Into a Brand New World
Chapter 11: This...is Truly a Sad Day Indeed...
Disclaimer: Do not own Pokemon only the games, etc.
Review Replies Corner!
Ah! As you can see...! -I'm pushed down and Vincent comes up from behind-
Vincent: We're now approaching the 50 Reviews mark! -Screen suddenly turned to the right towards Mars-
Mars: Indeed we are! I also want to thank Blazing Eternal for giving Vincent the ability to kick Neptune's ass all the way to Mt. Coronet!
Everyone: -Nods-
Ah but anyway! Lets get the reviews done!
Vincent: This first one is from...Godly345! How ya doing man? Yes, this chapter was unexpected, and yes obviously he thought of doing it if well...he's doing it right now. And trust me Godly...killing him for harming Savannah-chan is MY job.
Lucas: This next one is actually from another...friend I guess. 8Tyedye8! And to be frank they're Aura Abilities not super...actually you can consider them that. And yes with the way Vincent Aura Blasted him, I'd be surprised if he had ANY left.
Barry: Alright! Stop hogging the spotlight! This next one is a...OC form...ugh...oh well. THANKS FOR THE OC CANDY LOVER!
Dawn: This one is from an anon reviewer! That's a first! But anyway I could but well...I want everyone to have a spotlight here! A Pokemon fanfic usually has a lot of characters right? BE's just recreating it!
Alyssa: Alright Ms. Albright! I understand but...could BE just add...like...one more or so? Just to help even it a bit?
Mars: Flametix? Quite an interesting name but I've seen...more interesting if not weirder...not in a bad way of course! But anyway thanks for the OC!
And so the tables have turned back to me! Teraunce! I'm glad you like the story! I'd rather not get rid of the poll chapters because well...I just like it the way it is. It gives me something to reflect upon so! Im keeping them up alright?
Garrett: What about me? Don't I get a review to read?
Vincent: Sorry kid, better luck next time.
Garrett: I'M NOT A KID! I'M AS OLD AS YOU!
Hey! You two! OH CRAP! -Ducks from incoming flying projectile-
Mars: Knock it off! HEY! -Narrowly sidesteps projectile-
ENOUGH! -Background turns black with thunder rumbling my voice deeper and older- You two will stop your petty squabble! I do not care if you are as old as one another I want you two to knock it off! If you don't...then may Kami have mercy on your souls! -Background and thunder ends-
Vincent & Garrett: Y-Y-Yessir!
But anyway! Back to the awesomeness at hand!
"...He may never be able to battle again." I heard a male voice say as my eyes fluttered to life.
"Quiet! He's waking up!" I heard a female...Savannah! My eyes adjusted to the harsh yet bright light of the room as I then frowned upon realization of where I was...I was in a hospital...in the bed. I tried to sit up but screamed out in harsh pain. My entire side, and my hands were in pain by whatever cause. I was then pushed down gently by Savannah. I then looked arond and then finally at my hands. They were bandaged up. I didn't DARE take them off.
"Vincent wasn't it? Your hands and side are burnt badly. They were caused by...whatever you did to stop that Neptune guy...you may not be able to battle at all again." The doctor said. The same voice that told the others the same thing. My entire WORLD came crashing down upon me. Not able to battle? Ever? Oh Kami...
"Vincent..." Savannah started but stopped. The others whom I looked to turned away their expressions the same. Even Barry wasn't his normal happy-go-lucky self. The doctor left and so did everyone else...leaving me there to rot...to die basically alone. No one to share my sorrow. Then I chuckled. It made me wonder...how was Neptune holding up if I did this much damage to myself? Heh...I hope I hurt the bastard good. Then...came the tears. Uncontrolled, fast, and hard. Just like normal. The reality of my life came crashing back together again. Knowing I may never be able to battle again...and still not knowing anything about how I had come here and for what purpose...this...totally sucks. I layed back down and I heard the door open. A nurse came in. She was wearing a normal...white dress I believe and was holding a tray of food. Come on don't tell me I have to be SPOONFED! She was in about her mid-twenties and she sat down in the chair next to me. She then began to speak her voice soft and almost melodic.
"How are you today?" She asked. Did she just TRULY ask that?
"Well...lets see...to summarize it all right now...it sucks so far." I said bluntly.
"Yeah...that much WAS pretty obvious." She said as she took off the lid to the tray. Then my mouth watered and my eyes opened wide. Steak, teriyaki rice, and some Coca-Cola with a small pudding cup on the side! Hahaha! This may not be so bad after all! She then put the tray on some silver...tray-device-thing! Some...TDT lets call it that! And put the utensils beside it after unwrapping them. Then...after I tried the nurse fed me herself. It was one of the most embarassing things ever done in my life...most likely. But...as you can see I couldn't do anything right now...this BLOWS! I checked the clock besides me and saw the time was 8:23 PM...time for bed I guess...seeing as I can't do anything else. I lay my head down on the pillow and closed my eyes sleep quickly overtaking me...either that or they had me under some anethesia.
Chapter 11 End!
Hello again my awesome reviewers and readers! So! As you can see Vincent is now in the hospital and can't battle well due to his little hand problem! Not much to say here really...but anyway all in all R&R and Read and Review!
Foreign Words Used in this Fanfic
German:
Gott: God
Verdammt: Dammit!
Arschloch: Asshole
Fraulein: Miss
Leiter: Leader
Japanese:
Kami: God
Chan: Female/Girl you like
OC Form
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance: For those who don't know it's what you look like
Personality: Again for what you battle style, likes, etc.
Type: Coordinator, Trainer, Elite Four, Champion, etc.
Hometown and Region: Region can be made up give me a description of it though.
Accomplishments: Competing in the Pokemon League Tournament, Grand Festival, you should get the point.
Goals: What your OC wants to accomplish.
Crush: Optional. Who does your OC like? Again optional.
Swimming Clothes: Optional
Party clothes: Optional.
Pokemon: Any pokemon from Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, or Sinnoh. Any made up pokemon from any other region tell me about it. Where does it live, how does it live, what does it eat, how does it sleep. If not created tell me when you captured, found, or hatched it. Tell the gender, if there is anything different like shiny or taller than most of its species, attacks, nicknames, names, species, and type are needed in any order. Nicknames are not needed but optional. I'll allow 1 legendary and 1 shiny per OC! It's okay if they're both.
Other: What ever else you want to tell me. Favorite food, color, drink, etc.
Have fun!
