the secret is OBVIOUSLY Madn(spoil) Comb(spoil)
Author: i'm tired of you
author uses anti-spoiler blast of ultimacy
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Author: okay, i can tell you the secret is Madne(spol) Comb(spol), great, it mutated, say powerful rpg attacks in your review to kill the spol and reveal the secret completely
i would like to thank ultimateTORINOR for pointing out an imbalance of focus on characters, thanks for noticing that ult
i will start my focus on some of the characters that need a little lime-light
Disclaimer: that was the first pre-chapter battle i've done, now where was i? oh yeah, yo i don't tdi FOO!
opens to zane and michael,doing a high risk-high reward rescue mission
Zane: ready michael
Michael: almost
he snaps a scope onto his rifle
Michael: okay NOW
he climbs up the tree he was standing behind and snipes the two guards at the entrance to a cult hall
Zane: go go go
Michael: negative
more guards come out and get sniped, then a few more guards come out then zane shoots at them
Zane: YAA-WHOA
zane gets shot with stun bullets and is being taken away
Michael: NO
michael snipes 2 of the 7 guards, then kalana jumps out of the shadows and kills the other 5 guards
Kalana: need a hand bro?
Zane: yes
kalana avoids some shots then cuts some of the cult members, she then takes zane's shotgun and shoots some more guards
Kalana: who do i save, who do i save
Zane: the guy in the leather cap
kalana drops zane's shotgun an runs in to save the guy in a leather cap
Zane: thanks, let's go
they leave and michael jumps down from his tree and runs away with them but the cult guards follow them
Zane: oh crap
suddenly emile jumps from the side and shoot down some of the cult guards, but not all of them
Emile: oh crap
the cult guards are suddenly stopped by the sight of the 5 deadly zombies
Cult Guard 1: oh my god
Cult Guard 2: FIRE
they get stopped on the first few fired bullets and the 5 witches/warlocks completely eliminate them
Nai: YOU OWE ME ONE KALANA
Kalana: sure, whatever
they leave and zane and michael return to the gunmen hall
meanwhile
Susan: so, the ethan guy is your brother
Athena: yeah
Susan: cool, hey marry
Marry: hey susan, hey athena, what's up
Athena: nothing, much, you
Marry: same
Athena: let's go
Marry: oh hey, susan
Susan: yeah?
Marry: i got you the potion
she pulls out a glowy dark red potion
Susan: thanks, i was thirsty anyway
she drinks it down, then her attack and defense magic mastery go up by 25%
Susan: cool, let's go then
Athena: sure
Marry: let's go
Susan: ONWARD
they run off to go train
meanwhile
Ethan: the depredation is soon
Cloaky: okay, i know what you're taking about but i don't know who
Ethan: the gates of the heavens shall open up, allowing me to eliminate the threat
Cloaky: okay........ good luck with that
meanwhile
Nai: attack
he sets the 5 elite zombies at positions then sounds an air-horn, which kalana gave to him to make them even, to startle the zombies and make them attack
Nai(in a dull tone): ha ha ha ha ha
nai levels twice from his zombies easily killing the level 70 monsters
Nai: ha
meanwhile
Bren: hmm
Nora(behind him): HIIII
Bren: WHOA
he falls out of the tree he was standing in
Nora: sorry
she takes one of his swords
Nora: CATCH ME IF YOU CAN
Bren: GET BACK HERE WITH MY SWORD
he draws his other sword and throws it at her, hoping to hit and kill her, but she grabs it and continues running
Bren: GET BACK HERE WITH MY SWORDS!!!!!!!!!!
Nora: YOU HAVE TO CATCH ME!!!!!!!!!!
suddenly a sword flies through and almost cuts her, but she used her ninja agility to narrowly avoid it, running on her knees for a short time, but is then blinded by a flash grenade
Ellie: give him his swords back
Tez: YEAH, NOZABA
Nora: fine
he gives bren his swords
Bren: THANK, YOU
Ellie: you are wild, we need to fix that
they interrogate her
Ellie: you are wild
she screws in a machine to the ground, then turns it on, making a light start spinning around on a rail(think about the converting machine thing they used on jet in that one episode of avatar t.l.a.)
Nora: owwww, my eyes
Ellie: sorry
she turns down the brightness
Nora:what do you what with me?
Ellie: fffffpshwahahaha, i forgot
Bren: me too
Tez: ME IS TEH THIRD
they release nora and leave
Ellie: bye
meanwhile
Arron: hey royal forgist
Royal Forgist: yes
Arron: what's my next assignment
Royal Forgist: the royal family has requested a shield with the royal symbol engraved on it
Arron: sure, i'll do it, what does it look like?
the royal forgist shows arron what the royal symbol
Arron: okay, i'll do it
he proceeds to make the shield
meanwhile
Cloaky: challenge time
he teleports them to a shoreline
Bren: cool, we're at the beach.........
he looks at the rocky cliff
Bren: .... of the fire nation capital
Cloaky: yes, thank you bren, the challenge is CHARGING INTO THE FLAMES
Tez: the challenge is on fire?
Cloaky: no, YOU will be charging into the flames of the fire nation
Ethan: so, first one there is the winner
Cloaky: yes
Ethan: lucky guess?
Cloaky: yeah
Ethan: cool
Cloaky: NOW, you can travel up the cliffside at ANY angle, then travel forward and onwards towards the fire lord's private chambers, then, the first person to open the door gets to fight the fire lord, if you beat him then you get a guaranteed 3 levels and an awesome avatar weapon that will match your class, there are multiple ways to have invincibility, one is defeat the fire-lord, two is be the first to the fire-lord's private bunker, the third way is to kill the most troops, we are free-for-all this time, aaaaaaaand GOOOO
they all run up the hill with some people forming party's
zane and michael's pov
Zane: alright, i'll be on the ground and you should be my-
Michael: sniper, i know, alright
zane watches michael climb the volcano wall
Zane(party chat): alright i'm moving in
zane charges using a "first strike" method with some soldiers being sniped by michael
ethan, bren, athena, susan, and marry's pov
Ethan: GO GO GO
Bren: affirmative
athena is blocking some fire with her shields
Athena: taking fire, need assistance
Susan: roger that
bren takes a fire nation soldier to the side and removes his arm-guards and cuts his arm
Bren: agent 5 report to me
Marry: moving out
she goes to where bren is
Marry: what is the situation
Bren: i need to take his chi
Marry: spirit syringe
she sticks the syringe in his arm and draws a glowing orange liquid
Bren: inject the chi in here
he folds back his arm guards and she inject the liquid
Bren gains: Fire Chi, Bren now has fire conjuring powers, Bren is now tied to fire powers as well as his own, Bren has unlocked:fire conjure tier
Bren: OW HOT HOT HOT
eventually the burning in the liquid settles
Bren: now how do i do this?
he twirls his master katana and the blade catches fire
Bren: cool
he gains control over his fire and reverts the attacks of some fire soldiers that ambushed him
Bren: this is awesome
all five of them proceed to sprint to the fire lords bunker
ellie, evie, tez, and nora's pov
Ellie: okay, right there is the royal palace, behind it is fire lords bunker
Evie: we should TOTALLY kill him
Ellie: there is NO way we could destroy a heavy, reinforced, metal door
Nora: CHARGE
they start running towards the side of the palace
emile pov
Emile: okay, i need to break out the big guns
he summons a gatling gun with 3 layers of barrels
Emile: okay, i got this good
he climbs up the volcano wall and starts annihilating the city, killing all of the remaining fire troops
Emile: i got this down
arron's pov
Arron: okay, running and hiding does NOT help me get there faster, WAIT
he starts digging through the ground
alister's pov
Alister: this is easy
he starts sprinting as gunfire rains down from above
Alister: WHOA
he throws up and aura shield
Alister: okay
nai's pov
Nai: alright, fast flying...
he summons some white mages, which he commands to throw him to the cliffside, which they do with a shield spell and then un-summons them to replace with black mages and specialists to blast away the rock
ethan, bren, athena, susan, and marry's pov
Ethan: okay we're here, i got the digging
he loads his M.P.5 with 2 explosion clips and starts blasting his way through the rock at super speed
tez's pov
Tez: AUGH
he melts his way down with a continuous fire spell that he just waves up and down
Tez: YAAAAAAAAAAGH
arron's pov
Arron: okay, i'm almost there
zane and michael's pov
Zane: GO GO GO, MOVE MOVE MOVE
Michael: okay, that is it
he jumps and starts flying, then picks up zane and takes him to the finish line
Zane: since when can you do that?
Michael: i'm a vampire
Zane: oh
michael flies as fast as he can, but right when they were about to hit the finish tape, arron reached up and grabbed it
Zane: aw, MAN
Michael: simultaneous door kick
Zane: sure
they pull out their weapons and simultaneously kick the door which surprisingly breaks it down, then they fire as fast as they can into the room, only to be blown back by fire
Zane: WHOA
Michael: AAAAHHHH
they regain their stances and continue firing and charging into room
boss battle begin
Fire Lord Ozai HP 2200
Zane uses poison shell
Fire Lord Ozai HP 2000
Fire Lord Ozai is Poisoned
Fire Lord Ozai HP 1950
Michael uses snakes sneak fire
Fire Lord Ozai HP 1550
Fire Lord Ozai's poison spreads a lot
Fire Lord Ozai's arm is dead
Fire Lord Ozai HP 1100
Fire Lord Ozai HP 800
Fire Lord Ozai uses fire blast
Zane HP 700
Michael HP 700
Zane uses explosive shell
Fire Lord Ozai Catches zane's shell
Fire Lord Ozai sets off shell
Fire Lord Ozai HP 400
Ethan has joined the battle
Bren has joined the battle
Athena has joined the battle
Susan has joined the battle
Marry has joined the battle
Marry uses "99 bottles"
Zane HP 1000
Michael HP 1000
Bren uses spirit surgeon's call
Fire Lord Ozai's chi has been taken
Bren gains Fire Lord Ozai's chi
Bren gains 150% fire conjuring mastery
Susan uses enemy barrier
Lord Ozai is trapped
Athena uses lightning storm
Lord Ozai HP 1
Zane uses firing squad
Zane uses combustion shell
Michael uses battery jacket
Lord Ozai HP -399
Lord Ozai dies
Ethan gains 3 levels
Bren gains 3 levels
Athena gains 3 levels
Susan gains 3 levels
Marry gains 3 levels
Zane gains 3 levels
Michael gains 3 levels
boss battle ends
Cloaky: AND THE WINNERS ARE EMILE ARRON BREN ETHAN ZANE MICHAEL ATHENA SUSAN AND MARRY, players, you gotta pick who gets the BOOT
later at the debate
Emile: i think it should be ellie
Ethan: i agree COMPLETELY
Bren: sure
Athena: i'm cool with it
Tez: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHS
Zane: well, uh.... yeah
later at the ceremony
Cloaky: players, i have 15 silver lives, but 16 players, one of you will not get one, that person gets blown to a million pieces, alright, so, ethan bren emile arron zane susan marry michael and athena claim you silver lives
the afore mentioned claim their silver lives
Cloaky: okay, that leaves 6 silver lives, alister
Alister: YES
he got shot in the legs so he just grabbed it with an aura beam and made it move him, since he was shot, spots in his muscle structure were empty
Cloaky: nai and kalana
Nai: ..... cool
Kalana: WOOH
Cloaky: 3 silver lives 4 players, tez
Tez: WOOHOO
Cloaky: the final life goes to.......................
evie and ellie look nervous, and ellie takes off her steel knuckles
Cloaky: .............. evie
Evie: YAY, but awwww
Ellie: evie, i want you to have these
she gives evie her steel knuckles
Evie: thank you, i'll cherish them always
Ellie: you should put them on
evie puts on the knuckles and her 4 amethyst rings go into the knuckles and turn them amethyst
ellie is taken to the turret of doom and is annihilated
Cloaky: bren, you don't need that fire
he takes away bren fire powers and gives then to nora
Cloaky: she could need them
later that night somewhere deep in the forest
Ethan: the depredation's final events shall commence
he shoots off his lower jaw then falls to the ground, almost dead
Ethan HP 1
well that is it, post a review that says what you think and an rpg attack to use against the spol
i will reveal that the secret is Madne(spol) Comb(spol)
hint for secret,edition 1: phase 1, 30 insane enemies killed, 10 parts
hint for secret,edition 2: insane power, kill head of police, shot in the brain from behind, bandaged up head
hint for secret,edition 2.5: avenging
hint for secret,edition 3: clown, danger sign, clown turned into a zombie, elevator, welder melted a hole in the ceiling of the elevator, grenade up through the hole, shot the support cable, climbed up the support cables, weird machine, absorbed the machine, never-ending seizure, shotgun shot into head of polices face, stabbed in the back with a sword, bandaged up chest
hint for secret,edition 3.5: apotheosis, improbability
hint for secret,edition 4: zombie clown, shot in the face with an assault rifle, face and head bandana, static noises when talking, shot in the face and head with a handgun, apotheosis
hint for secret,edition 4.5: depredation
hint for secret,edition 5: off with lower jaw
the levels, hp, exp, and classes
Ethan- lvl 52.99= magic gunslinger- MAX HP: 3000
Emile- lvl 90= veteran- MAX HP 5000
Athena- lvl 50.99= defendist/black assassin- MAX HP: 3000
Zane- lvl 49.89= heavy gunman- MAX HP: 1000
Tez- lvl 45.68= magi captain- MAX HP: 1000
Nai- lvl 47.95= lich- MAX HP: 1000
Greg- de-virtualized
Danny- de-virtualized
Samantha- de-virtualized
Evie- lvl 49.34= gray elite- MAX HP: 1000
Alister- lvl 48.46= aura lord- MAX HP: 1000
Michael- lvl 49.89= "outta sight" gunman- MAX HP: 1000
Alessia- de-virtualized
Nora- lvl 49.72= martial master- MAX HP: 1000
Arron- lvl 50.67= weapon-forgist- MAX HP: 1000
Bren- lvl 49.83= blade lord- MAX HP: 1000
Hao- de-virtualized
Ellie- de-virtualized
Kalana- lvl 49.17= grave raiser- MAX HP: 1000
Susan- lvl 46.82= white enforcer- MAX HP: 1000
Marry- lvl 46.83=chemist- MAX HP: 1000
Cynthia- de-virtualized
Ginny- de-virtualized
chapter 11 is through, i'm content for now, except for a certain possible oocing, but the quiet ones only talked to their friends