"d..isgust..ing.."

"What the?" Kid angrily locked eyes with the shocked man. Lifted his hand, and shot him straight through the head. That idiot didn't even see it coming.

"Ha… you thought a wound like that could kill me? Im Death the Kid, son of Lord Death! I don't die from a measly wound like that!" The man fell back and hit the ground, unmoving. Kid grasped his wound, it was pretty bad, but nothing that would kill him.

"Agent Hui!"

"Don't worry, hes perfectly fine."

(what!") The mans hand twitched. No way, no, he couldn't be alive after a shot like that! it went straight through his head!

"Well that was unexpected. I underestimated you Kid." Agent Hui stood up.

"Tsubaki… get ready… it's our turn now."

"Agent Black star, what are you doing with these people? You belong back with us."

"Not anymore! I don't follow orders from anyone!" And with that he made his first attack slicing the man in the neck, but could only get a scratch, as Hui quickly retreated.

"Impressive. That's the first cut I've received in a while, little boy."

"My name is THE GREAT BLACKSTAR you son of a bitch!" And he charged at Hui. The man kid hat shot down, now fighting against Arrie, was struck in several places. The man at over powered Arrie and forced something into one of his wounds, but Arrie couldn't find it. He had felt it, but the pain was gone now. With a final blow, the he forced the man to the ground with a deadly blow. Meanwhile, Soul and Maka weren't having so much luck. Soul pushed her against the ground with his body, protecting her as the men shot all around. He was warm, and she felt safe under his strength. Suddenly the shooting ceased. Soul darted up to see the two Agents charging at him, and he rushed to stand, retreating back as the first Agent reached him, jumping straight over Maka. He eyed her, but quickly changed his focus to the man in front of him, Agent Finel.

"Agent Finel…"

"Hello Soul… What are you doing? Why have you disobeyed Kurori like this?" His voice asked, but his tone was ignorant.

"Because what he made me do was wrong! He used pain to force me to do something terrible!" His fists clenched in anger, reminding him of those horrible forced moments.

"Well, that's your own fault." Agent finel got out his weapon, a dual edged sword. Soul glared at him, this man didn't know about the corruption, and quite frankly, didn't care. "You may think you're fast, but can you escape my blade?" Finel held the blade pointed straight to his chest. Exactly out of nowhere;

WHAM! REVERSE MAKA CHOP! (without book version)

Maka's foot went straight up in-between the legs, kicking as hard as she could. The man's face purpled and scrunched into excruciating pain, speechless. He fell to the ground silently.

"Maka chop? is that your signature move now? … Well it works... i guess..." Soul admitted. But before she could reply the second agent was holding her above the ground by her own hair.

"You little wretch! You'll pay for that!" The man threw her to the ground, her body arched in pain. Soul began to move towards her, but his leg was grabbed by Finel , still on the ground. Soul flinched, Finel threw him across the store. He crashed into the glass, sending shards everywhere, and an alarm off. This guy was pissed… He wasn't letting soul anywhere near her.


"Impressive. But do you really think you can beat me little guy?" Hui smirked with overconfidence.

"…little guy? Did you just call me… a little guy?"

"What about it shrimp?" Blackstar's eyes instantly went into a fiery raging passion of death. Hui stared at him silently, like he was witnessing a mental breakdown. What was wrong with this kid?

"IM GONNA KILL YOU! RAAAAAAHHHHH!" Blackstar screamed and charged at the man in sword mode. He plunged the sword straight through the guy, but Agent Hui kicked him back. Was this guy immortal or something? Agent Hui was suddenly in front of blackstar, and received several slashes in a number of blows, knocking out his left arm. Blackstar clutched it as the man pointed the sword to his head, and fired. But Blackstar had moved the gun out of the way before he had even pulled the trigger, to his amazement.

"Alright, you're pretty good for a kid, I'll tell you that much. It's a shame I have to kill you!" Before the man could strike, Blackstar gave a good cut through one of his legs, sending him on his knees."Why you… ass!"

"Its called making a move when you have the chance, stupid!" Angrily the man began aiming at Blackstar, sending his bullets wherever he could go. Blackstar stopped precisely.

"Im right here, fatty!" And of course, he shot. Blackstar quickly dodged to reveal Hui had shot carelessly at the back of his own partner, who happened to be attacking Maka at the moment…

"Get off me!"

"I don't think so little…"

SPLATCH!

The man began to fall, and she quickly dodged out of the way. He fell to his knees, and grabbed her by the leg, pulling her towards him. Maka kicked him in the face, but that only made his grip even harder.

"Stop kicking me you wretch! Girls are supposed to be weak!"

"Well I don't want to be!" She punched him, sending his head straight up, blood flying. Wow… she did that? She smiled in pride.

"Haha!" Yet, it was too early. The man's face locked into Makas, sending a chill up her back.

"I was going to spare your life… but you've given me no choice."

"Oh yeah…? With what?" So Agent oso took out his weapon, which completely overshadowed Maka. Yes she was expecting something dangerous, but not like that! Oso held an enormous mallet, covered in sharp spikes, threatening to grind her into a pulp.

"THIS."

"oh…" Maka lost all the confidence she had.

Soul quickly sped to the side as Finel slashed through the glass, cutting the wall in two. This guy was freaking fast, and stronger than many opponents he had faced before. Soul would have to make a quick move with his own weapon, which he preferred not to use. The scythe…his arm changed ripping through the long sleeve shirt. Oh well, he never really liked sleeves anyway. He hid behind a near rack of clothes, as the man searched for him. Blood and sweat mixed, dripping down his face. It was only mild head damage, but it was beginning to agitate him now. He forced himself to ignore it, and abruptly saw his chance when the man was facing away. Soul rapidly sprinted at his target.

"Oso… you can't kill her, that's Kurori's girl, remember? Besides, you'll make a huge mess."

"Shut up Finel! She's pissed me off! She deserves it!" With that Oso lifted up his giant hammer, crushing her leg in his grip, cutting off circulation as her leg began to throb in pain. She scrambled to move, but it was no use. The hammer came down.


"You jackass, you made me hit my own partner!" Agent Hui was pissed.

"Maybe you should watch me more closely!" Blackstar didn't even move as Tsubaki's shuriken struck the man all the way through the heart, ripping him in half. Blackstar walked up to the man, shadowing over him, his shoes now covered in blood.

"Y-you've… won this round…"

"You're still alive!"

"I can't wait to fight you... for real next time… you better prepare yourself... Agent Blackstar." Hui suddenly teleported. Thats right... There was a technological chip inside all Kurori agents, so that if their wounds were too bad, their bodys would be teleported back to Kurori to be healed.

"Holy… Blackstar, kid, look!" Tsubaki shouted. The two fighters spun around directing their attention to:

Souls scythe clanged against the enormous mallet, caught between the spikes. They barely missed the top of his head, they were so long. Oso glowered at him furiously, and instead of retreating, slid it off of his scythe to his side. It slammed into Soul, breaking several ribs with a large CRACK that echoed around the room. At the same instant, Kid had shot the man in the back of the head fatally with one blow, and the man dropped, letting go of his hammer. Both Soul and the hammer went flying, and crashed to the wall, making the impact even worse. The hammer fell, revealing wounds that engulfed his back completely. It had left eight bloody holes in his flesh, blood gushing. Seeing his chance, Agent Finel ran to Soul, before anyone had the chance to move. Maka was still trapped in the man's grip, even dead, he hadn't let go of her. Her leg was beginning to turn purple, and she pulled at the grip. Finel stood above Soul… with a winning smirk. Blood was splattered across the wall, drenching the floor in the sunlight. It was only noon.

"You really are annoying, you stupid boy." Soul could only stare, but his vision was blurry. He couldn't move. He picked up soul by the neck, and pushed his back to the wall, he stuck something into his back, and Soul winced, refusing to show anymore pain. "Look at me you ass!" But he refused. Finel hit him across the face, and forced his head up to look at him. "Im not going to kill you… Kurori owns you anyway. You've run away, and now you need to come back home."

"Kurori… is not my home!" Souls scythe slashed straight up the mans front, breaking the mans jaw in the process. Finel fell to the ground, unconscious. Soul tried to walk, but couldn't get far… these wounds were really bad… Arrie was suddenly there with them, and he freed Maka from the mans grip. She and Arrie ran to Soul, who was beginning to collapse. Maka caught Soul in her arms, and tried to keep him up. She hugged him tightly, feeling her hands become wet with his blood, he was badly this time. She ignored the wet feeling, and cuddled her head into his chest. His hand slowly reached the back of her neck, embracing her as well. Arrie stared at the wound, as Tsubaki ran over to them. Blackstar stayed with Kid, while liz and patti helped him. Unfortunately, it wasnt the wound that was killing him. His store was now destroyed, leaving it completely unsymmetrical.

Im sorry about not updating, ive had conditioning every day, and on Wednesday (August 3) , one of my good friends died, leaving all of us in greif, and no time to write. It may be a few days before I can get myself around to writing again, her funeral was on Tuesday (August 9, 2011) and so ill be busy. She was a senior and had just registered for school. She crossed the double line and overcorrected, sending her car rolling into the cornfield. She died at the scene. There's no need for empathetic comments, I'm okay. but her family isn't. Please pray for her family if you can. thank you… and sorry.

OK, SRSLY, IVE BEEN TRYING TO UPDATE THIS FOR 8 DAYS NOW AND IT WONT LET ME, AND ITS MAKING ME SUPER ANGRY. SRSLY, IVE TRIED UPDATING OVER 100 TIMES ALREADY, AND IT WOULDNT F WORK! TT^TT. lo seinto. super.

Soharu.