She floated down the aisle, her eyes focused on his. Tenten felt as though the aisle was a mile long, keeping her from him. Neji watched her come towards him, wanting to shout with happiness. After all these years, she was finally his, all his, no one else's. It made him want to smile! His eyes held a tenderness in them that was solely for her, a feeling she reciprocated exactly. Everyone in the audience smiled, watching the people they've known for years become happy. Tenten reached him and he held out his hand. She slipped her own into his.
I really don't like this one. It didn't turn out anything like I planned. But, if you liked it, I'm very glad. If you didn't it's fine, because I don't either.
Please review and tell me how to improve! Please, nearly 1000 people have read this story, and only 19 have reviewed. And some of them are from the same people. PLEASE review!!