I'm eager for the E/B/J Scenes to happen, too, but they have to be Right. It felt like it would be cheating. I mean, it's only been two story days. Edward was fine with Jasper taking the Top role, but I don't think he'd be nearly as okay with Bella performing sexual favors for Jasper.
There's a lot that can change for the three of them. Is Bella going to move in? What does that mean for Rosalie? Where will Jasper go? Is he going to get with Alice? Who the fuck IS Alice, hahha. All I know about her, so far, is that she works at the club and hails from Mississippi. And she has friends. O.o. Not to mention, how will the three of them Work together? Will Alice join and make it four? Rosalie, five? Will they form a household/family? Is Jasper willing to become that emotionally involved with someone else, when he and Edward haven't taken that final step yet? Who knows. I haven't gotten to the jealousy/possessive aspects yet, though I'm sure there will be more than a few.
I have yet to read Master of the Universe. I've got so many stories that I need to R+R. The rest of 'Wide Awake,' 'The Red Line' is a Great bdsm story with Edward as a submissive. 'Clipped Wings and Inked Armor.' Mistyhaze420, in..bathrobe, MsKathy, ARenee... all great fanfic authors. ^_^.
Thank you for the amazing review. I hope you stop by again and leave more comments! Thanks so much again!
Rsher1111-
I don't know if Edward's going to 'thank' Jasper yet. Depends on how heavy the Session gets and where his mind goes...
And as for your question:
"Is that the way of bdsm... that regardless of sex, either person is willing to do anything sexually with the same sex or different partner?"
No, definitely not. Edward brought up a point a few chapters ago about what he noticed when it comes to bdsm. Male submissives who submit to Female Domme's tend to only be able to submit to female's. There's a lot of bisexuality, but it's an individual choice whether or not a Male or Female takes Top or Dom. For me, I'm bisexual, and I can't submit to a Female Domme. I mean, I CAN, but it wouldn't be the same and I'd hold a lot back, whereas with a Male Dominant, I can relax and just... be. When it comes to sex, I like both, though I'm the Dominant one in a Female-female relationship. I'm not willing to be Dominant in a Male-Female relationship, though. If I'm with a man... I like him to Be a man, you know? Hahaha.
For the sake of this story, I'm exploring sexuality and the difference in roles. =). I don't think Rosalie and Bella are bisexual. Rosalie likes submissive men whereas Bella likes them to be Dominant. Alice, Edward, and Jasper are bisexual, though Alice isn't into bdsm, specifically. She likes certain aspects of it, though, without resorting to Roles. Edward, after this chapter, seems fine with everyone. Male, female, Top or submissive, he doesn't care either way when it comes to bdsm... not sure about which he would prefer for sex. Jasper, I've no idea. Lol.
Jansails-
I have general feelings from Alice. She's going to be interesting. Dark. There's a lot under the surface for her, and I don't know how Jasper's going to help/hurt with that. I got a lot from her when she told Jasper, "I want you, damn you..." Lol. And I learned a lot about Jasper, too. He doesn't seem to want anyone else around, in a deep emotional way, yet now he's thinking about buying her a ring-tone, making her a friend. He's really, really good with repressing things.
Edward and Bella take steps toward the Relationship stage with every chapter I write. It just... happens. Lol. ^_^.
MACMONKEY-
Update here! I would have had it posted yesterday, but life-stuff was distracting and I didn't have the Thanks done yet. 'sigh.
LanaLee1-
Hey, Lana! Thanks for stopping by to review!
BetterInTime-
The youtube video link I posted really, really helped a lot. It made most of the J/A scene, and then the picture I found kept it going. =D.
I use the other Twilight characters as I need them. Victoria, for one. Chelsea, Caius, Ben, Angela, Jane. God, Jane. I love Jane. She would be So, so bad for me. Lol. Other characters keep sneaking in, lol. Not sure how many of them will be back, but I'm sure a few more will find their way into the story at some point. =D.
Seekerharmony-
Thanks!
Elara420-
I love writing EPOV. It's too easy, I think that's why I've been having Jasper and Bella 'write' so much. He starts talking and it's difficult to stop before giving too much information away. The Chapter should have stopped with EPOV, but Jasper spoke up and I'm glad because it would be another chapter yet before the Session started. O.o.
I felt really bad this story stood without updates for so long. Hopefully with the current Update schedule, I'm making up for it? Lol..
Purplearcher07-
Oh yeah. Jasper's got a Lot of pent-up frustration for things that Edward's done/not done. I'm a little worried about the space between the J/E/B Session and the Two Dominants and Edward submissive Scene. Two weeks is a long time to write. I don't really have anywhere to go after the big Session... but that's what I said after the club part ended. Lol. Bella hasn't even gone home yet... hahaha.
6-20-11: Chapter 5-
Thanks whomever you are! Good to see you back again? =P.
Angeljax-
So many people have said they're able to 'feel' things from the story. It never gets old. Ever. I worry about that a lot, writing the How's and Why's, but missing the emotional aspect. Or I worry that I have the emotions right, but the How they develop and the Why they're developing, I don't want to miss anything! It's slightly terrifying, updating, waiting to hear if I've been confusing. The story can be fixed, but that doesn't change the fact that _ people have already read the chapter as is. 'wince.
Iren4ikss-
I'll do my best to get Bella involved in the Session somehow. =). Thanks for reviewing!
Lunar Skky-
No problem! Thanks for commenting when you can! Picture prompts help a lot when I need new ideas/somewhere to go. The ribbon picture helped stave off potential days of Nothingness. That Rosalie thought to provoke Edward by having Bella wear it, and Bella arranged herself so nicely for Edward... all of that happened because Kristen Stewart is sexy and that picture was taken. I owe them so much. Real life people, and Stephanie Meyer, of course, because they gave me something to write. ^_^. I go ape-shit insane when I don't have anything to write about...
The real teacher-
No worries, I think it'd be super hot, too! Writing How is going to take a good number of Chapters, especially because I keep trying to have it happen... and then my characters shoot the idea down. Lol. I have great openings and then Bella changes her mind, Jasper becomes a gentleman. Efff
Rainekita-
Thank you! Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you've enjoyed Switches so much, and I hope to hear back from you in the future!
Secretly-eager-to-please077-
Oh boy, I know. I've no idea how deep Bella's submission goes. Past Edward, maybe, in a different way? It's probable. Submission, and Dominance, are definitely different for everyone. From the broken submissives to sadists, the ones who are 'barely there' during all Sessions, to the Masters and slaves out there. Regular Dominants doing Dominant things in different ways, submissives submitting in ways they feel are right... god, there's so much variety... and I've only got four people, give or take, with whom I can work with...