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'I.. I'm sorry...' He watched her fall asleep and he turned to the hallway and begun to walk out. Reaching for the door handle he at the doorway and with once last glance at Sakura... he left.
He stopped in front of his bike, his eyes glaring with bloody red "Now... to deal with Orochimaru." Suddenly he felt a presence around him, he clenched his fists.
"Sasuke!" A voice hissed at him.
He turned at grinned with a slight of anger in his eye. "What the fuck do you want?Get out of here... before I kill you!"
P.S I've gotten a request from one of my readers asking me to put one of her own characters in the story... i approved so yeah i decided to so i still hope all of you like it! This one has a bit of... teasing
CHAPTER 11: Shadow
A young women came down from a nearby pine tree and give a small giggle as she brushed off the dirt and needles off her.
She had black hair that reached down to her ass. She smiled revealing her pearly white fangs, her eyes were yellow. She wore tight white jean pants with sandaled black high heels and a black leather jacket, wrapping around her nicely figured form.
"Sasuke, long time no see!" She growled.
"Thats more then i can say for you Shadow... What are you doing here?"
"Well i was hoping to see Gaara but i picked up your scent and decided to come a ... visit for a while. I watched you in there with that human. Who is she? That girl doesn't look like your type."
"That's none of your concern... so do me a favor and leave."
She stepped forward , towards him "Some on Sasuke, I want to know!"
Sasuke wrapped his hand around her throat, "I said, none of your concern, what don't you fucking understand?!"
She looked away and gripped his hand, pulling it away from her neck. "Sorry.. but I jut got excited Sasuke, no need to be mean."
"Do you have any Idea whats going on Shadow!!"
She turned her attention towards him, "Eh? What?"
He turned to sit on his motorbike, "Don't ask me, as Gaara. I have no time to waste on a little kid like you!" He snapped.
"Little kid! ...Little kid! Don't you dare call me little I'm only..." She stuck up her finger and begun to mumble to herself. "250 years old!"... (a/n... hehe OLDIE!!!)
Sasuke started his bike"I've had enough of you... oh and by the way. Touch that girl and I'll hunt you down and make your death slow and painful"
Shadow watched as he drove away from her.. "Hater."
She walked up to Sakura's house and grinned. She opened the door and walked into the living room, turning to the side; her eyes narrowed as she walked up to her.
She lifted a strand of her hair and smelled it. "Cherry... blossoms. Not a bad choice Sasuke..." She paused and looked at her arm. "Eh? Blood." Shadow raised her finger and dipped it in the blood resting on her arm. "Fresh." She laid the other on her neck. "No bite marks."
She licked the blood slowly off her finger then traced her body with her eyes. "Intresting human..." Shadow stood up and tilted her hip to the side, putting a finger to her chin; she reached down and revealed the skin on her neck and smiled. "Maybe... just a bite or so..." Her eyes turned bloody red.
(a/n no... shes not a lezbian... thats how vampires are... kinda of... OKAY WELL THE ONES IN MY STORY!)
Leaning down she brushed strands of hair out of the way, her fangs tracing along the collar bone, she was ready to take a bite when suddenly-
"What are you doing?" A voice asked from behind her.
She spun around; gasping she covered her mouth. "...G...Gaara!"
He narrowed his eyes. "Still as stupid as ever I see..."
"EH! How could you say that!"
"Easy... It's been around... 2 hundred years since you left and you haven't changed one bit."
"No!" She snapped, "I've changed I'm taller and skinner and look!" Shadow pointer to her hair. "It's black!!" Her eyes changed back to yellow.
"To me... you still haven't changed."
Her face saddened at Gaara's words. "You're to mean Gaara..."
"Is that so?" He took a step towards her, crossing his arms over his chest.
"You've changed quiet a bit Gaara..." She looked at him up and down and rose an eye brow. He has black tie ups and he wore a tight dark red t-shirt with black and white tribal designed over it that showed off the muscles in his arms and chest which complemented his white jeans. She tilted her head... ' I wonder what kind of underwear he wears' A blush creped up her face. 'Maybe none at all!'
He cleared his throat. "Are you done yet?"
"huh! Oh uh!" She shook her head then looked away. "Yeah..."
"Good, now didn't Sasuke tell you not to touch her?"
"Maybe..."
He walked up to her and looked down, gripping her chin so she could look him in the eye."Don't lie to me... I was watching the whole thing."
He leaned forwards and grinned.
She blushed they were centimeters apart, she could feel the his hot breath gently brush against her lips.
He gripped her chin even more, tilting her face to the side, he rose his other and in a flash second scrapped his finger along her cheek.
She stumbled back, "What the fuck was that for?!" She cried out.
Her cheek started to drip blood, she touched it and started at the blood on her finger and stuck it in her mouth.
"You lied to me..." He growled, "I hate when people lie to me."
She removed her finger "Yeah but still that really really hurts you ass hole! That was so uncalled for!"
He trailed his finger along the cut and watched as the skin regrouped.
He licked the blood off his own finger, she blushed deeply. "I hate you..."
"I hate you to.." He laughed and turned his back to her.
"Wait! Who's this girl!"
"Huh... oh uh, she's...private property so I'd do what Sasuke said and leave her alone. She's not food."
Shadow pouted "What makes her so special...!?"
"Jealous?"
"No... just angry because she gets so much attention!."
"... Idiot same thing."
"NO!"
"Yes!"
"NO!"
Gaara paused then smiled "...Yes!"
"NO!"
"Yes"
"GO TO HELL!!"
"You first!"
"IDIOT!"
"Whimp..."
"Pervert!"
Gaara grinned, "Is that what you think?"
Shadow glared at him "Hell yeah!"
He turned to her and with one swift movement Shadow found him behind her.
He wrapped his one arm across her shoulders and the other around her stomach. Locking her in place.
"I know you like it..."
"Eh!" Shadow blushed deeply, squirming under his grip, " Let go of me!"
"Humph." Gaara released her.
"Change of subject!... What is happening i don't get it!!"
He sighed... "Sakura is what you would call... special since the day she was born."
"Eh?"
"Yeah it all started-"
Sasuke frowned as he drifted in and out of the cars on the busy highway. He sped up not caring about the speed limit; the nearby drivers watched as this reckless teenager swerved past them.
"Damn it!" He looked ahead and saw there was a road block down the road, cars came to a stop and there was no way he was just going to sit there, Sasuke looked around and saw a somewhat 'ramp' made out of an flipped over car and a large semi supporting it that would carry him over the accident, he drove towards it, gripping on the handles he made a straight line for the flipped over car. He felt the wind through his air, brushing past his chest, lifting his jacket into the air as ran over the car. Sasuke turned his bike so the rear end was at the side and his tire pointing to it in mid air; he tried to slow it down.
He landed on his back wheel; pulling himself forwards he balanced himself on the two wheels. "Shit!" He slammed on his brakes and came to a screeching halt.
Firefighters were gathered around trying to put out a large fire on the highway. He looked around there was no way out. Sasuke bit his bottom lip and continued forwards, tilting his bike up on one wheel he leaned back while ducking behind his bike to protect him from the fire.
The men scattered out of his path. "HEY WHAT THE HELL YOU DOING!" one man screamed. He ignored it and put one foot down on a foot step attached to the bike and the other leg on the opposite one. He charged towards the fire.
Sakura woke up and looked around the empty living room. She stared at the floor and crossed her shoulder, holding herself as she bend her legs to the side; tears flooded down her saddened face. She got up and raced into her room, putting on a white tang top and black jean pants along with a navy blue jacket that stopped just below her breasts. She reached for her black boots and raced out the door. She then stopped, "Where would he be?" She gasped and reached for her cellphone dialing a taxi to come and get her.
A few minutes of waiting she flung the door open, "HIRASHI PARK NOW!"
The driver nodded and raced off towards the park.
Sasuke stopped in the middle of a grassy field. His back and arms were steaming from the heat that the fire possessed. He removed it and threw it to the side.
Nearby yellow eyes of evil stared right at him, they seemed to smiled at him, "Nice to see you again... Sasuke."
He turned and grinned, "Same goes for you."
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