Hey everybody! I want to get Caleb involved in this story but I need some ideas on how to get Caleb into the plot of this story. Also I'm going to skip stage one because I really don't know what to write. Anyway here is a list if the initiates:
Emily- Amity
John- Amity
Rose- Erudite
Christopher- Erudite
Albert- Erudite
Austin- Candor
Susan- Candor
Ashley- Candor
Bri- Candor
Tobias POV
"Today is Visiting day tomorrow you will start stage 2 of training. Remember: Don't get to attached to your old faction. You have five minutes to be in the Pit." Tris finishes telling the initiates. We leave for the Pit.
When we walk into see all the colors of different factions and then I see gray. I know for a fact the there isn't Abnegation, so that mean that Tris' parent must have came. This will be the first time that they'll see us together. What will they think of me? After I beat up Marcus like that. There's not only two people in gray but three people in gray. I pull Tris closer to me I won't let him her hurt. Ever. Again.
"Mom!" I hear Tris yell!
"Beatrice."
"Dad." I nod courtly.
"How are you?"
"I good. How are you?"
"I'm okay."
While Tris is having a polite conversation with her mom Marcus and her father are shooting daggers with the eyes. Lucky we aren't by the chasm right now or someone might be dead.
While I'm not paying attention Tris and her mom leave. Where'd they go?!
Tris POV
While Tobias is distracted my mom plus into a corner with no cameras.
"Beatrice I need you to listen to me. I might be moving back to Dauntless soon. Your father well he's been acting well how do I say this selfish." No no no. He can't be like Marcus.
"Selfish as in like Marcus?"
"Yes and no. It's not every night but almost every night. And one night Marcus came over. It was horrible."
"Why?"
"When you a Caleb left that's when and I don't know why." That shatters my heart. I'm the cause if her pain. I can't hold back my tears anymore. They fall just like when it rains.
"The only way I can move here though is Candor let me after the trial."
"I'll be there. I promise." All of a sudden I see Tobias running down the hall, I know he can't see us. He's probably freaking out because I didn't tell him where I was going.
"Four! Over here!" He see us and a flood of relief washed over him.
"I come on let's go to my apartment." Four and my mother followed me there.
time SKIp TiMe SkIp
"My name is Tobias Eaton. Ever since I was nine and my mother left Marcus would beat me then throw me into a closet. Sometimes I wouldn't get of the closet for a week or week with a piece of bread and a glass of water. Please don't judge me though." He pleads after he tells my mom almost everything.
"I knew who you were on Beatrice's Visiting Day. Your eyes give it away. Your eye are unforgettable." Tell me about it. Wow he told my mother everything, I so happy he trusts my mother.