Hey guys, I am not going to continue this story, why? Because I have no fucking ideas for the story and I realized that I need to improve my writing.
Now some people will be saying 'nah, you are just too lazy to write something.' But believe me I have no ideas for the story and few of you people tried to help me ( IrishKing28, Dementia Jackson, xblackwingedangelx, even though I didn't use their ideas, thank you!) and to anyone who said things like 'You suck.' And 'you should discontinue this story' fuck you assholes! And I repeat to everybody who will review on any story, not only mine, this is a website where you can have fun by writing your own version of the story, so if you want to review on a story you should say constructive criticism or pointing errors or encouraging the writer of the story or giving ideas to the story, there is one reviewer who tried to discourage me but later apologized by saying sorry and pointing what she didn't like and what she liked and this reviewer is Glittery Sparkles ( a great guy or gal, I don't really care but what matters is she or he apologized and pointed my errors in a civilized way.) and of course there are some stories that need some bad reviews like (The Prayer Warriors: The Evil Gods Part One) the fucking writer of this story needs some fucking person to fuck some fucking sense into his fucking mind! He is offending Muslims, Buddhist and several other religions, saying that every other religion other that Christianity is a religion created by Satan ( he's nuts, right?) just go to all of his stories and review on his 'story'. (the story above he had one with the same name but deleted it because there was another thousand people telling him to delete the 'story' but he deleted it and made it again and in his profile he said he will be reposting his stories again and again so people will read his 'great stuff' and that he is the best author in the world, pathetic right?)
Again I repeat, thanks to everybody who reviewed in a good way from pointing my errors to just reviewing to tell me that he/she likes the story. If anyone who wants to continue this story or make some twists, just PM me and I will give you permission and if you want some ideas for the story again just ask for help.
To all who wants me to write more and not quit this site don't worry and not going to quit, actually I'm going to write a new one, with better grammar, more description and a better plot, it will be a multi mythology story.
With love Erebus of darkness.
Note: sorry for cussing a lot, well it's becoming a habit even for good things, that is the outcome of hanging out with punks, rockers and emos.